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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#701

Originally posted by: SONOMAKTER1
Still geet hate him ahhh i hate this girl i hate her loadsss😡
feeling realy realy bad for maan😭😭😭

yeh kya hoewa kisne jaana Sono hates geet nahiii

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#702

Originally posted by: ruchs

Me is totally stuck up with the work load' but plomish you will get your comment tomorrow!!!😳

it's ok uni goes first mel doesn't mind tomorrow hmmm give me then a comment for the next update😉

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roopali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#703

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504887

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Posted: 13 years ago

#704

Originally posted by: mel420

hey geet ke babij kya aapne saari nautanki iss me hi daali hai kya🤣

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Posted: 13 years ago

#705

Originally posted by: mel420


Part 17

Dear Geet,

A smile of yours,

Had me dreaming,

A life full of promises,

That would be fulfilled..

Your one touch

That would always send chills

Down my spine

And make my heart twitter..

Long forgotten are those memories

You and me-Happily together!

Now all I see in front of me

Is a mirage that would disappear any moment..

If i had to wish ever,

I would ask for only one thing,

To be back in your arms and

Never let you leave me..! (written by sally thx sweets)

But sadly enough that is not possible thanks to my one mistake,

Mine dirty revenge.

My dirty revenge,

which take you away from me ,

forever and ever.

Now all I can say is,

I am sorry.

I will never hurt or pester you again,

with my presence.

I am leaving forever,

wishing you a happy live,

forever.

May you get all the happiness in live,

which you deserve and much, much more.

I love you and that will never change.

You hate me is a fact I made.

I gave a sweet innocent angel so much pain,

how could you ever love,

if even I can't see my own face in the mirror.

Bye forever,

Your Maan ( I was and will only always be yours, even when I took my dirty revenge, I promise to that)

Geet fell something wet falling on her hand. She brought her hand to
her eyes. She was crying, for the first time in 16 years she was
crying. The one whom made her heart of stone, made her heart melt
again. She looked at the letter. Maan was gone forever. She fell on her
knees.


Rabba hai… rabba

Rabba hai… rabba

Kisi da tu kya laage

Lo tute kache dhaage

Phire dil mara mara

Yaar da tuta sahara

Kyun hai bhala yeh dooriyan

Kyun hai khala ab darmiyan

She started crying more and more. He never touched any other girl. Sameera's words rang in her ears. He never touched me geet I swear on
Pari death.



Rabba… tu itna baata de

Haan baata de baata de raaba

Ki kara main hoon ki kara ve

Haan baata de baata de rabba

Geet looked at the letter. I
was and will only always be yours, even when I took my dirty revenge, I
promise to that. She cried more and remeberd maan' s broken state when
she left him at the beach.



Maan arrived home. He walked into his room and looked at Geet's pictures. He grabbed a picture of hers in his hand.

Bhaga bhaaga phirta hai yeh dil

Hai jaane aisi kya hain mushkil

Tere bina jeena nahi hai

Tu toh meri saason mein shaamil

Ho teri duaaiya tere sadke soniya

De de rehaiyaa mainu dil se soniya

Dil ka kahi hai kya sahara

Kyu hai bhala ye dooriyaan

He thought back at what geet told him at the beach. But
do you think I can love you again, when all you have done is degraded
my soul again and again.Once you made me feel. I am the most important
person of your life and the next moment you made me looth myself, to
make the mistake to ever love you. it's easy to forget maan but hard to
forgive. These scars you gave me, are there to stay forever till my
last breath. My love was limitless and that's the reason but the pain
you gave me is 10000 times worse and never healing..

She
was right how could she ever love a monster like him. She must feel
better once would arrive at home. He was gone, she would never have to
see the monster who ruined her again. Tears made there way out of
Maan's eyes.





Geet stood up. No geet why are you crying. It's good na that he left.
Yes it's great that he left everything will be much better now. You
will go back to your own life you don't need him why, would you need
him all he does is hurt you. He awakes hope in your heart and then he
leaves you all alone. Yes geet you don't need him and neither to your
girls. But how will Ruchi react when she now he gone. Eh I hate you
maan you always but me in such problems but don't worry I will handle
it. I won't break down and I will neither let my girls break down.

Rabba… tu itna baata de

Haan baata de baata de raaba

Ki kara main hoon ki kara ve

Haan baata de baata de rabba

Dadi saw Maan arrving at home, But where was Geet. Well she would ask him in the afternoon. He must rest now. She called Nakul.

N:Yes dadi

D:Go to maan's room with food.

N:Saab is back

D:Yes now go

Nakul knocked at the door. maan wiped his tears away.

M:In

N:saab food

M:But the tray on the table,

When nakul left
Maan looked at the food. He didn't feel like eaten. Why should he even
life when his jaan didn't care. he remeberd her cold look when he was
bleeding and her hard words how could he forget them. I hate you maan get out of my life leave me alone. He gave a srcastic smile, while thinking about her harsh words.

Roota roota rehta hain yeh maan

Hai jaane aisi kya hain uljhan

Tere bin hasta nahi hai

Haiii…jaane mere kyun hai dushman

Ho meri tanhaiyan dase mujhko soniya

Hogi ruswaiya tere dil ki soniya

Mere nahi hai ab guzara

Kyun hai bhala yeh dooriyan

 Maan
put Geet's picture down and left to the gym. He started excersing like
there was now tomorrow. The wounds on his body started bleeding badly.
But maan didn't care He kept excersing.



maan
come on there nurses won't you be happy that they are here to take care
of you.



They way geet
gave him a disgusting look while saying that flashed in his mind. He
excersised more harsher if that was even possible, Blood oozed from his
arms and head. Maan started feeling dizzy but he didn't stop, till he
heard Nakul's voice.

N:Saab aab yaha dadi was asking what you where doing at the gym at this time.



Dadi saw the
light on off the gym and got worried. She ahd found maan a couple of
times unconsious in the gym. So she sended Nakul to check. She hoped he
was okay. geet was alive so why would he hurt himself now, unless
something really bad happend between the two of them. Dadi was to
scared to go and asked maan. She didn't knew or she was able to take
the bad news. Dadi was walking in her room from one side to the other,
all nervous praying everything was okay.

M:Wo nothing I was just not sleepy so anyway where is dadi

N:In her room

M:Okay you go tell dadi I am okay I am just coming to her

Maan went to dadi after he cleaned his wounds and hided it. He wore shirt with long sleeves and a excersice bandage on his head.

D:Maan what's this on your head

M:Oh dadi I love wearing it Nishu gave it to me.



D:Nishu acha but why didn't the grils come with you and geet where is she.

M:Wo dadi I came
here to finish a project and Geet works in HP she helps girls you now
na so she couldn't come with me and the girls need to go to school.

D:Hmmm but how
long are you going to stay here and is it not better if geet comes here
and leaves her work. And we find a school for the grils in deli

M:No dadi don't worry I will find a solution for that

D:Theek hai but what where you doing at the gym. You just come back.

M:Wo was missing geet and the girls a lot so i decided to excersive a bit so iw ould get tired and could sleep

D:Hmmm I hope you haven't hurt yourself you now na geet and the girls wouldn't like that.

maan's mind went to all the harsh words geet said and Nishu at the very beginning when he came back.They don't care if I am alive or dead Maan thought.

M:I know dadi so I didn't hurt ,myself. I wouldn't dare.

Dadi was convinced. She smiled.

D:No go and try to rest.

Maan left to his room.


Precap:nishu's reaction. And will nishu tell geet the truth

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

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Posted: 13 years ago

#706

Originally posted by: mel420

ghoon ghoon mein lihka hain behane walhe ka naam
true we love each other a lot I am your queen and you are my crazy kamini friend.

angel sahi kahti hia

budi sathiya gayi hai

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 13 years ago

#707

Geet's feelings have waken up...

thank God Maan arrived his home again...

Maan is torturing himself because of pain given by Geet's harsh words...

I have more pity on Daadi rather then Maan or Geet...she lost her husband...children...but made herself strong because of grand children...until this age she is watching her grandchildren suffering...how much she is helpless...

Nishu should tell truth to her mother...I am not saying that Geet should forgive Maan because she is feeling gratitude towards him for saving her daughter...Maan is the father so it was his duty...he didn't do any obligations...until now Geet has nurtured their children all alone...but she should know what happen behind her back so that there will be no problem in the future...

it was a wonderful update...

thanx for pm...

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 13 years ago

#708

Originally posted by: mel420

why can't they die do you think there immortal 😆

in our heart and mind they are immortal...

but as a human death is final truth...

but yaar usse pehle unhein mila kar kahani khatam kar dena...I can't see their death...