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Boogle.Schiz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: had2bu
Wow! You have an absolutely gripping style of writing. I was eager to read more as well as terrifed at the same time. The descriptions are haunting as well. Great job, wish I was so talented. Continue soon. Avi

Thank you so much, I'm glad you feel this way. I actually hate how I write, I just needed this closure on this and after finishing it off I'm going to give it a few days to stay then just take it off IF.

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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

part 2
interesting dear...
though somewhat tough...
cont soon dear...

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mechantefille

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Didn't read all of it - Boogle how do you manage to get so creepy - that was downright fabulous ya...🤗

Sorry been busy lately - so got late

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Boogle.Schiz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: mechantefille
Didn't read all of it - Boogle how do you manage to get so creepy - that was downright fabulous ya...🤗
Sorry been busy lately - so got late

😆 It's a natural thing, I was born creepy!
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Boogle.Schiz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

@Spvd and Geetsweet- Thank you :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Read it all. Again got a proof in what I always believe. After reading Vikram's side of story, his obsession and craving for her is understood. For someone who's kept away from everyone and is mistreated, and who's been alone all life and who's faced kindness from one person, it is natural for them to develop a liking towards that person. When that one person was also kept away from him, his interest and liking turned into obsession. Beautifully explained. However Geet dying was something I haven't expected. This story was gripping and gave me chills. Good one. Keep them coming :)

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Boogle.Schiz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Cloud9.
Read it all. Again got a proof in what I always believe. After reading Vikram's side of story, his obsession and craving for her is understood. For someone who's kept away from everyone and is mistreated, and who's been alone all life and who's faced kindness from one person, it is natural for them to develop a liking towards that person. When that one person was also kept away from him, his interest and liking turned into obsession. Beautifully explained. However Geet dying was something I haven't expected. This story was gripping and gave me chills. Good one. Keep them coming :)

Yeah, most stalkers or criminals do what they do because they can't stop themselves, not that its right but in the end they don't know what they're doing. Vikram just loves her, or thinks he does and he feels the only person who has ever been nice to him reciprocates his feelings...at the end of the day its a mental illness that one can't control. Thanks for reading!