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Posted: 13 years ago



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maansee


update to aaya nahi raat to kab kee beet gayee...



dear sorry...will update now...😳
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Originally posted by: Mehek25

Awesome part Hasini.

So cute and romantic
Waiting for next part as I am sure that will be dreamy too..😍..
Thanx for pm dear...



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Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum

That was sooo cute!

Maaneet alone for 1 week?
Fireworks are bound to happen 😆
Continue soon
Thanks for the PM



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Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome update

loved it



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Originally posted by: -dia-

sweet & cute update ...beautiful



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Posted: 13 years ago
simply cute n amazing

precap is wow...
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Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

simply cute n amazing

precap is wow...




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Posted: 13 years ago




Part 11
He immediately came to geet and took her into his embrace…..she held to him as if she never wants to leave him again….she doesn't know when she fallen immensely and irrevocably in love with him….her eyes broken into tears….she is weeping in his arms….holding him tightly….he is smoothly caressing her hair….consoling her….
Maan: Geet…please….if you cry like this…. I can't leave you alone… and your health is also not good…. Please don't cry…. I am going now will come tomorrow and see you… I promise… baby please….
He took her face in his palms…. Wiping her tears….
Geet: tomorrow?... No I can't wait… I want to be with you from now on…. I can't
She hugged him again tighly…..
Maan kissed her forehead……. Kissing away her tears……
Maan: Geet…..stop please for me…. I promise I will come all day….okay now stop crying baby….
He gave a small peck on her lips…..but still she continued…..
Maan: geeet...last warning….if you're not stopping then I have to do something….
He smirked….looking at her….her anger increases seeing him giving naughty smrik….
Geet: I am worried of leaving you… but you're warning me….. You're bad….very bad……
Saying this she was keeping on hitting his chest with her small fist…. He took her both the hands…. And pinned them above her head….
She was now lying down on the bed….
Maan: Didn't I say last warning…. So now you have to face it….
She looked at him in confusion…… he came very close to her…now he is top of her…. Putting a little weight on her petite form…as he is being careful of not hurting her….
Geet: Maan….mom will come…. Please….
Maan was nowhere in listening her….he was coming very closely to her…. There was only an inch gap between them…..
But suddenly there was knocking at the door….
Maan stood up pouting his lips making geet giggle and went to open the door…..
Rano: maan…here you go…
she gave him the glass of water…..
Maan: thanks aunty….
He looked at geet…. Who was giggling continuously….he felt happy seeing her smile…. That's all what he need…
Then sanjay came to their room…..
Sanjay: Rano there is been a problem….
Everyone looked at him confused…
Rano: what is it sanjay…?
Sanjay: My mother's condition is serious… doctors said it is very critical…. Mom wanted to see all of us…. She is in her last stage….but how we can go leaving geet in this condition….i really confused what to do… it may take 1 week…
Both rano and sanjay got worried….
Geet: dad… you go…. Grand ma needs you….and she also loves mom….i can't move so you both go….
Rano: but geet….you can't even walk…who will take care of you?...
Maan: I will take care of her aunty….
Both sanjay and rano looking at him baffled…
Rano: Maan…you?..But you have so many works and how can you manage…
Maan: don't worry aunty…. I can manage…. Please now only uncle said am a member of this family…so please….believe me…
Sanjay: No beta…we believe you…..but thought it would be a trouble for you….
Maan: No uncle no trouble at all….
Both rano and sanjay felt relief… they both have belief in geet and maan…so they packed their luggage and went to their destination…
Maan called up his dad to tell him the situation and he also informed that he will stay with geet for one week…. He also informed his mom and both accepted…..he contact adi to bring all his necessary things…
After completing all his work…He came to geet's room and saw her sleeping peacefully….. he went near her and sat beside her…. He was caressing her hair lovingly….
She opened her eyes….and gave a sweet smile to maan….
She sat next to him and kept her head on his shoulders…..
Geet: Maan….. What did you tell to your mom and dad?...
Maan: hmmm…… that I have to take care of my wife….
She looked at him shocked…..making a big O face…
Geet: WHAT?...
Maan: Yes….i told them already….
Geet: so what did they say?...did they say yes…? Or did they say no?...what tell me maan…
He put his fingers on her lips…
Maan: shhh……how many questions at a time…..
Geet: Maan tell me tell me……
He took his hands and caressed her cheek…. Making her calm with his touch….
Maan: Geet…..they said yes…. So don't worry…. No one will separate us….
Geet felt very happy…. She never imagined that she will get a better half like maan…. only girls with super luck will get husband like maan…she looked up and thanked her babaji for giving maan….
Maan also looked up along with geet…..
Maan: are you complaining to babaji about me?...
Geet: do you think that I always complaint to babaji….hmmm…
She gave an angry glare at him…. He made a baby face…nodding his head as no….
She turned her face the other side…. Maan smiled seeing her so cute….he hugged her from the side….giving a kiss in her cheeks…
Maan: oh my sweet cutie baby…. I love you so much…
She was still angry…..not facing him….he wondered…
Maan: geet…you won't talk with me?...
She shook her head…indicating no….
Maan: hmmm….thats a big problem….. why ?... can you tell me the reason…
He hugged her very tightly…..making her sit on his lap….
Geet: you said those three words to me….but I am not able to tell…until you give permission….
He smiled seeing her doing all new cute antics…
Maan: so my doll is waiting desperately to say those words to me…hmmm?
She nodded her head just like a cute baby….
Maan: ek minute….
Saying this he left her….. She was confused still not knowing what he is up to….
It was almost 15 minutes since maan left her alone…she started to get scared….she tried to call him…but no answer….it was dark outside…she was afraid of dark….she was getting all scary thoughts in her mind…she tried to get up ….but her legs were paining a lot…but she got the strength form babaji…and got up from the bed…she took the support of the wall and walked with slow steps…
But she was about to fell down as she lost her balance…then strong arms wrapped around her waist…Maan caught her in time….the moment she saw him….she hugged him so tightly…and started to cry…
Maan: Geet….it is okay… I am here now na….dont cry….
He made her sat on the bed…she started to beat him with her small fist…
Geet: where did you go?...why did you leave me?...
Maan was trying to escape from her beating…
Maan: Geet…stop please…am sorry…
Then he took her hands in his..Making a baby face…telling sorry to her….
Maan: sorry geet….please….
Geet: it is okay…but where did you go….
Maan: oh that is surprise….
Geet: oh surprise…what surprise maan?...
Her face started to glow when she heard the word surprise that to from maan…
Precap: Maan's surprise... should geet say those magical words?...😳



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