**FLAMES OF DESIRE**#2 MG FF IMP NOTE on page 153 - Page 64

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Posted: 13 years ago
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FLAMES OF DESIRE

PART-14

she picked up the call without looking at the caller...

"kotte de puttar...itni raat ko koi phone karta hai " she screamed getting irritated...

maan pulled his mobile away from his ear...protecting his ears from getting damaged...thinking..."not again"

with no reply...she got more irritated...

"ullu ke patte...phone kyu kiya...pata hai mai kitna romantic sapna dekh rahi thi woh bhi mere ranbir ka"

hearing some guys name, maan got up with a jolt...

"what...who is this bloody ranbir" he spoke gritting his teeth...

geet gulped her saliva sensing its maan's call...she hit her head with the mobile...scared to utter even a word more...

"ohh geet you are so dead"

"please please...maine kuch nahi kiya" she spoke getting scared...

"acha...jabhi mai call karta hu tum mujhe galiya kyu deti ho"

"woh aap galat wakt pe call karte ho na".....she said innocently...

"yani tumne mujhe jaan bhuj ke itni sari galiya di" he said gritting his teeth..."aur yeh ranbir kaun hai"...

"geet mind u agar yeh koi ladka hua toh mai"

"woh toh ladka hi hai" she said making a baby face...

"aur tum uske romantic sapne dekh rahi thi..." he spoke calmly this time confusing her...

"ha" she said slowly...

"hmmm...ok" ...the deadly valcano behind his disguised calmness was ready to erupt any time...ready to consume her

On the other hand, she thought he is ok with it...and that excited her to share what she feels...she sweetly told him...

"pata hai, maine jabse bachana yeh haseeno dekhi na tabse...mai deewani hu uski...he looks so hott onscreen....she blushed while saying this...aur uski sexy body...aur woh cute smile...aur woh lips...so yummy...could eat him raw...and she innocently went on and on describing his each feature...indirectly boiling maan's blood in anger...

his eyes where blood red...from her words he somehow understood that she is talking abt some crap hero of some film...but still how dare she utter those words which should only be meant for him...

"geet will you just stop this nonsense"...he screamed in complete rage

"how dare you talk this shit about some random guy...mind you geet, you belong to me...and only me...every word from your mouth should be only meant for me"

geet got scared hearing his angered voice...tears formed in her eyes...

"I am sorry" she said in her choked voice and maan could sense she is crying...

feeling guilty he spoke..."ok now sleep...aur koi sapne dekhane ki jarurat nahi hai...samjhi"

"and wipe your tears before you sleep"

"aap naraz ho gaye na firse"...she said making a baby crying face...

maan closed his eyes feeling more guilty for scaring her...

"nahi geet and now please sleep"

"nahi, aap ho naraz...mujhe pata hai"

"nahi baba" he tried again keeping his calm...

"ho aap...maine kaha na"...she was admant now...

"maine kaha na nahi...now go to sleep or else" he said gritting his teeth...

"nahi nahi me sleeping now" she said getting scared...then disconnected the call...pulling the spread on her head...hiding in it...cribbing to her babaji...

"dekha na aapne kitne dusht danav hai...jaise dus sar wale ravan ho...mujhe har wakt datate rehte hai...aur khud hi gussa bhi ho jate hai...aur fir mujhe hi manana padta hai...she slapped her forehead...uffo ab kal fir jake manana padega...babaji kuch karo na inka...ab mujhase nahi sambhalte yeh"

and she went on and on...slowly drifting in her sweet dreamland...

Poor maan he hurriedly googled ranbir's details...making it sure that he was some filmy hero...and was no threat for geet's and his relationship...he then fell back on his bed lifelessly...closing his eyes...thinking...

"what will I do with her...kuch samjhati hi nahi...everytime I try to get romantic with her, and she ruins it all"

sighing he tried to get some sleep...

Next morning...vicky was sleeping peacefully when he heard some banging on his door...he fell down from his bed, hearing maan's super angry voice...scared he got up...looked at the time...it was 6am...he gulped his saliva...taking slow steps towards the door...

making a quick prayer he unlocked the door...coming face to face with maan...who had a devil smirk on his face...next moment without a word maan dragged him out...towards his gym...

vicky just followed him having no other choice...they entered his gym...and maan left him...and moved ahead removing his vest...he made some moves warming his body...then looked behind at vicky, raising his eye brow...finding him looking down...maan smirked...

"vicky common remove ur t-shirt...I wana try kickboxing today"

vicky looked at him in horror...

"bhai please no"...he pleaded...

"vicky don't be silly...be man enough"...he said hiding his smile...

"bhai please I wont do it again...ever"

"vicky...i am not getting wat you are saying...chalo jaldi se come here...hum practise start karte hai"

and maan moved closer to grab vicky...and vicky moved back...

"no bhai please...dont use me as ur punching bag"

maan grabbed him...and handed him boxing gloves...wear it...he ordered...

vicky wid no other choice wore it...still trying to convince maan with his baby crying face...maan ignored it all...

both maan and vicky were stood facing eachother...maan started moving , streching himself...

he kicked some punches in air inoder to scare him...vicky was just looking at him horrified with outcome of this event...he could already imagine himself in hospital bed, completely plastered from top to bottom...

maan did some kicks deliberately missing vicky...he only wanted to scare him...nothing else...after all he was his pampered litle brother...

with maan's each moves vicky started moving, inorder to save himself from getting bruised...maan with all his experience tried saving vicky from his hard blow...but poor vicky was so much trembling...that accidently he got kicked right on his face...and he fell down...

maan panicked and moved towards him...vicky was holding his face...

"vicky haath nikalo...let me see it..."

"nahi bhai pain ho raha hai"

"mujhe dekhane toh de"

maan pulled his hand away to see his one eye turned completely black...making him look funny...he muffled his laughter...and made him stand...

"tum room mai jao mai ointment leke aata hu"

"nahi bhai rehne do...mai khud laga lunga"...he tried making a run for his life before his brother change his mind...

maan just laughed hard looking at his brother's antics...and he continued wid his tai chi...

At breakfast table...poor vicky was hiding his face...looking down...as everybody where laughing and then pitying on him...and he was feeling horrible with all this...

annie- "vicky bohat pain ho raha hai kya"...she asked getting concerned...

vicky just gave her his deadly look...shutting her up...like accusing her that you were also involved...and still me getting all the beating...

annie looked down making a baby face...while maan was muffling his laugh looking at them...

dadi- "maan aap has kyu rahe hai...dekho aise bhi kya exsercise...hamare pote ki aankh hi kali ho gayi"

"dadi kuch jada nahi laga hai...thik ho jayega kal tak"

that's when geet entered all chirpily...greeting everyone, good morning...then kissed dadi's cheeks...and finally took a seat beside maan...she gave a sweet smile to him...to which maan looked other way ignoring it...then her eyes fell on vicky who was hiding his eyes with his handkerchief...

"vicky kya hua...muh kyu chupa raha hai"

"nahi woh aisehi"

"batana...mujhe kuch gadbad lag rahi hai"

"maine kaha na kuch nahi"

now maan, dev, dadi and NT started laughing loudly...while annie made a grumpy face...and vicky now wanted to run away from this evil people...

"dekho na dadi yeh nahi dikha raha...aur aap log has kyu rahe ho"

NT- "geet aap khud hi dekh lo"

geet getting excited ran up to vicky...and pulled his hand away...revealing his face...

"awww...vicky teri aankh kali kaise ho gayi...kya fir kisi ladki ke bhai ne punch mara"...she asked innocently getting concerned...

and hearing this everybody started laughing madly...

dev- vicky tu ladkiyo ke bhaiyo se bhi pitata hai...

"ha dev bhai...and kabhi kabhi ladkiya khud bhi isse thappad maar deti hai...hai na vicky..."

vicky gave an painfull accusing deadly look to geet...for which she made a confusing face...then pouting thinking what she did wrong this time...

vicky excused himself hurriedly...before geet could utter any more words prasing about his reputation amongst his girlfriends and there brothers...he ran to his room...and annie followed him like his tail...

geet sat besides maan pouting her lips...holding her face in her both hands...maan looked at her from corner of his eyes...

dadi- "geet beta aap kya soch rahi ho"

"bas kuch nahi dadi...pehale sirf maan ko manana tha ab vicky ko bhi manana padega"

maan spitted out his coffee which he was drinking...coughing...
looking terrified at her...he was alarmed now, imagining all her khatarnaak manofying he survived till now...

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Precap:- i wonder will she repeat her coffee...or will try some thing new this time😍😍😍😍😍😍

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Edited by mahimaneet - 13 years ago
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😆 awesome babes😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
poor vickey...
geet is too innocent
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
y baby?
i admit update late hua hai...bt still i updated na
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks dear😊😊😊😊
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Originally posted by: priya.shilpa

awesome update
poor vickey...
geet is too innocent
cont soon

thanks dear😊😊😊😊

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