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Posted: 12 years ago

Oh so you re-named it Mirage …. Hmmm I went & read it once again & found the title apt…. even the changes you made in his letter quite filled in for everything.

Mirage indeed… as all that she has been pinning & hoping for all these years has crumbled down leaving no trace of its existence with never a chance of its return.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Meera is a very good friend, indeed she's the one guiding & leading her & is always there for her.

I can't stop hating Dev….. he wrote a mail to disclose he's breaking up his relation with her. He wrote it on the same day of the karwa chauth. When he had already decided this then why did he give her a hope of coming to visit her?

Emailing about such a news is the most insensitive & ugly way. Email is a practised speech, where you control the emotions & thoughts poured out. Why couldn't he just face her while telling it… hate him.

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Posted: 12 years ago

I quite didn't understand some lines- you will do good & I'm sure that will overthrow the miserly expectations I have for you – both professionally and personally. Also – for all the love that has been lost between us….

And what was he conveying about the blood tests? Quite didn't get the meaning in all these.😕😕

P.S.: I see you've updated the next part... will be reading it now... actually when I saw that the earlier part was renamed I read it again & again had to comment on it...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 6th.Element

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GczToXCKjO0&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]


This soul music hardly needs an introduction...This is the theme for the next three updates. The updates are all at different tempos in narration and yet this transcending piece seems to find them all.

I just love this ... wanting to see how it will be a part of the next 3 updates...😍
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mitalee

What I am about to write may not be in favor of many readers here including the author and I do apologize for the same. :)

I have read the earlier version of NYT and fell in love with it. But I had started reading the original version of NYT from the part where Maan and Geet were already married.

While reading the new version of NYT, I am not able to connect or accept this Geet and Maan attraction. I guess it's merely because she is still married. I find her guilty for the unspoken and hidden pleasures that she seeks indirectly or directly with Maan. The fact that she left Dev way before he even wrote that email to her still leaves room for questioning. Isn't her decision to settle in NYC, a step away from Dev and moving on with her life?

I will always find Geet as much responsible for her broken marriage, as much as I find Dev. If there is no closure between Geet and Dev then is she on a rebound love with Maan?

If I had read the earlier updates in the original version of NYT I would have questioned the same, and I hope it's never too late to pen down your thoughts...

Now coming to your updates...

Whispers sure can say a lot of things, but you will only hear what you want to hear and sometimes you wish you didn't hear them at all...

And when you think about the circle of trust the only thing that comes to my mind is no-one is in side or no one is on the outside, it's just a circle, with out any boundaries. It all depends on Geet where she wants Maan to be... Maan has started to read into Geet's secrets and doesn't that make him part of the circle?

Once you start saving the tiniest memories of that person you know that your in love...

Close your eyes and everything will be alright, isn't that the easy way out?


Mitalee, its fair to express your thoughts, no issues. In fact, I could use more people like you.

Attraction...Do only unhappily married men/women experience attraction? If only feelings and thoughts were within anyone's will...
But, if she was acting on that attraction for him, then perhaps, you objections are justified.

If you want me to speak to that point about moving on, then is space and distance a factor to drift apart? I believe couples living under the same roof could go separate ways too. (As for as Dev and Geet go, may be they had always been separate ) A job in a new city was to find herself a professional identity.

Yes, she is responsible to some extent. Her guilt is unquestionable. But how much or how long is for her to decide

The circle that he drew is his conceived support system - her crutch, if Dev wouldn't be one to her. But tell me, do we always go back to our 'circle' for everything? I have known people who keep things even from their best friends. And for that, I agree that there are no boundaries, albeit the circle is always there, if only around your own self.

It all depends on Geet where she wants Maan to be... Maan has started to read into Geet's secrets and doesn't that make him part of the circle?

I think you placed the answer before the question. 😛

Surely, he doesn't ingest himself into her life, because he isn't certain, she sees him so. As he says, he is around...Somewhere along those blurred boundaries.

Once you start saving the tiniest memories of that person you know that your in love...

Knowing and acknowledging are two different things.

Close your eyes and everything will be alright, isn't that the easy way out?


You also have to fall asleep to be awakened. Sometimes its ok to run afar, as long as you plan to run back.

Edited by 6th.Element - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Liked pansieve and windows nd doors the most in recent ones!

Now why did Geet do that at the end I wish to know in coming updates.

Wonderful description!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh god this was so emotional...
Geet has to bear so much...
Maan is so supportive of geet...
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

I quite didn't understand some lines- you will do good & I'm sure that will overthrow the miserly expectations I have for you ' both professionally and personally. Also ' for all the love that has been lost between us'.

And what was he conveying about the blood tests? Quite didn't get the meaning in all these.😕😕


He says that she will excel in all facets of her life, even beyond the expectations he has for her.

No love lost between two people - Its an idiom. Saying there was never love between them to be lost in the first place.

Blood tests...he was only giving her some peace of mind about his wanton ways prior to their marriage.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: had2bu

She is lucky to have such people in her life.


Is he cloyingly understanding?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Oh my dear Lord! This part is so heart-wrenching...

I had thought that, as I've read the earlier version & know what's coming ( not in totality but at least a gist) I had felt it wouldn't have caused much pain on reading it... But you did it once again, this time around I'm feeling more pain for these two, especially Geet... how broken she is feeling ... a felling of being in something like sinking sand ... just pulling her deep within it, with just no escape even if she puts in every ounce of her life in it.
How painful it must be for Maan to see her this way... but yet he's not judging her or just dismissing any of her demands... That's the reason she had asked whether he's in her NY or no? & also had asked about, that is she the only one desolate? (something on these lines) she feels that he's the one who is within her inner circle... even more then the people he felt were the ones in her circle of life... as Meera too failed to give her what she needed at the moment... trusting her & just being there for her inspite of all that she does in her impulsivity & insanity.
Maan did keep his Promise of walking alongside... & I'm quite sure he wil never fail in it...
Have so much more to tell but words have just got constricted within me...
Edited by Onir - 12 years ago

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