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shweta

@sweety095

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#301

lovely update mel.damaka update.really luved it.uff i hate this sameera.mel why did u stop like this little more u could hv wrote about how maneet share their moment in rain

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#302

maan scold her then adi telling aboput sameera talk maan searchin poor geet😭

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its_me

@its_me

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#303

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#304

Sarah ordered SONOMAKTER1 called me ghandi sweets I took a shower😆 seemamary gave me a dhamki so here is the update.

Part 6
Maan rushed to the hospital.

M:Doctor doctor

The doctor came running.

D:yes Mr. khuranna kya huwa
M:Geet doc please look at her

The doctors took her inside the room. Meanwhile Maan got a text from aadi.

Aadi:
Did you find geet?

Maan:
Yes she is with me
you guys don't have to worry
she is in safe hands.

having send the message maan switched off his phone.

Maan's monologue
What's wrong with that girl what if something would have happened to her. How could she be so careless. But why do I feel so much pain. Well it's normal Maan anyone would. Maan came out off his thoughts when the doctor came.

D:Mr Khurana
M:Geet theek to hai na
D:Yes she is fine
M:Can I meet her
D:After a while. At the moment she is sleeping. She was completely drenched. She has got flue so you need to take care off her. She has to take complete bed rest and got you arrange a new dress so that the nurses can change her.
M:WHAT SHE IS STILL IN A WET DRESS
D:No we gave her something dry to wear. But if you get a dress for her. The nurses can change her and you can took her home.
M:Okay

Maan got a dress for her. After she was changed Maan took her to the car.They reached Geet's outhouse. he put her on the bed and went to the mansion. He went directly to his mom's room.

M:Ma
P:Yes Maan bolho
M:Mom I am going to stay in the outhouse tonight.
P:Why
M:Woh mom my Girlfriend is nothing feeling so well.
P:What you got a GF. It's your first righ Maan
M:Hmm
P:Finally that was getting time. So is it anything serious.
M:Eh No mom she just had flue
P:No silly your realationship
M:Eh I don't now mom
P:Fine I get it your still young you should look around. You shouldn' t tie yourself up yet. And BTW I have a girl in mind. But till that time you enjoy
M:Girl whom mom
P:Maan I said na for now you enjoy
M:Maan please I will choose the girl I want.
P:Of course beta. But now you go and have fun
M:Hmm

Maan went to geet. She was still sleeping. He sat next to her. he carresed her hair. His hand went on her head. Wow she was warm. He grabbed a wet tissue and put it on her head. After a while he trew it away. He fell her head. She was not that warm anymore. He started caressing her hair again. Silly girl, what if something even worse would have happened. Does she ever think. he thought.

He kept caressing her hair. Ow she looked so adorable. He gave a peck on her head. Maan fell a sleep caressing her hair. Geet woke up she. She looked around where was she. This was not her home. She looked next to her to see a sleeping Maan his hand was on her head. She sat up and pushed his hand away. Maan woke up.

M:Geet sweetheart you woke up
G:Where am I
M:Sweetheart this is my outhouse

What the hell was she doing here she tried to remember. All she remember that she fainted will crying. Then how did she come her and Maan called her his keep. She tried to stand up her blanket fell. She saw that she was wearing a different dress. Ohow Geet's anger raise en tears made there wait out. Maan saw Geet tears. he tried to wipe them away but geet stopped him.

M:Geet what happened darling why are you crying. Is your headaching.
G:Don't touch me with your dirty hands. How dare you take me to your room huh.
M:Geet min
G:Bas Maan I don't want to hear anything what you have to say I just want answers. You think I am that cheap that you took me to your house and I don't now what you did. My dress it's changed you saw me chi.

Geet closed her eyes while more tears flew from her eyes.Maan was shocked what she was thinking.

M:Geet what the hell how you think like that
G:Kyu you can call me you keep, your toy and think I am such a cheep girl but I can't think like that about you. Why maan does your ego hurt.

Maan closed his eyes and thought about geet's state last night to controle his anger.

M:Bas Geet I didn't change you the nurses did I found you at the beach unconsious so I took you to the hospital and you that how you think about me. And I never called you my keep got it.
G:Of course you didn't maan I am sorry

Maan smiled.

M:It's okay honey. Tell me have you lost it how could you act like that huh what if something would have happened.
G;Sorry

Geet stood up she was feeling dizzy. But she did her best to stand up straight she needed to get out. She hated how she loved him and how he didn't care.

M:Geet what the hell are you doing lay down. The doctor said you need complete bed rest.
G:Maan I am fine I need to go.

Maan grabbed her hand.

M:You are not going anywhere. Go sit on the bed I will get some breakfast.
G:No thank you I have to go I can't stay here.
M:Of course you can. You are my Girlfriend

Geet gave a sarcastic smile.

G;maan please leave me. Yes I admit I love you

Maan smiled hearing that sentence. he came close to her and gave a kiss on her head. Geet closed her eyes and tears made there way out.

G:But Maan I am not you GF anymore I can't be someone' s keep. I am sorry.

Maan looked at her shocked.

M:So you still don't believe me

Geet turned around and started walking away.

M:Fine just know that when Sameera asked me that question I was not listening I was to lost in that hug. Adi told me what sameera asked when you left. I didn't understand why you acted that way that's why I got angry.

Geet turned around.

G:Sach
M:No I am lying

Geet ran towards him and hugged him tight. He jerked her away.

M:Leave me geet. Go away.

Wah mel again kya timing hai. Eh hello greedy people I am not updating anymore. hello I've got a personal life to😡😆 And Ananya😭

Part 7

Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago

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371030

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#305

hey me first😊.

Edited by Banupriya - 13 years ago

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tia

@Tia-AFreeBird

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#306

arey wah aaj 3-3 updt ek saath kya baat hai mel.😃😃😃
😃
me thrd shit shit...
omg wt kind of mom she is
enjoy beta wt...😕😕😕 bhut advnc mom hai..😉😉😆😆
chlo mu toh clear hui
bt ye geet kitna roti hai uff..
lvd it...
nd ab 3 updt ek saath deke gayab nt hona
mera drty rvng abi bki hai..😈😈😈

Edited by tiakashyap - 13 years ago

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#307

Originally posted by: Banupriya
hey me first😊.

congo

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504887

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#308

I didnt get your last line? What that means?

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Tinker ;)

@TinkerBella

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#309

Originally posted by: mel420

haww you called me gandi well sach bhi hai I haven't take a shower yet so I am pretty gandi😆.
😲 hwww what abhi tak shower nahi li 😆😆 jao mel jaldi jaka lalo 🤣