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Posted: 13 years ago
Try harder Maan ! TRY HARDER !
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Posted: 13 years ago
Poor maan and geet suffering.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update

poor geet's suffering n maan watching geet's every performances
really liked maan's dad
great person
now maan'll see geet
precap seems interesting
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Posted: 13 years ago
😃😃

Originally posted by: mel420


😆 you really like maan don't ya😆😲 should I tell Pammi if your rich I am dure she won't mind so tell me pammi koi bohli rishta lehke aaye😆


hayee neki nd pooch pooch..
im ready...😆😆



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ruchs


Yup holidays hain' But i have to leave for work at 7 am'

Teaching kids in summer camp' Working almost 7-8 hours 7 days a week'

Abhi was practicing the calligraphy fonts that me has to teach them tomorrow!!!


wow Ms teacher huh cool
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tiakashyap

😃😃


hayee neki nd pooch pooch..
im ready...😆😆




🤣 poor geet pehle sameera and now you already to marry her maan😆 and you even brought cupid with ya😆
Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 14
Geet fell on the floor and started crying. But suddenly she stood up she decided to write her feelings in a song instead of crying like a baby. She grabbed a pen and paper and started writing.

There is something that I gotta say

It's disgusting how I love you
I can't take it, I should hate you
'Cause you're messing up my life
Gotta walk my talk, my fame
But I just want to touch your face, it's disgusting

She hated it how could she still love him, what was wrong with her. She always becomes so weak in front of him.

It's disgusting how you changed me
From a bandit to a baby
Think I might gotta change my name
If I'm gonna walk this walk of shame
Look at what you do to me, it's disgusting

My mind blinks like a traffic light
It's green and red and stop and go, changing all the time
And it makes me scared that I haven't left
And I'm still right here more, more, more or less

Chapter by chapter, I'm falling faster and faster
Becoming mental, the magic, it's so actachting, I panic, oh
Hit the eject button but it must be stuck, something's up
I'm drifting out right over the drink, baby

It's like she is going mental behind him.And here he is telling her he loves that is not helping she needs to prove him she has moved on. So he will leave her alone and won't fall back in his layed out trap. Where he decides what happens. Geet was feeling frustrated she made. She made some calls for the big show in front of Maan.

Pammi found out that Geet will be performing. She was furious yes that girl was rich now but still. Ever since she entered Maan's life Maan didn't give Pammi that much attention anymore she was changing her son and Pammi didn't like that. She had to do something so that it would be the end of Geet Handa for once and for all.

Someone knocked on Geet's door.She went to open it.

G:Wow you look so much like Maan. No you look Maan. How is that possible
D:You know what they say there are 7 people with the same face walking around.
(Or I am Maan's twin my sweet bhabi Dev thought)
G:Hmmm I see but you don't talk like him. Come I will learn you to talk and walk like Maan singh Khurana
D:Who is that
G:He is a man whit a huge huge ego a true dust danav

Dev texted Maan.

Dev:
Bhai bhahbi is calling you a dust danav

Maan:
Shut Up Dev and tell me why she was searching someone whom looks like me

D:Why do I have to act like Maan
G:Oh you don't have to act like Maan you have to be a better Maan

Dev:
Bhabi wants me to be a better you. Wait I already am. LOL

Maan:
WHAT. What do you mean.

G:Oh and don't forget you have to tell Maan only Maan I don't want the media to know that you are my new BF
D:WHAT
G:What, what. haan but no touching or coming close. Wo hak sirf Maan ka hain.
D:Eh why are doing this just make up with Maan guy
G:No never do as I say I am paying you na
D:Okay tell me what to do

Dev:
Bhai I have to play her BF. haan But I can t touch her

Maan:
Has she lost it.Come home when your done we need to discuss something

Dev:
Yes Bhai

G: Stop playing with your mobile and concetrate. I am going to sing a song and you entry will be when I sing these lines. She pointed at a piece of paper,

Dev did as geet said when they where done he went to maan. maan and Dev made there own plan. Raj walked in. he heard everything.

R:See Maan that's the problem when your a twin your so easy replaceble

Raj and Dev laughed

M:It's not funny she has gone mental
R:Maan doesn't she now your a twin
M:No dad I never told her and Dev was also for three years out of the country so she had no clue
R:Well good luck with the plan guys
M:Thanks dad

Geet was getting ready Ow she will prove Maan today that he is not that special and she can replace him when ever she wants. Pammi had her plan all set. Geet it will be the end of your singing days. She smirked.

The show started Geet started singing.

G:
Disrespect, that's all that you do to me
So messed up, the way that you're treatin' me
Brace yourself
There's something I want you to know
You should know

Geet looked at Maan while singing these lines. But there was something weird about Maan. She shook it off from her.

G:
Replaceable is one way of saying it
You've made your bed
Now you can lay in it
Cause one day soon
I'll have a brand new you (new you)

He's gonna walk like you
With that same anatomy
Talk like you
Except he knows how to be
Sweet and kind
Shouldn't be so hard to find

She walked around Maan and then the spotlight went on Geet's brand new Maan.Maan looked at the brand new maan and then at Geet. Totally blank. It made Geet angry why there was no emotion on his face.

G:
Does it make you mad
When you're thinking back to the starting line
Back when I was yours and you were mine
You took me for granted
So I found a brand new you
And when you see me around this time
Well I hope you see that I'm doing fine
It's never been better
Cause I found a brand new you
Since I found a brand new you

She walked towards her Brand new Maan. He was supposed the walke with her on stage but what he did next shocked her. He grabbed her hand and tugged her close. He strated dancing with her. Geet just followed his lead. She didn't want people to know something was worng. She wanted them to think it was a part of the act.The Dj turned on slow music. What the hell geet thought that wans't the music she was to sing on. Everyone started dancing. They where loving this new kind of performance. Maan moved closer to geet and whispered.

M:darling you tried to prove me your over me by making a clone of me
G:Maan
M:yes darling maan. Ow and btw Dev is my twin brother

Geet mentally smacked herself for being so dumb

G:Maan leave me
M:Geet darling will have to dance or else people will now something is wrong.
G:I hate you
M:I love you too baby
G:Maan I am not your puppet anymore. So leave me alone.
M:baby I am sorry to treat you like that.

Suddenly they heard claps. everybody love it. The media people started asking questions. Suddenly one press person asked something shocking.

P:Mis Geet we heard you are carring drugs.

All the media's attention went to Geet

G:No it's not true
P:Can you show us are bag. if your not lying
G:Yeah sure I prove it to you it's just gossip.

The press person opened the back and found the drugs and some more illigal pills.Everyone was shocked. pammi smirked.

P:What' s this we thought you where culturted a role model but you proved us wrong your a bad influence on today's youth

Tears flew from geet's eyes.

G;I am innocent
P:Oh really now your lying a shame

Maan couldn't take it anymore. it was hurting him seeing his Geet like this,

M:It's Mine I put it in her bag, So that no one would now that I am addicted. I never excepted you guys to check Geet's bag

Gee looked at Maan. She looked into Maan's eyes and knew he was lying.

Part 15
Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg me frst agn
kk credit goes to mel
...😆
kk let me dance first...




smart geet apni pain mai b song likh dala...😆😆
bt omg
maan ka duplicate bna rhi hai geet wo b maan ke bhai ko
frst time in my life im likng dev..😆😆
bt sada maan is smarter😉😉😉
bt ye kya hua last ye
hate pammi
bt maan 😃😃
agn wnt 2 say i lv him...😳😳😳


😆😆suprbbb updt...👏




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Edited by tiakashyap - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tiakashyap

omg me frst agn
kk credit goes to mel
...😆
kk let me dance first...




smart geet apni pain mai b sing likh dala...😆😆
bt omg
maan ka duplicate bna rhi hai geet wo b maan ke bhai ko
frst time in my life im likng dev..😆😆
bt sada maan is smarter😉😉😉
bt ye kya hua last ye
hate pammi
bt maan agn wnt 2 say i lv him...😳😳😳

😆😆suprbbb updt...👏




👏





😆 Sholly Maan is taken Dev chalega see Geet made him another Maan😆

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