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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: spvd
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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

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a big thanks for all ur likes and comments...

love u lots

varsha😊

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mahimaneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#124

~FLAVOUR OF LOVE~

PART-1

Jism paak aankhon mein bhar lu,
saans saans mein shamil kar lu,
is duniya mein jaan gawa,
tujhe us duniya mein hasil kar lu...

"ridzy please meri dairy de mujhe...you cant read it...this is personal yaar"...geet said trembling, running behind ridzy...fearing what if she read it all...

"nahi geet ab bohat hua...this time I wont leave you so easily...mujhe ab janana hi hai, ki iss diary mai aisa kya hai jo tu itna chupati hai...and for your kind information there is nothing personal between us"...and she dogged her away...again running in her college corridor among bunch of students...

Zindagi gawa kar bhi Jo zindagi mile
har khushi gawa kar bhi Jo ek khushi mile
wo maang lu tere liye...

geet panicked more...hearing ridzy reading her thoughts so loudly...

"nahi ridzy...please don't read it"....ridzy turned left side as geet was about to grab her...she hurriedly entered an empty class room...followed by geet...

Rooh se rooh ke darmiyaan,
ishq ke hain hazaaron jahan
ya khuda ya khuda mujhko dede agar ek jahan
to maang lu tere liye

"wow geet yeh tune likha hai...this so is beautiful"...ridzy said excited as she climbed few steps of the class room...leading herself to the end of it...she sat on the last bench...breathing heavily...

So sitam utha kar bhi Jo ek khushi mile
so jannate gawa kar bhi Jo ek jameen mile

wo maang lu tere liye...

geet had tears in her eyes...finding her most precious possession, being revealed to her best friend...she was standing beside first bench...looking down...she tried consuming the pain formed in her throat...choking her breath...as she re-lived each and every moment of writing it...

Tere sajde mein sir hai jhuka,
tu ibaadat hai tu hi duaa
maut ke baad bhi Jo mile bandagi ka sila,
wo maang lu tere liye

ridzy looked up...completely astonished with this revealation...going through lots of emotions...feeling scared yet surprised with her friends emotions...she tried capturing geet's expressions, as geet turned hiding her tears...facing her back to her best friend...who almost knew every small and big secrets of her life besides this...

Jism ja luta kar bhi Jo ek haasi mile
dil agar jala kar bhi Jo roshni mile
wo maang lu tere liye

ridzy gulped the lump forming in her throat...understanding what all this meant...getting the feel of what her best friend must have gone through...many questions popped in her mind...confusing her...yet she could not belived her best friend loved someone this much...as she knew without feelings nobody can write such heart wrenching words...

Her every emotion was so crystal clear in it...she wondered, may be a heart break...or the guy left her...betraying her badly...or is he even alive?...why she is so much in pain? why she disguised her pain for so long...ohh god was I blind...how could I not see the pain she is going through....she hurriedly got up...and almost ran climbing down the steps...tripping over, balancing herself...she reached for geet, who was standing holding the bench firmly for support...as the immense pain erupting her heart could have consumed her alive...

"kaun hai woh"

"geet maine pucha kaun hai woh..."

she jerked geet, holding her shoulder in complete rage...making geet face her...

geet's tear strickened face...just tore her heart apart...she took hold of her wrist...and dragged her out of the class room...geet was just following her looking down...scared of what will she answer her best friend now...she knew ridzy loved her more then herself...and now finding the truth she will be in more pain then geet herself...

ridzy lead her out of the college...pushing her on passenger's seat...she locked the door...and came on the drivers seat...fasting both her and geet's seat belt...she drove crazily towards there home...

Geet looked at ridzy's angered face...then sighed remembering all throughout the way...how she and ridtzy became best of friends...as both where from different family background...where ridzy being the rich and famous and belonged to a more liberal, broad minded family...and geet just a middle class girl next door, belonging to a conservative family from hoshiyarpur...who are now residing in delhi...

(flashback)

Both ridzy and geet where studying bachelor of architecture in shimla...since both where from delhi they became close friends right on there first meeting...when they were ragged by seniors...and ridzy came as an saviour for her...morally suppporting her to complete this task as they will be set free after this...that little gesture of ridzty helped geet to complete the task in hand...but still she cried throughout...

ridzy sighed after both completed the task...smiling...she hugged geet...patted her back...

"yaar kitna roti hai...ab bas bhi kar...hota hai"

then pulling out of the hug...cupping her face...smiling she wiped her tears...geet looked at her again with filled eyes with more salty pearls.

"ab bas ho gaya baba...aur kitna royegi"

"agar woh fir aa gaye toh"...she asked with fear...looking lot more innocent...

"kaun woh"...she asked confused...

"woh ladke jinhone hume gana gane ko kaha"

"geet yeh college hai...aur who bhi students hai...aise ragging hoti hai har kisike ke saath...ab aise dar mat...mai hu na tere saath"

"aur waise bhi aaj hamari hui hai...and woh bhi tujhe gana gaane kaha n maine dance kiya...jab hum agale saal hamare juniors ki karenge...tab dekhana mai kya kya karwaungi"...and she winked at her...to which geet just smiled a little...

"baby now wipe your tears...as we are delhi girls...aur hamari bhi koi reputation hoti hai yaar...and this is so great hum yaha all the way akele honge...complete freedom...chal celebrate karte hai"...and she dragged her towards the canteen...

(end of flashback)

Since then they became best of friends...ridzy being the rich one...she lived in her bunglow with all the servants at her service...and geet in hostel...but later ridzy convinced her family and geet's family to let geet stay with her...as she also stays alone...and both their daughters being best friend, both arnav gupta and mohinder handa agreed to it...since then both this girls where unseparable...ridzy always protected geet as her sister...as she always craved for one, being the only child...

geet got tears in her eyes remembering how ridzy protected her, loved her, pampered her all this 3 years of them being together...and now this was end of it...as within few days, their final result will be announced...and she will have to go back to her family, where she belonged...the thought of their separation tore her heart apart...giving immense pain...she choked with new formed tears again...

Then cursing herself to have wrote that diary some time back in the flow of her dreadful emotions...she didn't knew how will she face ridtzy questions now...then thinking..."kya jarurat thi iss diary ko saath le jane ki...ab dekho kya ho gaya...har baar ridtzy se chupaya hai tune iss diary ko...creating suspicion in her mind...now how will you face her"

her trance was broken when ridzy stopped the car right in infront of entrance with a sudden jerk...with which both geet and ridzy fell slightly in the front...ridzy came out...dragging geet with her...entering the main hall...she lead geet upstairs to her room...

entering her bedroom...ridzy pushed geet in...closing the door behind...geet gulped her saliva...fearing the outcome of all this...she was dumbfonded as she felt the diary thrown her way...

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hello gals...so finally i have updated part-1...

really thrilled to know your response for it...both ur suggestions and criticism are most welcomed...😛

since it is a different story...and at first it will be according to geet's point of view...so u will have to wait for maan to enter in it...please bear wid me for this...

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LOVE YA

VARSHA😳

Edited by mahimaneet - 13 years ago

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anyaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#125

Yaar di, Kya karte ho aap😳. OMG😲!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! In the prologue itslf u took my breath away. And ab frst part mei u totally hypnotised me😳. U knw, the title track of "TERE LIYE" has always been very close to my heart❤️. Whenever I listen to it, I alws end up wid tears in my eyes😭. Till nw, only GHSP and TERE LIYE had the ability to touch my core😳. And here the combination of both of them made me more vulnerable😭. And not only this, the concept of their frndshp was tooo beautiful. I am nw a days going through soo many emotions regarding my frndz in my life, tht aftr reading this I felt more connected to it😭. I was having tears remembering my frndz😭😭. And all over the combimation of all three things made me soo emotional. U knw my vision was blurred aftr readng it😊. Aur yeh to bas starting thi... Aage kya haal kroge aap😆?????? Di I literally bow down in front of u❤️. And in this rollercoaster of emotions, I culd'nt even express my happiness for coming first🤣. Soo Yeah, Yippie me frst on the most beautiful part... Sorry for the late commnt. Mere taraf se aapfe whole face pe sooo manyy kisses😃😳 Ummmahhh Varsh di. And a bone crushing huggy tooo🤗. Lov you sooo much Varsh di. Congo. Tnx for PM. Ap bas me chup😆.

-LUV Anyaa

Edited by 16anyaa.gurti - 13 years ago

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sdlife19

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Posted: 13 years ago

#126

just awesome dear..

the words in geet's diray were just amazing

i dont have words as m speechless here..

and ridzy and geet's frdship is just awesome..

will be really waiting for next to know tat does geet really love someone or it was her just painful emotions...

anyways i just loved the start

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mahimaneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: sdlife19
just awesome dear..

the words in geet's diray were just amazing

i dont have words as m speechless here..

and ridzy and geet's frdship is just awesome..

will be really waiting for next to know tat does geet really love someone or it was her just painful emotions...

anyways i just loved the start