MG FF- LOVE AND HATE - THREAD 2

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#311

part 17
awesome part...
though painful but they all deserve it...
i cant believe that Annie will stoop still more...
being a girl herself and being the DAUGHTER of her family she still did all these...
disgusting...
let her rot in jail forever...
what is this Raj part in this?
well let them all feel the pain and guilt...
yaar give a sneak peak of Geet's parents too...
Maan came in her life later only how could the parents do this to their own child...
cont soon dear...

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meettu

@meettu

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#312

kab milega ab next part??????????

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#313

Originally posted by: sadavirk
mindblowing but u didn't show handa's remorse i love to see them crying because i hate them for what they did continue sooon ...

i know i did not show handa right now as i kept them reserved...

i need them later so just wait for few updates..

may be u will get them soon

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#314

Originally posted by: abinash079
awesome update
u have portrayed the state of maan perfectly
just wanna ask u u said that maan has to pay a heavy prise is it over or not
do tell
and continue soon

thx for liking it..

as per me maan has got too much now..

he paid his price by loosing geet and his child as he is told tat geet is dead.. and this is the biggest price he paid for his sins..

but yes still he have to.. because he have to face geet and see her suffer with his on eyes. unless and untill he sees wat he has done to her ho will he repent for his sins...

but according to me now he has paid the price

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#315

Originally posted by: punam2712
Many have asked me to change the story line but lovilies m really sorry as I cant. Emotions and pain is the main part of my story and now if I change the story line I will loose all my interest and so do u.

PLEASE DONT CHANGE THE STORY

WE LIKE THE STORY BECAUSE IT IS DIFFERENT AND FULL OF FEELINGS WHETHER LOVE, HATRED, REVENGE, REMORSE, ETC

YOU ARE A FABULOUS WRITER

thank u so much dear... and i really appreciste tat u all like..

i will not change the storyline ...

will continue the same

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#316

Originally posted by: asherkhirad
whos vicky???

Vicky is Maan's younger brother dear..

he is in US right now for his study

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#317

Loved the update.awsome bloody bitch annie qfter doing sooo much wid geet
still making everyone life hell nd destroying geet image in front of everyone.
I cried reading dat part whts her fault..dat she was loved by handas nd khuranas nd especially maan dat she had to face somemuch nd after death bi.
Anie hate u...nd handas nd khurana deserve dis kind of anie behaviour wht mistreating geet.
She deserved dis nd maan did right by sending her to jail...
Nd qryan nd sam desreved it after playing wid geet chatacter now waitinv for prem punishment.
Nd handas nd khuranas deserve more punishment
no soul left wid dem nthg..
Lyk human beings living widout heartbeat
finally maqn parents cum to know abt maan deeds how he raped geet.
If geet did wrong u wil behave lyk dis.
Leaving alone.in outhouse living life lyk hell. Deserved it..must be shame on himself...
Pathetic...
Awsome precap.maan vicky face to face...
Wht will vicky do after dis? Going to be awsome.
Maan pain ws awsome...
He must regret his every deeds
waiting for dat moment when he wil cum to know dat geet is alive
wht wil he do den.

Must say one thing u r a awsome writer.the way u write ur ff wid feelings truely unbelievable..
Alaways make everyone cry.
Waiting for the next.[/QUOTE

ok as far as annie is concerned shen is one such person who has been keeping jealousy inside her without knowing wat it is...

her part is not yet over but just gave a break now.. want to concentrate on Maan and geet.. annie never loved her family..

sameera will be back into picture after sometime... and as far as prem is concerned its a mystry which will be revealed later.. he is the most mysterrious person.. he whole identity will be revealed soon...

Maan's parents had to know about maan's sins as his soul punishment was to live a life without any relations. and i hope i did justice to it.

as far as vicky is concerned you will know it in my next part.

ok u asked me when i will update next..

dear i really dont know.. today is the first time m replying to comments..

so as i get time i will update.. but promise it will be soon

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#318

Originally posted by: maneetshauna
Awesome update shoba..it was too good👏...could really feel the pain while reading it😭😭,most of the time its destiny game..And shoba do not change the plot re,write as u thought,outcome will be always good ..will b waiting for ur next update😛

thank u so much beena..

and u r right when destiny plays its game u cant do anything.. u will suffer wat u have to..

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anyaa

@16anyaa.gurti

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#319

Hey di! Have been Reading ur ff. I dnt have words for describing how i felt. Its jst so beautiful. Just hatts off 2 u dear as being a reader i can feel their pain so i can imagine how u must hv felt writing it😭. You bring out the emotions tooo Beautifully👏. And ya waiting for their encounter eagerly.Pls jaldi dono ko mila dena.😭 Update soon Di.
Pls di could u add me to ur PM list???

- LUV Anyaa😳

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#320

Originally posted by: tamanna1391
the way you described the emotions it made me crymaan condition

annine stll have the audacity to telling lie to media good maan punished everyone prem bach gaya uska bhi kuch karna jaldi so dadi told maan parents about his deeds and they throw him maan in outhouse and in full remorses and going to orphinage for peace old lady asking about his pain maan condition worsen and now his life is full of remorses and the song is fab and suited the situation and please never think of changing the story line

thank u so much.. loved ur pictures..

yes annie will derserve wat she has to and as far as prem is concerned he has amajor part yaar.. he is amystery person.. i can just tell u now tat he is no the one who maan knows.. bahut saare raaz hain khuranna's ke jo slowly slowly unfold hojange..

remember my title love and hate.. its not only about only maaneet but khuranna's also...

how deeds of some people affect the life of others.. wat hatred is... so wait and enjoy it...