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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: valli22

nice part
u left in cliff
what will happepn now
both part was like seeing a romantic n thriller movie..




aww love u sweety for giving such a gud comment don't worry geet ko kuch nahin hoga...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Desigirls12




wow lovely action update...te way my maan saved hsi geet was superb lovely...geet and maan in action...i want that 2nd redwala bike, for my maan...why geet should get scared of that morons, wen her savior behind her always...i love te update so much...now my geet got bullet oh no...precap, geet in hospital...im waiting dear...




aww sweety i love d bullet bikes dr and d black one is my fav and my big bro is having dat...i love it..kya solid speed hai dil khush kar dethi hai...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful updates dear!!!👏

Haaye loved the romantic moment!😳

Though so sad that it got broken!!!😡

Lovely selection of bikes dear!!👏

Loved all of them!!😳

Loving this FF!!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update.. Loved the way they escaped.. I was getting scared I thought thy weren't gonna escape.. Finally the people from the village helped them.. But Geet got shot.. It's sad.. Precap I scary.. I hope she survives 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
OH NO
GEET GOT HIT BY THE BULLET WHILE SAVING MAAN

THE ACTION WAS GREAT
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part waiting 4 next
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Posted: 12 years ago
hope geet will be fine...
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Posted: 12 years ago




PART 18



Maan screamed with panic seeing d blood in his right hand and Geet was unconscious in his arms.Meera saw Geet's back and saw a bullet had pierced her waist ribs fm d back and blood was oozing continuously.Meera said,"Mr.Khurana..Geet ko jaldi se hospital leke jaana hoga...!!!"Maan nodded as he has become numb seeing d blood on his hands and lifted her in huis strong arms and walked towards d ranger's office where a doctor was summoned to treat her as she can't go to d doctor.










The doctor took d bullet fm her waist and Maan was helping d doctor and his face wrinkled with pain when he saw d doctor taking d bullet shell from her body.Doctor saw dis and said,"I told u dat u won't control dis thing when u see this part...!!!"Maan said,"It's ok doc mein apne Geet ke liye kuch bhi sehne ke liye tayaar hoon...!!!!"Doctor asked smiling,"Itna pyaar karte ho usse...i can see dat in ur eyes...!!!"Maan gave a smile and doc bandaged her waist and gave her d injection.












Doc & Maan went outside making her sleep in d guest house and ranger & Geet's friends came forward and asked abt her condition.Meera asked,"Doc.kaise hai ab tabiyat Geet ki???"Doctor said smiling,"Nothing to worry guys...bullet toh unke kamar mein ghusa tha meine nikaal diya hai aur she's in sedatives so she needs a lot rest so please aap mein se koi ek yahan ruk jaaye...!!!"Meera said,"Mein rahoongi Geet ke saath...!!!"But Maan declared dat he's gonna stay and doc somehow helped him stay with Geet.












Doc said,"It's ok miss...Mr.Khurana unke saath rahe to behtar hoga...aur waise bhi unhe pata Geet ke medicines ke baare mein...toh aap aaj raat unhe Geet ke saath rehne deejiye...!!!"Meera hesitated,"Lekin Mr.Khurana...ek ladka...aur woh bhi Geet ke saath...!!!"Doc said angrily,"Miss...aap ladka aisa sochti hai toh mein aapke liye bataadoon ki Miss Geet apne sub conscious stage mein Mr.Khurana ka naam le rahi thi...toh isiliye meine kaha ki woh rahe...!!!"Maan was amazed and racked his brains as when Geet was taking his name in sub-conscious stage...but he didn't stop himself noticing d mischievous wink giving him fm doc and going fm there.












Maan smiled seeing his mischievous wink and hid it immediately fm Meera and his friends.Maan went inside and sat beside Geet who was asleep peacefully.Maan held her soft milky white hand and couldn't stop himself recalling today's incident how she gave advice to him abt riding d bike and how he took her into consider blindly as if he's at her command.Maan kissed her hand softly and saw her angelic face which was serene with pale becoz of d pain.











Maan kissed her forehead and pecked her soft lips softly and he saw a small smile crept on her baby pink lush lips.Maan chuckled seeing how she recognises his touch and she snuggled closer holding his hand tightly but her wound scratched to her bed and she moaned in pain in her sleep.Maan was alarmed and asked,"Geet...r u alright...!!!!:Maan saw how much she was wrinkling her face in pain and moaning in pain and saw d restlessness and made her sleep to her right side as d bullet had pierced her left side waist.












Geet felt comfortable when she was slept towards him.Maan sat beside her and took her on him and made her to sleep on his chest and she snuggled closer inhaling her manly scent and a content smile crept on her lips.Maan also leaned to d bed wall and closed his eyes encircling his hands around her waist protectively.At midnight Geet whimpered for pain once again and d incident came into her mind when they were jumping d ditch and d thug's boss had shot d bullet to her.










Geet was scared and she whimpered and she shivered in her sleep which Maan sensed immediately who was awake when he heard her whimper.Maan whispered in her ear,"Geet...kuch nahin huva tujhe dekho...apne aapko mehsoos karo...!!!!!"Maan kept his palm on her curves can she feels d change becoz of d touch and Geet felt it.Geet moaned feeling his touch as she was in sedatives and was feeling all these in her sub-conscious stage.Maan brushed his ling fingers on her soft curves and he felt a current run down his spine and a pink tinge crept on her chubby cheeks.











Geet was blushing becoz of his touch and this thot made him so happy dat she too feels d same way like him.Geet frowned when he stopped d touch and he chuckled but he kept her palm on his rock chest and her soft fingers made him feel a current run down his spine once again.Maan resisted it and saw she was moving her fingers inside his vest slowly feeling his skin exploring his body.Maan felt shy for d first time feeling her fingers on his body and his eyes widened in shock.











Geet frowned feeling d barrier but when she felt his skin inside d vest then she calmed down and felt peace and dozed off immediately.Maan saw her caressing his skin and he felt so many desires to tower inside him and his devil tempted him to take her on that time but he saw her serene innocent face and dint proceed further instead he released himself fm her grip and went to sleep on d couch making her sleep comfortably giving his shirt to feel her as she was frowning feeling d lack of warmth in her sleep.












Geet felt peace having d shirt around her and she snuggled closer to it feeling peace inhaling his scent.Next morning sun crept on Maan's face as he slept near d window and Maan closed his palm feeling d heat and opened his eyes and saw Geet who was fast asleep clutching his shirt carefully.Maan got up and went towards d kitchen and opened d fridge and saw d egg there some vegetables and decided to make mushroom omlete.He took d 5-6 eggs and beaten it and collected d yolk and mixed it with rice flour,onion,green chillies which were chopped finely and put a pinch of pepper and salt and mixed d finely chopped mushroom and stirred it completely till d yolk and vegetables and spices mix well.











Then he was abt to pour it on pan then he heard d moan of pain and ran to d room where Geet was trying to get up to go towards washroom.She was holding d bed wall and trying to get up then Maan rushed towards her and held her tightly glaring at her.Geet asked cutely,"Aap aise ghoor Q rahe ho??????"Maan said angrily,"Mujhe bula nahin sakti thi kya...!!!Kahan jaana hai tumhe????"Geet said angrily,"Chodiye mujhe mein chal sakti hoon mujhe washroom jaana hai...!!!"Maan glared at her reluctance and lifted her in his strong arms and took her to d washroom.












Geet blushed furiously when she felt d brush of his fingers near her waist when he had lifted in his strong arms.Maan left on d ground inside d washroom and said angrily,"Don't lock d door..mein yahi hoon and will turning dat side understand...!!!"And went outside and stood near d doorway...Geet came utside holding d wall slowly and Maan held her immediately when d door was opened.Maan lifted her inside d strong arms and made her lie on d bed carefully and went inside d washroom and brought a towel and a bowl of warm water.












Geet was feeling reluctant and said feeling shy,"Mein karloongi holding d warm water bowl and taking d towel...!!!"Maan glared at her but left her for d privacy as he was nt prepared to give d sponge bath as he knew he's gonna cary away during dat process.Maan went towards d kitchen while Geet wiped herself from warm water and changed her dress which was kept by Maan and leaned to d bed wall feeling tired.Maan came back after making d Mushroom Omlette and kept d tray in front of Geet.












Geet's stomach growled when she smelt of d omlete and pounced it on immediately eating it in top speed.Maan chuckled at her childish behaviour when she was making all kind of faces relishing d omlete.Maan went to freshen up and came back when she was abt to get up to keep d tray.Maan shouted angrily,"Geet...!!!"For which she shivered and left d tray immediately feeling scared of his anger and Maan felt guilty for scaring her.Maan said compsing himself angrily,"Geet..jab meine kaha na ki uthana mat toh tum meri baat nahin maanogi kya...grrr...!!!"Geet pouted her lips cutely and said,"Maan mein aise nahin baith sakti..aur waise bhi jab bhi mujhe choti ya badi chote huyi hai toh mein aivanyi yahan nahin baiththi kaam karti hoon jitna ho sake aur raat ko so jaati hoon..aur haan aap chinta mat keejiye mein apne aapko chot nahin pahunchaane dongi..pakka...!!!"












Maan glared at her and lifted her in his strong arms and made her lie down on d bed and she frowned but a pink tinge had formed on her chubby cheeks feeling his naked hard frame with alluring eyes and d water dripping from his dense jet black hairs.Maan felt a current run down his spine when he felt her soft body rub to his naked frame but resisted it immediately.Geet drooled over his greek god body while Maan turned that side chuckling and heard d knock on d door.











Maan opened it and d rangers entered inside d room immediately and talked to Geet abt d accident.But Geet declared dat she was pushed fm d bus and she dint trip fm d bus and Maan also gave d witness...

Maan:Yahi hai wo dono inspector saab jisne Geet ko maarne ki koshish ki...!!!

He had showed his fingers to Rahul & Sonali.

Sonali saw Maan with shock and said immediately,"Maan..meine Geet ko Q maaroongi????"

Maan said immediately,"Uski kaaran tumhe hi bataana hoga...Q maarne ki koshish ki Geet ko...aur Rahul tum hi the na jisne Geet ko wahan dhakka diya tha bus se taaki woh bhooka sher ke saamne jaakar gire...!!!!"











Rahul was speechless and tried to convince Maan but Maan made Rahul to be arrested by d rangers...Sonali was also caught but she showed some fake witness and wiggled out of d problem immediately leaving Rahul and his cunning friends to suffer in jail.Geet saw Rahul glaring at her for as if he's gonna swallow her in one swift moment for making him arrested and Geet dint flinch seeing his glaring eyes.Meanwhile Geet saw her mother there and Rano hugged her tightly .Rano had came to know abt this fm Meera and had come there catching d first flight fm Delhi to Gujarat.










Amarnath was also worried hearing d news abt Maan getting lost in jungle and he also heard d news abt Geet's injure saving Maan.Amarnath had also came there taking d first flight fm Delhi and Gujarat and came there worried abt Maaneet.Rano saw Geet state and started crying while Amarnath entered d room and saw Rano there hugging Geet and Geet calling her as mom and stood stunned...





Precap-Now what happens next?????




Previous Part 17B-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2960394/karz-updated-pt-18-pg-76



Next Part 19-




Edited by geetsrir.maan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
fabulous dear maan taking care of geet was really aweee
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Posted: 12 years ago
update maan concern for geet and rahul arrated and amarnath saw rano geet



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