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Posted: 13 years ago
see, isko bhi read karke comment karna hai
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

see, isko bhi read karke comment karna hai


then What are you waiting for chal lagcha kaam per
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Posted: 13 years ago
*Sara fuming in anger*
ek toh waise hi time ki "lag" rahi hai upar se meri cousin irritate karne se baaz nahi aa rahi, server down kar diya tha
i had written the comment, ab dubara likh rahi hu

Mel, tu chahati kya hai *phir se wohi list mat batiyo aur na hi koi new one*
Sara was oh-so right abot that "brij"

that previous punishment on HIM by me was defo not enough, time to meet the "devil" Sara again, "kabab mey haddi" mode is on rest
the song sequence was damn awesome, me was thinking to see this song on Maneet & you did it, so Sara is giving you a big beary hug 🤗
poor "anjali" AUNTY ... no worry when me & Nishu is here

do cont soon & do PM me
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

*Sara fuming in anger*
ek toh waise hi time ki "lag" rahi hai upar se meri cousin irritate karne se baaz nahi aa rahi, server down kar diya tha
i had written the comment, ab dubara likh rahi hu

Mel, tu chahati kya hai *phir se wohi list mat batiyo aur na hi koi new one*
Sara was oh-so right abot that "brij"

that previous punishment on HIM by me was defo not enough, time to meet the "devil" Sara again, "kabab mey haddi" mode is on rest
the song sequence was damn awesome, me was thinking to see this song on Maneet & you did it, so Sara is giving you a big beary hug 🤗
poor "anjali" AUNTY ... no worry when me & Nishu is here

do cont soon & do PM me


you now I always wanted to see that song on maneet too. Since I started writing deceived se. I was searching a place where I could but the song finally found it😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 26
Brij followed Anjali outside.

B:Where are you going
A:I just went outside to get some fresh air
B:Listen clear fully stay away from my sisters life
A:Whatever
B:I am warning you Anjali
A:Kyu what will you do huh. Remember Brij Handa Maan is only Mine

Brij lost the last patient he had. he raised his hand but stopped himself. telling him self he is stronger then that. But his hand was still in mid air. Anjal saw Maan and Geet coming outside.

A:Please Brij don't hit me again

She fell on Brij's feet. Brij was shocked.

B:Anjali stop your drama
A:Forgive me Brij. I love you
B:ANJALI S
G:Veerij

Brij looked behind he saw a shocked Geet and a fuming Maan. Anjali stood up and ran toward Geet.

A:Geet please save me I don't want to live with this monster anymore. Please Geet.
M:Brij what the hell is this.
B:You now nothing Maan if you would, you would been talking like that
M:Whatever Brij Anjali is coming with us.

Anjali smirked

B:No fine I will be nice to her
G:No veerij she is coming with us.

Geet grabbed Anjali by her hand. She was about the walk away with her when Brij's voice stopped her.

B:Geet don't you trust you veerij. Bas itna hi viswaah tah apne brij veerij pe.
M:Brij we saw everything with are on eyes
B:Did you see me hitting her Maan
M:No but
B:But what Maan i

Anajli didn't let Brij finish.

A:You want them to show you prove for your deed here is proof.

She pulled her pallu down she had burn marks on her collor bone. Geet let out a shriek. Maan gave brij a disguting look.

B:Geet trust me
G:Bas Veerij

Geet took Anjali with her. Brij was feeling frustrated what to do now he thought.That same night they took a flight back to Delhi. When they entered KM. Geet showed Anjali her room.

A:Thank you geet but what will we tell your parents
G:I have told them that you are staying with us cause I want to now you better.
A:Thank you
G:No need to thank me. I promise I will free you soon from Brij
A:But you now na what happens in are society
G:Don't worry main aur Maan hain tumare saath
A:Thank you

Geet left. Anjali smikred Haan geet Maan toh Hain and he is only mine darling.

Geet walked into her room. Maan was on the phone.


M:Hmm that's great. Alright thank you.

Geet came and hugged Maan from behind. Maan hung up.

M:Geet jaan kya huwa
G:Maan I am so worried about Anjali I can't believe veerij. He hated people like that.

Maan turned around.

M:I know Geet but somethings we become the person we hate the most.
G:Why did veerij have to be like dad
M:Matlab
G:Maan when I was young dad used to abuse mom a lot. But when we got older he was scared coz Brij would save mom always. Dad is also the one whom came with this stupid tradition. I can't believe veerij also believes in all this now.
M:Don't worry geet everthing will turn out fine. BTW Jaan I've got good news for you
G:Kya
M:You wanted to continue working right
G:Hmmm
M:I opened a office in Delhi for you
G:Sachi maan
M:Haan Geet You can work kal se
G:Thank you maan but the girls. Whom will take care of them.
M:Geet I planned are schedules like that, ke one of us will always be home.
G:Thank you Maan I love you.
M:Love you too Jaan.

Anjali heard everything. She was happy Maan would be home tomorrow and Geet would be at work. She smirked. But she fumed when she heard maan say Love you too Jaan. Well geet enjoy these moments soon he will be all mine.

The next morning geet woke up. She was getting ready to go to office. Geet was combing her hair when Maan came from behind and hugged her.

M:Will miss you jaan
G:I will miss you too Maan.
M:Hmmm. I am to most stupid husband in the whole world
G:Kyu Maan aise kya huwa
M:Yaar geet apni biwi ko office send kara hoon

Geet giggled.
Geet turned around.

G:Maan your are the sweetest most caring husband in the whole world.
M:Acha
G:Hmm bilkul

The both hugged each other and walked down stairs.Geet bid goodbye to the girls and went to office. At lunch time Ajali walked into Maan's study.Looking like the perfect bahu:


A:Maan

Maan turned around.

M:Yes Anjali sab theek toh hai
A:Yes Maan I just made lunch for myself so I thought let me also make for you.
M:Thank you.

Anjali put Maan and her plate on the table.Maan picked up the plates.

M:Anjali let's go downstairs and eat in he kitchen. Why don't you take this to the kitchen I will call the girls.

Anjali got angery girls girls girls she thought. Wanted some time alone but he only thinks about those stupid girls.

A:Theek hai Maan.

Everyone sat at the dinner table to have lunch. The girls finished there food very fast and went upstairs Maan and Anjali where finally alone. Anjali smirked. But then Maan' s mobile rang.

M:Hey jaan kaise ho
G:Missing you Maan.
M:I am missing you too

Anjali was fuming.

G:Maan did you have your lunch
M:Haan geet I was just eating that. Did you jaan
G:Haan I was also just eating.
M;So did you like your new office
G:No
M:No
G:Haan no I didn't like it I loved it maan

Maan smiled.

G:Acha Maan I will talk to you latter ow Maan how are the girls.
M:Theek hai don't worry about them
G:Okay bye maan
M:Bye jaan Love you
G:Love you too Maan.

Maan hung up and stood up.

M:Anjali I am going to the study if you need something tell me
A:iji

Maan left leaving a fuming Anjali behind.

Part 27


Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yay Me FIRST!!!

See see me was correct, Anjali is gadbad….😆

Grr how dare she cast her evil eyes on my dad!!!😡

Sara-Nishu, time for some ACTION!!!😆

Hmm Brij has become as saint???

Gosh Mel, why do the villains in your FF ultimately convert into saint???

First Evelien of Deceived , now this Brij…😕

It takes me a hard time to digest it…

Poor Maaneet unaware that they got such a big problem at home…😭

Maan's really turning to be very sweet…😳

Sending Geet to office and taking care of us (Me and Nishu) as well…😳

After all my Dad is the best!!!😉

Loved the update Mel…👏

ALL THE BEST for your exams sweety…😳

May you rock them!!!😳

Love you...😳
Edited by ruchs - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh a new twist...we need Sara on the case of Anjali with all her pets and dhamkis
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

oh a new twist...we need Sara on the case of Anjali with all her pets and dhamkis


ananya's got pets not sara😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update mel.thx for the sweet suprise.i never expected anjali to behave like this.brij is having such a golden heart.i feel sorry for suspecting him..poor anjali she doesnt know maneets love can face any thing.so anjalis lust is nothing
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome
oh God now new villan naye entry maar li
Anjali is such a dash
iss larki naye tu sari planning ki hui hai
i hope Maan & Geet doesnt fall in to her trap
Cont soon
Luv
TC
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