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Tyro

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

i am so in love with all the stories...all have a diff flavour...

i dont remember paheli n hamsafar though...🤔

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crazydream

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: 6th.Element
Yeah...I will post every single one of my story and more...

I promise...

Does that mean that you will continue your discontinued ff.

If so then pls pls pls do it. Wen i thot of reading those you removed it.

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Ratna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: 6th.Element

I'm reminded of when Sookie asked me a few weeks ago😆, What the hell is with Hot Chcolate?
And I thought I couldn't do a good job of explaining it like Geet had done that to Maan...I can only hope I can do justice to it, this time too...

Yeah...I will post every single one of my story and more...

I promise...

Thanks Hasini for the promise...will hold u to it 😊

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Ratna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: jyoti_l
i am so in love with all the stories...all have a diff flavour...

i dont remember paheli n hamsafar though...🤔

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Jyoti...u just missed 2...i missed a lot i see...no problem ...will wait for the day she writes them again 😊

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honeygrape

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Posted: 13 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: --Ratna--
Hi Purvi...u gals are planning to kill me i see 🤢...i have to ask...what hot choclate moments ?...u missed Mr and Mrs Iyer ...that was such a beautiful story...but dont worry it was never completed 😡 😆...yes i read Chandinis roof top...that was stopped at such a crucial point...me hoping she writes it sometime in the future 😊

😆 sorry about that...aah hot chocolate moments, i dont think i ll be able to explain that to you...you ll have to read it and find out or feel it dear... just wait for a few more updates n then you ll come to know about it...😊

yeah i couldnt read that one story..😭 loved chandini's , unfortunately she stopped writing them...😒

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honeygrape

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Posted: 13 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: 6th.Element

I'm reminded of when Sookie asked me a few weeks ago😆, What the hell is with Hot Chcolate?
And I thought I couldn't do a good job of explaining it like Geet had done that to Maan...I can only hope I can do justice to it, this time too...

Yeah...I will post every single one of my story and more...

I promise...

thank you hasini...😊 waiting eagerly to read them all

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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#167

part 5
wow that was awesome...
cont soon dear...

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Onir

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Posted: 13 years ago

#168

Oh! two updates... 😊

The Remains of the day : beautifully described... must say you really have your way with words the way you play with the character's thought processes takes me so much into the update... that once its done with I stil crave for the next...

So now her 10th floor becomes 29th... i wonder where are you planning to put him to stay at... so which floor is his penthouse gonna be now... 25th to... I'm also waiting to know how are you gonna describe the penthouse but i seriously hope you don't change it more... coz i was in love with that place the way you descibed it in the first version...😉

Last time round her day was just a gist... not much into it, but this version of it actually sounded so real... just as for a first time office goer - coming in contact with miles of info in a day... can't comment much on that as not a office goer... but now tid bits of it😆😆

Here too there was recollection of how she felt in his presence.

OH LAA LAA Here comes the famous " Blue" shirt😳😳 I see already a great big discussion has been on that... but seriously Oh he looks so damn breathtaking in that... just can't stop imagining about that😳😳😳

Her going over the day... so ... IDK no words to put it through... i just loved it... So less of the times in our busy lives do we really sitback to ponder about the day gone by...

her thoughts by pondering with patience, nervousness & eagerness... shows her vulnerable yet strongly emerging out of it... meaning from going over fron dev to finally closing on Maan's thoughts... aptly put by you as - something of him achieving lasting with whoever he'd expect her to be... 👏👏

The description of their first official meeting... he's delibrate avoidance yet that unresistable "pull" uff beautiful... they are gonna have so much more of this push - pull... looking forward to all those encounters...😍 also esply..how Dadi is gonna make him understand how to overcome the "pull" that update... was so good want to see the tubelight Maan... oh hwo I adore his embarrassment then...

Oh so now the Chat- Gym sitout is on the 37th floor ... you put it twenty floors up... you must be thinking I'm so damn fixated with these numbers... but can't help it read the whole FF few times ... & have made a visual picture of it... so when there are changes though very subtle they do make the picture a bit hazy... but at the same time makes it a challenge to view the whole scenario again from your POV as last time round there weren't many descriptions out there. This whole thing makes me want to rerad & crave for what's next in line...

loved it 👏👏 ... but will read the next 1 & comment soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: 6th.Element
Yeah, I was going for 61...

I don't want to give you all my reasoning behind it...but if you are by some fluke a math student, then you should know that 61 is a mersenne prime and a perfect number.

Ratna, If you have missed NYT, then you are just lucky you didn't read that version. And one tid-bit you might have missed from those threads is that I was a little obsessive with numbers then...I was pretty adamant about ending NYT on Update 113...😆 and no less or no more.

Not true. Ratna, if you had read that version, you would love both and I am sure you would be jumping inside like the rest of us to read what is coming.

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Onir

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Posted: 13 years ago

#170

There wil be Blood: sounds like a war cry...😆😆😆... but really as usual loved this one too...

"she reckoned as the apartment building transformed itself into everything upscale as she moved up the floors..." so this time round Meera told her where's the Gym... rather than last time where she found it by asking around... her desciption of the whole lifestyle... was subtly put forward...👏. So now even cousin turns to Maasi... many changes seen .. & that too these revealed much in the start...

Yash's finances ... & her thoughts on same as - " prices people payed for asthetic convenience in prime locations which acc. to her was prime for everyone & everything else except the person paying for it ..." 👏 great line... but little does she know soon she too will be in the same boat as him so as to stay close to certain someone😉

OOO!!!!!😳☺️... Maan's workout session... better not mention now... as you've alrady transported me by your words... to Maanland😍

"The grunts in the room grew louder to reveal a fight in his voice, sort of like the men who sought out physical conditioning at times of internal chaos to reign in their restrain & toughness.." she doesn't know that she is the main culprit for it😆😆... she is the 1 who is responsible for creating the chaos in him... Both in the same boat... pull they feel towards each other ... can't overcome their thoughts... loved this...👏

"Oh! shit ... indeed there were such fine beings on earth & she felt her catch in her throat..." anyone would experience the same if in her place & that too with such breathtaking sight... poor her😆😆 that to before knowing he is the same man who is in her thoughts from the very first time she met him... & whom she's trying to avoid thinking about...

also the accident... described... good one... his recognition of danger & her being lost in him...

"If need be walk all the way back to Toronto..." no no no dear not possible he is gonna be walking alongwith you out there... hai I'm even waiting for those parts...😍

The last paragraph... just took my heart away.👍🏼... so beautiful words & emotions out there... being aware of each other & nothing else...

"...it was again him her & everything else that weren't there between them..." ohhh beautiful... wanting more of these...

now eagerly waiting for his taking care of her... the " penthouse" description... dadi's reactions to her...also his reaction on knowing that she's married...

looking forward to the coming parts...😊

Edited by Onir - 13 years ago