Maaneet OS Hothe Hothe Pyar Ho Gaya Lastpart pg 14 - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for your love and support dear friends. I was overwhelmed to see the response to my OS. I got 194 likes and 14 pages of comments thanks a ton guys for showering me with so much love 😊. Here is the last part of the OS I have tried my level best to give it a proper ending. Since this is the last part I would request each one of u to give me longer comments it would motivate me to a great extent
love- Piya
PART 2

Geet was going to give him an answer when all of a sudden it started raining

Geet's eyes were twinkling in excitement; she was so engrossed in this beautiful gift of nature that for a second she forgot all her worries and allowed herself to enjoy this present moment

She went and stood at the center of the road and allowed the soothing rain drops to kiss her entire self

Geet: Beast jaante ho jab bhi barsaat ki pehli bunde mujhe chuthi hai toh yun lagta hai jaise k Babaji mujhpar apni meher barsa rahe ho [Beast u know what whenever the first drops of rain touch my skin I feel as if God is showering me with his blessings]

Geet started playing in the rain

Geet: Ye bunde jab zammen ko chuthi hai toh ek sargam ki dhun ki aawaz inn kano mein gunjne lagthi hai aur pata hai uss sargam ki aawaz mere payal ki chan chan se bhi zyada surili hai [When these drops kiss the earth I can hear a melodious music ringing in my ears and u know what that music is more musical than the tunes of my anklets]

Geet excitedly tapped her feet so that Maan could hear the musical sound of her anklets

The intensity of the rain increased and Geet started dancing in the rain

She went on appreciating the nature and sharing her thoughts about the rain with Maan but Maan did not give any reply as he was completely captivated by the innocent angel who was standing in front of his eyes

This was the first time he wished that time should come to a standstill; this was the first time he wished to capture a particular moment permanently in his heart

There was something that was not allowing Maan to remove his gaze from Geet; he had seen many gorgeous and beautiful ladies in his life but he was never comfortable with them even after meeting or knowing them from ages but for unknown reasons he felt a strong connection with this girl; a girl who was a complete stranger to him'

Maan: (thinking)

Saadgi ka gehna hai tu ya maasumiyat ki roshni

Chachal bahar hai tu ya khushboo ki raagini

Dilkash sama hai tu ya khilkhilathi hui chaandni

Rango ka bauchar hai tu ya kashish mein dubothi hui ek mehkashi

Kya hai tu? Kaun hai tu? Kis naam se pukaru tumhe?

Ae khoobsurat ajnabee kya jaadu kar diya tune mujhpar jo dil se nikle hue har dua mein aa raha hai bus tu hi tu nazar

[R u the ornament of simplicity or the light of innocence

R u the playful atmosphere or a musical fragrance

R u a beautiful mood or a refreshing moonlight

R u the shower of colors or an attractive intoxicating drink

Who r u? What r u? How should I address u?

Oh beautiful stranger what magic have u done on me that I can see ur face in every prayer that is coming out from my heart]

Geet: Ofho Beast main tumse itni saari baatein kar rahi hoon aur tum ho k wahi baitho ho chalo yaha aau aur mere saath dance karo [Oh Beast I am the only one who is doing the talking and u r still sitting there come on dance with me]

Geet extended her hand and requested Maan to join her. Maan happily accepted her invitation

Both of them started dancing; Geet started singing a monsoon song

Geet: Rhimjhim gire saawan sulag sulag jaaye mann bheege aaj iss mausam mein lagi kaisi ye agan

Maan just wanted to live this moment completely he kept on admiring Geet

As Geet continued to dance by mistake she lost her balance but before she could land on the ground Maan gave her the support of his strong arms

PLS LISTEN TO THIS SONG https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G41Dr92LlZc

Music

Geet closed her eyes in fear but after few seconds she realized that she was safe. As soon as she opened her eyes she got lost in the ocean of love that was forcing her to drown herself completely in its folds'She was losing herself entirely in the charismatic eyes of Maan

Pee loon tere neele neele naino se shabnam

Something changed at that very moment'Both of them felt that they knew each other from ages

Pee loon tere gile gile hotho ki sargam

Geet could see honesty and sincerity in his dark brown eyes and Maan was sure that this girl was an owner of a heart which was more beautiful than her angelic face

Pee loon hai peene ka mausam'

Their hearts started dancing to the musical tune of this unknown and nameless bond; their souls started communicating with each other through this one eye lock that both of them shared making them realize that they r no longer strangers there is a special and divine thread that is trying to unite them

Tere sang ishq taari hai tere sang ek khumari hai

Tere sang chain bhi mujhko tere sang bekaraari hai

He carefully lifted her and made her comfortable on her feet without breaking the eye contact. Instead of removing her arm from his shoulder Geet allowed her second arm to take him completely in her embrace'she feared that he might go away from her if she removed her grip'Oh what a strange situation this was her mind was trying to tell that he was an unknown person but her heart was confidently giving her the permission to claim this unknown man as it was sure that he was what her heart desired for

Tere sang ishq taari hai tere sang ek khumari hai

Tere sang chain bhi mujhko tere sang bekaraari hai

Same was the case with Maan he had sculpted an image in his dreams which used to appear as a blurred reflection to him till date but slowly he could see the curtains being drawn from that image'and he was getting clear signals from his heart that his "Beauty" was that image personified

Tere bin jee nahi lagda tere bin jee nahi saktha

Tujhse hai hare maine vaare doh jaahah

Qurbaan meherbann k main toh qurbaan

Sun le zara'tera qurbaan..

He started tracing the outline of her face with his long finger'this was something new for Maan he had never touched any girl without her permission infact he was really shy when it came to girls'but he felt no reason to stop himself today as somewhere or the other he knew that she belonged to him

Hosh mein rahu kyun aaj main tu meri bahon mein simthi hai mujhmein samayi hai yun'

Geet had never allowed any man to touch her but this small touch of Maan gave a new definition to her existence'she felt complete with this simple innocent act of Maan' she wanted to share the contentment of her heart she immediately allowed herself to get lost in the folds of his loving arms

Jis tarah k koi ho nadi tu mere seene mein chupti hai saagar tumhara main hoon'

She melted like a candle in his embrace'This proximity ignited a new emotion of love which was successfully blessing this couple by showering them with its magical light

Pee loon teri dheemi dheemi lehro ki chamcham

Pee loon teri saundi saundi saason ko har dum

Maan crushed Geet in his embrace and placed a loving kiss on her shoulder. Geet rejoiced this new sensation and dug her nails on his back and responded to his simple kiss with utmost love

Pee loon hai peene ka mausam'

He moved to the nape of her neck and decorated the entire path by soft sensual loving kisses

Tere sang ishq taari hai tere sang ek khumari hai

Tere sang chain bhi mujhko tere sang bekaraari hai

Both of them were high on desires and wanted to make this moment more blissful; they came out of their hug and looked into each other's eyes. Both of them could read the same wants in each other's eyes. Slowly their lips started reducing the distance between them

Tere sang ishq taari hai tere sang ek khumari hai

Tere sang chain bhi mujhko tere sang bekaraari hai

As the distance between their lips went on reducing both of them closed their eyes to experience this new journey more beautifully' The blurred picture present in Maan's heart was almost clear'he had just placed his lips on her soft rose petals when he got saw Geet's reflection in his heart'yes she was his dream girl. He backed off from the kiss as soon as he saw her image as he realized his mistake

Geet felt incomplete after his sudden withdrawal. She looked at him but before she could demand an answer all her queries got solved automatically as his sincere and honest love filled eyes had answered her even before she could pose her question

Maan: (talking through his eyes)

Ikraar hai mujhe, nahi tum ajnabee mere liye'

maan liya mere dil ne, k mile the tumse hum kabhi toh pehle

Ye khoobsurat ehsaas jo karwate le raha hai humare dil mein

Yakeen dila raha hai k kuch toh rishtha hai hum dono mein

Iss khoobsurat pal ne mujhe meri dhadkano se mila diya

Rab ki muhurat dekhi thi par aaj khuda k paak dua se mila diya

Nahi jaanta k iss mulakat ka kya anjaam hoga

Par hum tumhe bhool jaayenge iss jhooth ka bojh humare dil ko gavara nahi hoga

Haan ye sach hai k iss chothi si mulakat ne humari zindagi ko ek naya mod de diya

Anjaane the jis paak rishte se uss rishte k meher se hume khushnuma bana diya

Haan ye sach hai tumse hi mujhko pyar ho gaya

Haan ye sach hai'haan ye sach hai"

[I agree u r no longer a stranger to me

I have realized that I had met u surely sometime before

This beautiful sensation that is getting evoked in my heart

Is ensuring me that there is something special between the two of us

This beautiful moment united me with my heartbeats

I had seen the statue of God but today I met his divine blessing

I am unaware what would be the end of this meeting

But my heart would never be at peace if I hide the reality by stating that I would forget u forever

Yes this is the truth that this small meeting has given a new direction to my life

I was ignorant about a beautiful bond and this meeting made me realize the divinity of this beautiful bond

Yes this is the truth I have fallen in love with u

Yes this is the truth'this is the truth]

Maan left from there as he felt it was not necessary that she too should harbor the same feelings for him'He did not wait for any reply

Geet wanted to stop him but she stood there watching his retreating figure'she closed her eyes and saw his picture in her heart

Her heart made her remember the qualities that she wanted to see in her man'her Man should be truthful'yes her Beast was a genuine and truthful man he did not hide anything from her

Her man should love her unconditionally'yes she could see true love in the eyes of her Beast

Her man should respect her and her love'she was ready to submit herself completely to him at that particular moment but he respected her and her true emotions by backing out at the right moment thus expressing and proving his true love'

Yes he possessed all the qualities that she wished to see in her man'Her Beast was her dream man

She was happy as she realized the true essence of this unnamed relationship but the very next moment her smile vanished as reality dawned in'.he was indeed the love of her life but he was far away from her reach'there was no way through which she could find him'she didn't even knew his real name'

She looked at the sky to find an answer'if they had to walk on different paths then what was the need of bringing him in her life'

Lost in her own thoughts she started walking towards her car; she did not know when she started the car and when she reached her bungalow

She entered her room, closed the door and drifted off to sleep as her heart was too heavy at that particular moment due to the realization that she had lost her love' her soul mate even before she could meet him in true sense

Next Day

The boy and his family were coming to see Geet

Geet was totally depressed, her mom tried to convince her that no decision would be taken against her wish but how could Geet explain the dilemma of her heart to her mother? She wanted to tell her that she had submitted her heart to an unknown stranger yesterday and she could no longer think of leading her life without his presence

Geet: Ma mujhe kaise pata chalega k mujhe kya faisla lena chaihiye? [Mom how would I get to know what should be my decision?]

Rano: Geet ye dil ka faisla hai jo tera dil kahe wahi karna saari duniya galat ho sakthi hai par dil kabhi galat nahi ho saktha [Geet this is the decisison of your heart do what your heart wants u to do the whole world can be wrong but your heart will never betray u]

Rano kissed her forehead and went to welcome the guests

Geet closed her eyes and she knew what her decision should be she decided to tell the boy who had brought the marriage proposal that she was in love with someone else and she will never be able to give the place that her love possesses in her heart to someone else

Rano lead Geet to the living room. Geet did not lift her eyes even for a second. The boy's parents were busy singing praises of her beauty but Geet and the boy were not ready to speak anything infact the boy was also not looking at Geet maybe he was too shy or there were some reasons behind this behaviour of his

Their parents felt that maybe both of them are feeling uncomfortable due to their presence so they decided to give them some privacy.

Both of them were taken to a different room so that they could speak to each other and get to know each other well

They were standing in such a way that their back was facing each other

Both of them decided to speak

Together: Ji main wo' [I wanted to..]

Both of them stopped

Boy: Aap pehle kahiye [Pls go ahead]

Geet: Ji main aapse kuch kehna chahthi thi dekhiye meri baato ko galat mat samajiyega par main aapse shadi nahi kar sakthi [I wanted to say something to u pls don't get me wrong but I can't accept this marriage proposal]

Boy: Main bhi aapse yahi kehna chahtha tha kyunki main kisi aur se pyar karta hoon [I too wanted to say the same thing as I love someone else]

Geet was relieved after hearing this

Geet: Aap nahi jaante k aapne meri kitni badi problem solve kardi waise congratulations mujhe yakeen hai aap jis ladki se pyar karte ho wo kafi lucky hogi [Thanks a ton u solved a major problem of mine by the way congratulations I am sure that the girl would b really lucky to have got someone like u]

Boy: Meri kismat mein uska pyar shayad nahi hai main jisse pyar karta hoon uska naam tak nahi jaanta bus usse ek mulakat mein janmo janmo ka rishta baandh aaya [I am not lucky enough to get her love as I don't even know the name of the girl who rules my heart I met her only once and it felt as if I know her from ages]

Geet: Ajeeb baat hai meri bhi yahi situation hai najaane main usse kaha dhundungi par ye sach hai k uske bagair main jee nahi payungi [It's strange I am also trapped in the same situation but yes this is the truth I won't be able to survive without him]

Boy: Main usse kal raat Disco mein mila tha [I had met her at the disco yesterday]

Geet felt something strange and she went ahead with the gamble

Geet: Humne ek dusre k saath apni problem bhi share ki [We shared each other's problem as well]

The boy's heart started beating rapidly as he felt that maybe she was indeed the same girl

Boy: Hum dono ne saath mein dance bhi kiya barsaat k dhuno par [ we danced together on the rhythmic tunes of the rain]

Geet had a smile on her face

Geet: Usne mujhe apne pyar ka ehsaas dila diya par mera jawaab sune bagair hi waha se chala gaya [He made me realize his love but before I could give him an answer he left from there]

Maan: Kya karta Beauty tumhara Beast nahi jaanta tha k tum bhi usse pyar karne lagi ho [ what else could I have done Beauty as ur Beast was not aware that u too had started loving him]

As soon as Geet hears the word beauty and beast she turned around and found a smiling Maan in front of her eyes

She crushed herself in his embrace

Geet: Kaha chale gaye the aap ek baar bhi nahi socha k aapke bagair mera kya hoga? [Where did u go you didn't even think wht would have happened to me in your absence?]

Maan: Beauty main bhi tumhare hi tarah tadap raha tha issi liye toh maine ye faisla kiya k iss shadi se inkaar kar dunga [Beauty I was also going through the same set of emotions that u were going through that's why I decided to disapprove this marriage proposal]

Geet: Kitni ajeeb baat haina Beast kal tak hum sochthe the k ek ajnabee k saath puri zindagi hum kaise guzar sakthe hai aur aaj humari soch ek hi pal mein badal gayi [It's strange Beast we used to think that we won't be able to lead our life with a stranger but today our thoughts have changed so drastically]

Maan: Beauty ye dil k risthe hai jise khud khuda apne haatho se tarashtha hai sach kehthe hai log kahi na kahi koi na koi har kisi k liye bana hai aur sahi waqt aane par hume humara humsafar mil jaata hai puri kayinaat hume uss khaas insaan ko dhundne mein madat karthi hai aur ek na ek din hothe hothe pyar ho hi jaata hai aur dheere dheere ye ek pal ki mulakat ek aise atuth bandhan mein band jaathi hai jismein k unn doh shaksiyas ki dhadkane ek dusre ka naam lekar hi dhadakthi hai [Beauty this is the relationship of the heart that God has created with his own hands' it is the truth that somewhere or the other someone special is made for everyone in this world and we meet that person at the right moment of time and gradually this small meet turns into a lifetime bond wherein the two hearts fall in love to such an extent that they start beating with each other's name]

Geet: I love u Beast oops aapka naam kya hai? [I love u Beast oops... what's your good name?]

Maan: Maan aur tumhara? [Maan and yours?]

Geet: Geet

Maan: Aaj se na tum Geet ho aur naahi main Maan aaj se hum Maaneet kehlange aur tum iss Maan ki Geet aur main Geet ka Maan [From today u r no longer Geet and I am no longer Maan we r Maaneet and u r Maan's Geet and I am Geet's Maan]

Maan lifted her face by holding her chin and took permission through his eyes'Geet encircled her arms around his neck and granted him the permission

Finally Maan captured her lips into a loving and soul searing kiss wherein they promised each other to remain together throughout their life by dedicating each other's existence to their love for a lifetime

THE END

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Love-Piya

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Ek main hoon aur ek tu Thread 1
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
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yaay i gt here 1st 🥳loll
mind blowing update Piya 👏
d song sequence..d pics were amazing 👏👏
n den d ending was awesome 😍

Edited by luv_GurTi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww...That was so cute...
I mean Love in first meeting itself...and that too to complete strangers...
And they even kissed...
But then Maan went away not even caring to know about how his Beauty might be feeling...

Magar as they say...Jinhe milna hota hain woh milkar hi rehte hain...hihi...
Their parents had actually chosen them only for each other...But they never knew...They had their eyes down all the while...

But what I liked the most was the bit where they refused to go ahead with their wedding and went on telling the reason till they finally realised they were talking about each other only...

The part where Maan says " kya karta Beauty tumhare Beast " something like this...I really liked it...

Wonderful OS piya...

Edited by zahra15 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi thanks 4 da rocking intense emotaionl n superb update! Beautifully written! they confessed n r happy! Please psot epilogue! sorrry cld nt lyk the update error in posting😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm ! sorry tried again bt cld nt like the update!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome part...
loved it...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow simply superb..
loved it to d core..
a beautiful OS ..
loved beauty n d beast..
thanx a lot for d pm ...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely dear, i knew that the boy and the girl is maaneet.
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Amazing update👏
Loved maaneet moment😳
Song sequence and pictures are awesome and perfect⭐️
Lovely ending⭐️

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Loved it to the core...!!

It was an Awessumm OS yaar...!!!!

Really liked it sooo much...!!!!

And ur shayari was just wow.. cherry on the top...!!!

Hayeee Mere beauty and beast MAANEET...!!!!

Just Loved their character in this OS...!!!

Uff I will go gaga on this u knw na...😆

MindBlowing... Fantastic... Superb UPdate...!!!!

Luv ya sooo much my Shona...!!!!!

Hugs to u...!!!!

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