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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update yar beautifully written loved it a lot
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wow sam... loved the update so much...
muah...
kya scene that... and kya start tha morning ka...
subah-2 maan saw her face... haaye...
and the fight was superb... maan's dialogue were so good after all sam ne jo ikhey the...😆
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for the update...

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my heartbeats...

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hiii...how r u?????????????


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he deserves one punch from geet too


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Posted: 13 years ago
Will update next part 2mrw...😊
hopefully big in size this time... 😉
As my likes are again decreasing,i concluded the reason as small and irregular updates...
But after posting a big size update,hope will not receive the same amount of responses from my reader...
Edited by samina_17 - 13 years ago
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teri stories parke ye halat meri heartbeat ki hoti hai... 😆
continue ur writing in BIG BIG parts soon... 😊
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Sargoshiyan-Whisper of Love

PART 20


Maan drove the car and came out from the uni area. He looked at Geet and it was hurting to the teary face. He decided not to go to Geet's house as they would ask a lot of questions right now


So he changed the root and drove the car in another way. All the way he kept glancing at Geet, who was totally unaware from her surroundings




(The main reason for her this type response about this incident was, Geet never faced any kind of teasing situations as Arjun always made sure about her securities. As like a perfect brother, he always saved Geet from all the evil eyes of people. And most of all, Geet was shocked to recognize this kind of behavior from her own friend. According to Geet, Piyush was her one of the good friend who helpd her in all her problem, but she never considered Piyush beyond any friend)


After some time, she came out from her thoughts with the sudden jerk of the car. She looked outside and noticed that it was not the road of her home nor it was any familiar road. She looked at Maan and asked,


Geet:Maan, where are you taking me?


Maan: don't worry you will love the place


Geet: matlab? I don't want to go anywhere right now, so please let's go from here


Maan: listen geet, you want to let your family member know about all that fiasco?


Geet with a sad face: no




Maan: then we can't go to your home right now


Geet: then where will we go now?


Maan: you trust me?


Geet nodded her head and try to give a small smile, though the sparkle of her eyes was missing in that smile


Maan winked at her and replied,


Maan: then trust me you will love the place. samajhlo muft mai surprise mil rahi hai


Geet didn't argue further and looked outside. Maan looked at her and thought to himself,


Maan: I will somehow get back the sparkle of your eyes and make you smile today. You have to face these situations in future also. And I will be not around you to tackle that time


Maan felt sad to think that he didn't have much time here, he had to complete his own work and left for Mumbai, to his own family, with his own identity Maan Singh Khuranna


After some time they reached a place which was surrounded by a huge wall and a gate. Maan stopped the car and looked at Geet,


Maan: You stay here, I need to manage the guard 1st


Geet nodded and Maan came out from the car and went towards the gate.


Sandeep Khurana (Maan's grandfather) started this company when he was only 22 years old, and after his death, though Savitri Devi was only 29 years old she didn't even let the base of Khuran Construction tremble a little bit and handled the whole empire alone along with her 9 years old son. And later Anukalp Khurana, after his graduation came and spreads the company in abroad also. Now Khuranas have that much power in India that other industrialist never dare to mess up with the Khuranas. Also Khurana construction has good relation with the government.


The guard was shocked to see the master's son there. Guard saluted Maan,


Guard: Good morning sir


Maan just nodded his head in reply and ordered to open the gate


The car entered the area and Geet's face turned into shocked, and then surprised, then excitement and then happiness. All her tension fled away from her head to see the beach. It was Khurana's private beach, their own property and even a plane can't go above this property.


Geet came out from the car and ran towards the sea shores. Maan also came out and smiled to look at her. Geet stopped on her way and turned back. She again came back to Maan, held his hand and started to run towards the water again.


Maan: Geet wait, what are you doing? We can't go into the water right now


Geet: what do you mean we can't go? What else people do in the beach?


Maan: listen baba, you will wet your dress na? then how will you go back to home?


Geet: your fault


Maan: my fault?


Geet: yes it's absolutely your fault na?


She said in anger and turned her head on other side




Maan: and how it is my fault, will you do the favor to tell me that?


Geet: You didn't tell me before that we are coming here


Maan: I didn't decide it in morning Geet


Geet didn't replied and started to walk towards the gate


Maan: now where are you going?


Geet: I don't want to stay here


Wow great now, Maan murmured to himself and followed Geet


Maan: Geet lets spend some time walking near the water


Geet: I'm not interested


Maan: come on Geet, we will come again then


Geet stopped and looked at him from the corner of her eyes, but didn't say anything


Maan: I promise we will again come here


Geet: pakka wala promise?


She asked in her cute pouting face


Maan smiled and replied, pakka wala promise


Geet faced him and said, ok deal then


Both walked on the drizzling sand for some time, it felt so good when the water came and touch your feet.


After some time Maan sat down on a rock and Geet got busy in collecting snails. While sitting on the rock, Maan noticed her face. She is happy now and the sparkle of her eyes back again


Geet came back and sat on another rock near Maan


Geet: I never came here before, looks like it's someone's private beach


Maan: yes it is, I know them, that's why I am allowed to come here


Geet: thanks Maan


Maan: now from where these thanks came in between this conversation?


Geet: for making my mood light


Maan: my pleasure


Maan replied with a bow that made both laughed


Maan: geet never let people think you as a weak girl


Geet: but I'm afraid of people's reactions Maan


Maan: afraid of what?


Geet sighed and replied,


Geet: I don't want to make any scene, because later all will talk about me in my back, may be in front of me


Maan:I don't think that Geet, if you are right in your place and your own friends know you, they will support you. And why to think about others when they don't even know you by your heart?


Geet: but how will I face piyush, I never thought he will be so sick in mind that he can forced himself on me


A tear came from her eyes but maan wiped it and cupped her face




Maan: then show him to whom he tried to mess with. Let him know that how wrong he is to think you as a weak girl. Face him geet and your true friends will definitely support you


Geet: I will think about it


Maan: ok but remember it Geet, you have to face the world and have to tackle its reality alone. I will not be with you all the time Geet, you have to go and face Piyush


Geet looked at him suspiciously and asked,




Geet: vaag ne ka irada hai kya?


Maan winked at her and replied,


Maan: don't worry, I will not flee away without you


Geet: hawww, then what about your girlfriend?


Maan: she will find someone else then




Geet: hmmm, good idea


And both laughed out. After spending one more hour, they left for home


This part i tried to portrait Khurana's history and power, and also the fact, why Geet is afraid to face Piyush. hope all r satisfied with this part...

all liked the maaneet moments??? more maaneet moments are on its way.

now can i please get a good amount of comments for this part???... i will update next part wo vi 3000 words ki... but only if u guys will give me BIG BIG comments and i can open a new thread... 😆


I'm writing this story for the page Geet- Beginning of a new Era, u can visit this page both in FB and IF


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Edited by samina_17 - 12 years ago

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