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Posted: 13 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: soni4eva

congrats 4 da new ff

luvd da concept
eagerly w8in 4 da nxt part x



aww thank u fr likng d concept dr
😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82

thank u so much fr likng d cncept 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: divya22

Lovely yaar... Nice start... Maan sweet n geet khadus...intresting...ab tak ulta tha in geet serial... It will b fun


ha,ha,its ulta lyk geet serial,bt d story s cmpletely diffrent..thanks fr likng it 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84

thanks fr liking it 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
awesome, brilliant & interesting start
interesting CS
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome, brilliant & interesting start
interesting CS
loved it
continue soon


thank u soo much dear...updating in few hours!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87



Part 1:

Khurana House:

7.50 am...

Two tiny mini cuties...creeping inside the abandoned bedroom of their chachu...

They hear some noises...

Maan: kutti...witch...ughhh...i hate her...

Then again the voice went asleep...

The two cuties held their mouth to control their laughter...

Anjali: Aahul..thathu ko uthao...( rahul chacha ko utao)..

Little rahul glared at her...

Rahul: how many times do i tell u its Rahul not AAhul...he rolled
his eyes...

Anjali in a crying voice: am younger than u...mujhe yahi aati
hain...

Rahul: hmm..tik hain..tik hain...now don't open ur
waterfalls...

Anjali made a baby face: wait..wait...mein mommy ko
bataongi...mum.. she was about to start was cut of by Rahul...

Rahul: chup..u want to wake up chachu or not...

Anjali nodded her head weakly..

Rahul: then chup chap follow me...

They both creeped even more to hear his another nightmare...

Maan sobbed in his dream: this chudail is not letting me to dream
also...sho...shoo...go away...shoo ...shoo...he made his hands like
he is chasing the mosquitoes... then again dossed off...

Rahul and Anjali went near him and sat near his ears...

Rahul: chachu...chachu...uto...

Anjali: thathu...utho...

They both shaked him...hmm..no response...

Anjali lost her patience and sat on his stomach: thachu utho...

Maan hugged Anjali and slept hugging her more...

Now Rahul got pissed off...

He then smirked dangerously...now let me see aap kya karegi...

He went to his dad's room and dialled Maan's number...

Maan rolled and kept his pillows over his head and slept soundly...

Rahul: Chachu utho...

Maan: nahi...sone do Rahul...he pulled Rahul near...come lets
sleep...

Rahul: chachu aapka phone bhajaraha hain...utho...

Maan: ummm...rehne do...ufff...he turned the other side...

Rahul tried his last trump card...

Rahul: chachu...koi Beast ka phone hain...cut karoo???

Maan jerked in his sleep...kya?????

His all sleep went like a miracle...his eyes wide opened...he plucked the
mobile from Rahul and was about to receive the call...when Rahul
smiled...

Rahul: now u got up na...ha...ha...ha...wo meine hi call kiya
tha...he giggled seeing Maan's baby face...while Anjali too laughed with
them...

Maan: Rahul ka bacha...wait i will...he was about to pounce on
Rahul...but Rahul dashed and went behind hiding his mother...

Maan: Bhabhi...just move...aaj bhi yeh ladka mujhe ullu banadiya...

Payal giggled...

Rahul: mama...even today...chachu was scolding someone in
the dream...he said very seriously...

Maan rolled his eyes...

Payal: kya devar ji...Aaj bhi...ufff...kya haal banadiya us
ladki ne mera Devar ko...she made a very worried face...seeing
Maan pouting...

Maan: bhabhi...wo ladki nahi...devil hain...nahi..nahi...lady
vampire hain...nahi..nahi...maan was totally out of control in
cursing his boss...while Payal giggled again at her poor brother-in-law..

Payal: hmm...i think today u may need to some more names to
curse her...

Maan confusingly: kyun...

Payal: kyunki...now the time is 8 am...ur office is at 9am...if u
go late...u will exactly get a very good welcome by ur
boss...so u may need to practice some more profanities to
bless her...right???

Maan was totally terrified...kya????? aat baj gayi he shouted
making the whole house deaf...while Rahul, Anjali and Payal closed their
ears...

the next minute they saw him running to the washroom ...like a
lightning...

Payal nodded her eyes in disagreement...: chalo bachon...get ready
for school...

With tat they left Maan's room...

***************************************************************

By the time Mr.Maan singh khurana got ready...the whole room was a
mess...

Tie at one place...shoes at one place..and finally he got ready...with a
white shirt and dark blue teri cotton pant...with a matching tie..looking
as handsome as ever...

He gathered all his files and the bike key and dashed into the hall...

Dadima: sambhal ke bte...gir javogi...

He smiled at Dadi taking her blessing then next to his Dad...

Papa: kush raho beta...he smiled and blessed keeping his hands on
Maan's head...

Maan murmered: kush???...how can i be happy when i work
with a hitler...

He made a puppy face and went out...

Payal: arre Devar ji.. have breakfast and go...

Maan shouted: nahi bhabhi...i will have something in the office
canteen...otherwise tat chudail will cut my head off...with that
he flew away in his bike...

Payal made a sad face...Arjun came and kept his hands on her shoulder...

Payal: dekhiye na ji...Aaj bhi Maan ne breakfast nahi khaya...

Arjun: what can he do..when he has so much work
pressure...its ok..u don't get tensed...

They both headed inside the house and started eating breakfast...

***************************************************************

Handa Advertising company limited (HAC)

8.45 pm...

Pinky was wandering near the entrance of the 5th floor of the Handa
complex..where the HAC office is situated...

Pinky: Adi sir...Adi sir...Maan ko phone lagana..

Adi sir: i called him for nearly ten times...but he is not picking
the phone...

Pari: kya hua Pinky...y are u so tensed...

Pinky: Pari..not only me...the whole office is tensed...its 8.45
aur Maan ko kuch aata pata nahi...today am damn
sure...Mam is gonna eat him for her breakfast...

Pari made a sad face and prayed god...: god...please mera dreamy
ko aaj bachalena...please...

***************************************************************

Handa complex Basement floor...

Parking area...

A bike zoomed in the two wheeler parking area...making the security
jolt...

Maan got down leaving a heavy sigh...

He smiled at Ramu kaka..who was the security there and wished him:
good morning Kaka...

Ramu kaka: Maan baba...aaj aap tho badi late hain...jaldi
jaiye..warna madam dantegi...

Maan made an irritating face: pata hain kaka...am going...

He was about to climb the stairs when he heard a car halting in the
parking area...

His eyes widened seeing the person ,,,,,

Maan: oh no...if i didn reach before her...phir...mein toh
gaya...

With that he started running on the stairs...

***************************************************************

A white BMW car opened with a thud...and there got down..

Miss.Geet Handa...with her highly professional attire...

She had a blazer coat on...but not buttoned leaving her white shirt from
inside visible...with a black shining yet professional business pants and
boot like office shoes...

Everything was perfect about her...

Be it her attire...or attitude...

Or her way of hair dressing...which is tied in a long pony ...with a black
specs adding more to her professionality...

Her shoes clicked with the same rhythm...with tat..she pressed the
elevator button...and it opened it the next minute for her...

She got into it..and started checking mails in her i-phone..off course...sirf
professional wala...

Maan was ofcourse calling profanities while climbing the steps...

He panted after climbing the first floor...

Maan: irritating lady...what does she think about her...as a
great women supporter...Women chauvinistic idiot...she
only can put the rules..." only women can use the elevator"
y??? Men don't have legs kya...Arrghh...how much i love to
hate her...ufff...

By then he saw the elevator being processed...an idea struck him
suddenly...

Maan: ha..ha...idea...aww...now i got an idea how to irritate
her...chalo Maan...lets start Irritating Geet-Devil-Handa..

With that...he ran to the elevator and pressed the button and ran to take
the steps again...

Geet was suddenly jolted by the stop of the elevator...

Geet: did i reach 5th floor this fast... she murmered in her British
language...

The lift door opened...Geet got confused when she found nobody there...

She pressed the button again dipped her head in the i-phone...

Maan cheekily reached the second floor and pressed the lift's button
again...

He smiled for ear to ear and got ready for his next floor Mission...

Now Geet got suspicious...the second time lift stopping in the
middle...no..something is wrong...

With the elevator stopping at each floor...Geet was pissed off and
furious...

She immediately called and enquired the security...but Ramu kaka..kept
mum..though he knows..its none other than his Maan baba...

****************************************************************

With the ting of the lift...all the staffs were arranged in a line...

They were so nervous waiting for the impending storm..

As their favourite Maan has not yet arrived...even his mobile seems to be
not reachable...

On hearing the bell...Pinky literally dropped her crisps packet, and
rushed to the door..along with all office staffs...while Pari was sincerely
praying...and Adi was biting his nails...

Geet stormed into the office while shouting some one on the phone...

Geet: wat was tat??? How many times to tell u people i want
the Russian models immediately...cant u ppl understand what im
saying...this project needs to be completed within two
days...

She was busily talking while entering the cabin...

While all the staffs were relieved hearing the opposite side of the office
door open,,

Maan cheekily declared: ufff...i hav come..with that he ran to the line...

Unfortunately his legs slipped on the crisps packet...

He straightly landed on the petite soft structure...who was busily
threatening some one on the phone...

By instinct he hugged her and both rolled over each other...making the
whole office gasp in horror...

Maan finally landed with Geet underneath him...his face over something
so smooth and so soft..with him smelling an intoxicating fragrance...

He rubbed his face on her curves in a dazed manner...to hear a voice that
which made him jolt...

Geet: MR. MAAN SINGH KHURANA...WHAT THE HECK ARE
U DOING LYING OVER ME...????

****************************************************************
Precap: Maan: wo..Mam...wo...he was not looking at her...feeling
embarrassed...

Geet: Mr.khurana...if u r telling something or getting out of
the cabin right now..i don't have time to wait for ur mouth to
complete a sentence...

Maan: wo Mam..ur shirt buttons are opened..he blurted and
closed his eyes...

Geet shocked: Wat???
*****************************************************************
next- part 2
guys..there u go with the part 1...fingers crossed..hope u ppl like it...if there is any confusion in the characters pls let me know...

AND BLESS WITH UR LIKES AND COMMENTS...AS IT ENCOURAGES ME A LOT...😊

Edited by alwayzzgurti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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woow that was soo awsum ...
my maan is cursing her bosss...😳
bahut accha lag...theri family part and kids part
oh god maan wat did u just do ...
u r in trouble😲 know...
congratz for the first part



you did a






Edited by aziza_ahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
Awesum start luv it n precap oh my god now only god can save maan
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
awesome part 1...
loved this maan giving gaalis...

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