NEW MG-OS-SECRETLY IN LOVE[epilogue page23]

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angelic_cute

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

awesome as the unsaid love should be conveyed as its important because no one knows that what will happen next

please pen down next and last part

loved it

thanks for pm

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

awesome , brilliant part
loved it
beautiful

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Vibhuti Shah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

wow..superb upidate/

love it.

do continue plz.

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

great story...both of them thinking about thier love not being succesfula nd hence did not confess

but Now Maan knows she loves hima dnw ill track her down

pls give a positive end...waiting

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Shraddha.sinari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

I just like ur all concept plz add

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Simran Kaur

@DDbiggestfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Awesome OS dear 👏
first of all i loved its title 👏
secondly u hv written in such a good way that i hv no such beautiful words to describe that how much i liked it 😳

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janani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

i luvd it...each and every bit...

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MyInfatuationz

@MyInfatuationz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

if u end here den Not fair... and if u have part 2 then its blast... its amazing.. thanks for wonderful update.. when u wrote 5 years gap and sudden disappearnce of Geet i felt ohh noo but now i feel u have something more plss.. judaai pr end na kroo..

overall its nyc concept.

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drrose31

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

congozz on new os...

well am here before reading it... as i saw the warning that... look at my bhashan plzz😆

well consider this as res

will be back after reading ...

love rose😉

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jayshu17

@jayshu17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Mona i luved ur story dear!!!i liked the part where geet falls for maan during the first time she saw him...her fears and her expectations whether she will join her hand wit maan inspite of him being a business tycoon is just very natural kind of a fear,a girl will have during the moment she feels the love...u hav perfectly depicted that in the apt place which is surely appreciatable!!!!keep up tis wrk...expecting the story's continution...!!!!!!

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