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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anjyluv

where r u ??

plz update soon !!!😭😭


just 2 days mor will be free and all for u ppl wid flood of updates
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dona86

plzz update soon...


showieee 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 286pearl

😉amazing story...

pl add me n pm whn u update nxt...
waiting...


sure and will updt soon pakka just stuck wid xamz
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: preethia

loving it but wondering wat next



hehe how am i suppose to know
devils and angels bith ar unpredictable u know na 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

hey ...just red ur ff ...its amazing ...
Updt sooon plezzz..eagerllly waiting


thanxxx and sure will do it soon pakka just stuck wid xamz 🤢
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sdlife19

waiting for an update.,,,,,,,😭



will do it soon pakka just stuck wid xamz 🤢
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Posted: 13 years ago



He looked at her and a sudden gush of anger, anguish ran through his body, that frustration to look at her in such a vulnerable condition over took his heart and mind, his red eyes were spitting fire ready to burn everything with the intensity they hold in them, his raising heartbeat was evident of his irritation over something he couldn't even manage the guts to come up with, the heat vibrating through his body could just make the freezing mummies burn in the scorching fire of his animosity, his shivering body was telling the tale of his share hatred towards this place, this situation, this atmosphere, this anger, this fear, towards everything, towards himself, towards her for doing this...his hatred was cursing his blood to commit a sin he never thought he could do, at least not to her but she was provoking him to do the sin she will regret to, she was provoking the inner devil in him, the hungry beast of this devil was awakened looking at her...the thing he couldn't even fathom was right in front of his eyes, the thing he never wished to happen was happening right in front of his eyes, the thing he could never believe was here, looking at her in this condition was far more vulnerable test of his patience his, was a limit of him to see her like this...

You'll pay for it, you'll have to pay for it Mrs Geet Maan Singh Khurana...he said looking away twisting himself to face the wall calming his anger down which was running with the flow of his blood in his body, fisting his hand making his knuckles turn white with pressure...

Your countdown begins now, you'll have to bear your Devil's punishment for making him go through this...and banged the wall with his fisted hand making his knuckles break, making him flinch in pain but that smirk with his closed eyes was evident of the storm awaiting but for whom even he doesn't know...

3...2...1...he repeated and she gasped for air...


*********


he came over her while her breath was caught in her lungs, his hands go round her waist clutching her close to himself when she closed her eyes feeling vulnerable with the pressure his cold hands were applying over her slender sleek waist in passion and possession when he dug his nails in that smooth white skin of hers...

Please...she begged while he continued his assault making her week with his hands where his eyes were glued over her face and lips itching to taste that sweet nectar yet he forced his heart and brain to stop his track and demand an answer he was dying to hear now...

Why...he demanded...why shall I leave you know...this was your husband's right isn't it, here I am, your husband, your Devil...now why shall I let my wife go...he asked with a blank look while his face was lost in hers and fingers busy in their own accord...

Yes, this right is only for my husband...I am only HIS, only for HIM...she opened her eyes to look at him while he was lost in those hazels...what was that in those eyes, what was in those dark eyes, so deep, a fear, a need, a desire, a...what is it ??? she thought drowning in his eyes searching for something even she dint knew when he smacked his lips over hers marking her as HIS...ONLY HIS...DEVIL'S ANGEL she IS, and WILL BE from now...


PS sorry guyz am really really sorry for such a huge delay i am hell stuck with exams and will be all free just for you all after 20th will update on 20th and also will flood you with updates after that

pakka promise but as of now Divzi saying a hearty sorry to all


so now give me my comments and like

will be waiting

AND WHO ALL WANT PMz PLEASE SEND ME BUDDY REQUEST

I'LL NOT BE ABLE TO PM OTHERWISE

❤️Divzi sighing off

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Posted: 13 years ago
m just waiting this teaser is really making to think wat geet has done
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry dr d like button isn't working and will be waiting for d update sweety am sure devil is gonna have her angel full to d core i think or he's gonna leave her..i don't think so becoz his hunger is higher than his love now..his love overpower his hunger i don't know still confused😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
Curious to knw wat GEET has done tat makes the Devil more devil ...
Plz update soon..thanx.

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