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Posted: 13 years ago
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it seems to be interesting concept
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the concept sounds nice...
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LOVELY CONCEPT >>SOUNDS INTERESTING &
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Nice cncept..nd waiting fr mre..
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Awesome... Superb... Fantastic intro... Waiting egerly...
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Character Sketch

Maan Singh Khuranna

Top Businessman in India. Business world fears with his name. the eldest of Khuranna Family. A rude, arrogant, dominating person. Right now expanding his Construction business all over the world and has succeeded. Family has no say in front of him and his word is the last. Is madly and crazily in love with his childhood love. His love for her is beyond his imagination. Except the khuranna's and Handa's no one else is aware about Maan and Geet's love.

Savitridevi Khuranna

Grandmother of MSK. The only person who Maan atleast listens is his grandmother. Adorable and loving grandmother to her grand childrens. Loves geet to the core more than Maan, but only sacred for her.

Rajveer Singh Khuranna

Father of MSK. very pround of Maan. Friend of Mohinder Handa.

Priya Khuranna

a loving and doting mother to her children. The only question in her mind is about Maan and Geet.

Vicky and Anvesha

Younger to Maan. Though not sacred of theit parents but just the mere name of Maan makes them to shut their mouth.

Mohinder Handa

childhood buddy with Ranjveer Singh Khuranna. Has his own business of textiles. Down to earth and loves his family and the khuranna's to the core.

Rano Handa

as usual a loving mother to her children. thinks of only geet.

Prem Handa

elder son of Handa's. same age as Maan and joined his father's business after finishing his study. Though not so rude like Maan but very protective towards Geet, Vicky and Annie. Engaged to Annie.

Geet Handa

fun loving, adorable, easily gels with people. Loves both the familie. Vicky her partner in all pranks, though Annie supports them but due to Prem and Maan always backs out at the last moment. Loves Maan but with a fear. Her only dream is to live with her love but not with his dangerous love.

Dev Raichand

has an eye on geet ever since he has seen her. Is not aware about Maan and Geet's relation.

Other characters will be introduced as time comes.

Edited by sdlife19 - 13 years ago
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amaznggg cs
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cont sooonnn
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Part 1

The Handa's and Khuranna's were very happy as Rano after two continuous miscarriages had delivered their princess. After giving birth to Prem, six years ago, she could not give birth but god had written the best gift, their princess in their life. Yes today Rano had given birth to the princess of the Handa's and khuranna's. Everyone was happy and exicited. Maan and Prem were 6 six years old with only two months difference between them. Annie and Vicky were twins and had had just turned one. It was the 10 day after Rano giving birth to their princess and it was the day where their princess would come to their Haveli. The Handa haveli was decorated with an aura like the historic haveli's. It was not less than any festival for them. They had waited for this one moment for six long years when even doctors had given their words. Both the families had taken extra care of Rano and Savitridevi and Priya would literally spend the whole day with Rano at HH. But now their princess was all with them. They had to fight with all oddes for the little joy. Maan and Prem were very happy for Rano though they did not understand wat was all this but seeing Rano happy they were too happy. Annie and vicky were all unaware about it but just knew tat they would get a small cute baby in their house whom they have to look after.

Rano entered the Handa Haveli with their princess while Priya did the aarti for them. She helped rano to settle in the room where everyone was present. Everyone took their turn to hold the little princess in their hand whereas the little children just stood watching the little girl from going to one person to the other. Maan was all looking only at the small princess with some unknown happiness in his eyes. He was too small to know wat it was but he did not like the way others were touching her and holding her. His small mind only told him tat she belonged to him and no one else. Princess started crying when she was been taken by all and tat's when Maan said.

Maan: Mom aapp meri princess ko rola rahi ho. Aap sab bahut bure hain. dekh nahi sakthe ki meri choti princess ro rahi hain. dijiye ushe choti maa ko dijeye varna main kisi ko bhi princess ke paas aane nahi dunga.

( mom why are you making my princess to cry. You all are bad. Cant you see my small princess is crying. Just give her to choti maa otherwise I wont allow any one to come near her.)

Priya: yeh dekho itna chota sa hai par ab hi se apna haq deekha raha hain. Rano main keh rahi hoon apni beti ko Maan se dur rakho warna yeh tumara Maan hume princess ke paas bhi nahi aane dega.

( just see him he is so small and how is he showing his rights on her. Rano m warning you keep Maan away from your princess otherwise he wont even allow us to come close to her)

Rano: Priya kyu mere bte ko tang kar rahi hain. humari princess pe sabse jyada haq tho sirf Maan ka hi hain. tumhe yaad hai na jab yeh humari khok mein thi tab Maan hamesha kehta tha ki choti Maa, jab main bada hojaunga na tab main humari princess se shaadi karunga. Tho iske anusur ispe tho humse jyada Maan ka hi haq hai na.

( Priya why are you troubling my son. Maan has the most rights on our princess. Don't you remember tat when she was in my womb he would always say tat choti maa when I will grow up I will marry her. So as per tat he has all rights on her)

Dadima: Rano Maan abhi chota hain aur yeh sab woh kya jaane. Bada hoke pata nahi kya karega.

( Rano Maan is still small and wat he knowa about this. god knows wat he will do when he grows up)

Maan: nahi dadima main chota tho jarrura hoon, par yeh sirf meri princess hain, sirf meri GEET.

( no dadima I know tat m small but she is only my princess, my GEET)

Priya: Geet, yeh naam kab raka aapne beta.

( Geet, when did you keep tat name for her)

Maan: Choti maa, aapne kaha hain na ki yeh humari princess hain tho main iska naam GEET, GEET HANDA rakha chahtha hoon. Yeh sirf meri Geet hogi aur kisi ki nahi.

( choti maa, you said na tat she is my princess, so I want her to be named as Geet, Geet handa. She will only be my geet and no one elses)

Rano: Geet kitna acha naam hain na. bilhul theek kaha Maan ne, Maan ki Geet.

(Geet so pretty name. You are right Maan, only Maan ki Geet)

All the three ladies were shocked to see the authority in Maan's voice. He had literally declared tat Geet was only his and no one else had the right on her. Being a mere six years old boy he unknowing had declared his rights on geet. Unknowing he had bonded geet with him. A realtion with was done with authority and dominance from the one and only one MAAN SINGH KHURRANA at the age of six.

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Years passed by and Maan grew more and more possessive towards geet. He literally would dominate her and no one would dare to say anything against him. Geet was being pampered by all in their own way but she enjoyed Maan's company very much. Though Maan was always in his books but had his eyes on her. He would make geet to sit in his room all the while he studied. He would not allow any one not even Prem, Vicky and Annie to come close to her and take her away. But Vicky and Annie would always snick geet away from Maan and later they would get the prize for taking geet away from him. Maan would always take decisions for geet and no one was allowed to speak for her. He would also punish her if she goes against his will. As years passed by Maan and Prem became busy with their studies and Geet, Vicky and Annie would enjoy their little time they get. They would do such pranks on their parents which would bring joy in the family. But when it was time for Maan and Prem to be at home it was all quite. Though Maan and Prem had same rules and regulations Prem was bit softer than Maan, but he never interfered in Maan's decision for geet. He knew tat Maan would never be wrong at tat.

Maan and Prem were 18 now and were at their college after finishing their 10+2. Vicky and Annie were in 9th class and Geet in 8th class. Geet was grown into most beautiful girl with her natural beauty. All three studied in the same school and Vicky was given strict orders by Maan to take care of the two girls. But instead of taking care of them he would join geet in troubling the other students and teachers. Annie would take part but was bit sacred of Maan and Geet. She was always told tat she have to behave properly as she would be Prem's wife. Though Annie did not understand the meaning of love but would love to be with Prem and Prem always would care for her. He would take care of her studies but never imposed his decisions on her unlike Maan. It was a similar day at school when Vicky and Geet had planned a prank on one of the group of boys who would trouble the school girls with their comments and our geet being the sherni had decided to teach those boys a lesson. She asked Vicky and Annie for help. Vicky being Vicky instantly agreed whereas Annie stayed out of it warning them about Maan. They were no where to listen to her and started with their plan. But it was their bad luck as their plan back fired to them.

Geet: Vicky tu na yeh note jaake unh boys ko de aa. Woh dekh woh waha kade hain humari tarah peet karke.

( Vicky you just go and give this letter to tat boy. See he is standing there with his back towards us)

Vicky: geet ish note mein kya hain. aur agar hum padke gaye tho.

( geet wats there is this. and if we are caught)

Geet: Vicky tu na itna darr mat. Ish note mein ek letter hain jaha maine aise hi ek random ladki ka naam likha hain aur ush group ke leader ko girls washroom mein milne bhulaya hain. aur haan jab woh waha aayega tab main dheere se washroom ka door bandh karke teachers ko bhulaungi aur tab un he pata chalega ki ladki ko pareshan karne ka anjaam kya hota hain. haina acha idea.

( Vicky don't get so sacred. Its just a letter. I have written one random girld name and called him to t he washroom. Once he will be there I will close the door and call the teachers and than he will know wat he gets to tease the girls.)

Vicky: geet tu pagal hain. agar koi gadbad hui tho tum janthi ho na kya hoga.

( geet are you mad. And if anything g wrong happens)

Geet: Vicky tu na bilkul darrpook hain. chal jhod tu mat mein khud hi de aati hoon.

( Vicky you are a coward. Forget it I will only do tat)

Vicky: nahi nahi main de aata hoon.

( no no I will do)

Vicky slowly went and without anyone seeing him he threw the paper near tat boy. The boy saw some paper and it had message for him. There was only s girls name written on it and he thought it was for him. As per the note tat boy went to the girls washroom and geet made sure tat none of the girls were there. She slowly locked the door from outside and called the teachers saying tat the washroom was closed from inside and she could hear some boys talking inside. All the teachers came and geet told them tat she had come here and heard a boy talking so she closed the door from outside. The boy was screaming to open the door and when it was opened he was shocked to see the teachers standing there. He looked at geet and heard her telling tat he was the same boy who used to tease girls in school and now he was inside the girls washroom. The teachers checked the whole washroom and were relieved tat there were no girls but were angry on the boy. The principal had given him a last warning by calling his parents and the boy was hell angry on geet . Hde knew tat she was a Handa but he was also from one of the richest families in Delhi. It though of taking his revenge from geet. The boys planned a perfect plan for geet. They found out tat geet had an extra class for her dance practice today and Vicky and Annie would not be with her. But they were unaware tat whenever geet had any extra class it was Maan who would come to pick her after his college and so was today.
While Geet was coming out she remembered tat she left her school uniform in the changing room so she went to collect while her friends left. The boys had then perfect time and slowly reached near the changing room where they saw Geet coming out. Geet was in her own world and did not see them, she walked and dashed one of them and was shocked to see tat she was surrounded by 5 boys. First she put up a brave face but later seeing them she became sacred. She tried to run from there but one of them caught her. They threw her bag and other things away and tried to catch hold of her waist. The boys only had an intention of trying her to tell tat never to come in their way but seeing a pure beauty in front of them they had different plan. They tried to some how force themselves on her when she screamed for help. Maan who was waiting for her at the gate was getting restless and decided to come inside, when he reached near the changing room he heard her voice and came running but the scene in front of him made him to loose himself. He saw tat one of the boy was trying to kiss his geet and she was struggling to get out of his grip. He could not wait there and literally pounced on them, beating them to death. He had lost his self control by seeing his jaan in tat condition and this angered him more. He would have killed them if his driver would not pulled him away who had come in search of them inside. Geet was now safe but seeing Maan so angry and beating them she only feared more. She knew tat Maan was over protective about her but this side of his she had seen the first time. Maan holds her by her wrist and drags her to the car. The drive was silent and Maan did not say a word to her. He was angry on himself tat he could not protect her. He took geet to KM as he knew tat Rano would be there. He once again dragged her inside the KM and threw her on the sofa where Priya, Rano and Dadiam were sitting. they were shocked to see Maan so angry and being harsh on geet. Maan called out to Vicky and Annie and they came running.

Priya: Maan yeh sab kya hain. geet ko yeh chot kaisi lagi.

( maan wat is all this. and how come geet is hurt)

Maan: aap khud hi poochiye mom.

( mom its better you only ask her)

Rano: geet beta yeh sab kya hain. Aapne kuch galat tho nahi kiya na jiski wajahse aap ko chot algi aur Maan gusse mein hain.

( gee twats all this. I hope you did not do anything and made Maan aangry by hurting yourself)

Geet was all quite and just kept crying. She hugged Dadima and kept looking down. She did not care to see anyone. By now Vicky and Annie had come there.

Maan: Vicky school mein kya hua tha ki woh ladke geet ke saath bathameezi se pesh aa rahe the.

( Vicky wat had happened in school tat thoe boys were harassing geet)

Vicky: bro school mein kya, kuch bhi tho nahi hua tha.

( bro nothing happened in school)

Maan: Vicky mein aakhir baar pooch raha hoon. Just tell me wat you both have done.

( Vicky for the last time m asking you, just tell me wat was all tat)

Vicky was all sacred and looked at geet. Geet saw Vicky and he realized tat it was something related to those boys. Annie knew tat if she keeps quite Maan will be more angry and she told him everything wat these two had done. Maan was heel angry and just kept staring at Vicky and Geet. He knew tat though Geet was sacred of him she never stopped all her pranks. He just holds her and drags her to his room closing the door with a bang. Others were shocked to see him but dare not say a word to him knowing how possessive he was for geet. They had seen him like this many times but this was beyond their imagination.

In Maan's room.

Once he closed the door he pushed geet on the bed and said.

Maan: Tumari himmat kaisi hui geet. Tum yeh sab soch bhi kaisi sakthi ho. Shayad tum bhool rahi ho ki tum sirf meri ho and tumara koi haq nahi bantha apne aap ko kisi bhi mushibat mein dalne ka. Do you get me.

( how dare you geet. How could you even think about this. I think you forgot tat you belong to me and you don't have any right to put yourself in any danger. Do you get me)

Geet was hell sacred seeing his eyes filled with anger. She could not speak a word to him and was literally shivering. But Maan continued.

Maan: Tum janthi ho jab maine ush ladke ko tumhe haath lagathi dekha tho mujhe kaise laga, nahi janthi ho na, aur jaan bhi kaise sakthi ho. Kabhi samjhane ki koshish ki hian tumne mujhe. Ab tum bachi nahi ho jo tume har baar yeh batata rahu ki kya karna hain aur kya nahi. Tum janthi ho ki tumpar sirf mera haq hain aur kisi ka nahi. Agar tumare paas kisi ne aane ki himmat bhi ki tho main ushe jaan se maar dalunga. Samjhi tum. Tum sirf meri ho, sirf meri Maan ki Geet aur yeh baat hamesha se yaad rakhana

( Do you know how I felt when tat boy was touching you, no you don't understand and will never understand. Do you atleast try to understand me. You are no a kid anymore tat I should tell you wat not to do. Do you get it tat no one has any right on you except me. If anyone dares to come close to you than I will kill tat person. You are only mine only Maan's Geet and remember this always)

Geet could sense his anger but did not say anything. She was all the way more sacred by hearing his words. She had seen Man beating those boys and particularly the one who tried kissing her. she knew tat he would do wast he says and this thought made her more sacred.

Geet: Sorry.. main'.. aage' se' aisa' kuch'. Nahi '. Karungi' sorry'

( sorry.. I ' will.. never.. do' this' again' sorry)

Maan: its better you don't do all tat. Its better you understand tat you are just not a simple girl but you belong to Maan Singh Khuranna. No one dares to lay their eyes on Maan Singh Khuranna's girl. No one dares to look at Maan's princess. No one dares to think about you even in their dreams. No one has any right on you except me. No one can come close to you like the way I come. I love you and no one can love you more than me.

He said this words and hugged her tight literally breaking her bones. Geet was still shivering with his authority. She did not know wat was all this but she could feel Maan's anger and his overprotective nature for her. She has been seeing Maan like this since she could understand and she had also seen her own parents and brother not interfering with Maan when it came to her. She liked his possessiveness for her but was sacred for herself. She knew tat she felt for Maan but did not know wat was it. He always said tat she belongs to him and he belonged to her.

After the incident Maan had warned Vicky from all this and he had asked Rajveer and Mohinder to hire security for all the three. He did not wanted any other risk. He had also warned geet to stop all this and said tat if she would not listen he would take her to London for their further studies along with him as he had cancelled his plan for going to London to complete his further higher studies just because he did not want to stay away from geet. He would now drop and pick geet in his car while Vicky and Annie's car would follow his car.

Maan ka ishq uska Junoon tha,

Na chah the hue bhi uski Deewangi har hadh par kar jathi!!!!

Maan ka ishq uska Junoon tha,

Na chah the hue bhi apne pyar ko darr ke aaghosh mein letha raha!!!!!

Maan ka ishq Maan ka Junoon tha!!!!!!!!!!!

Precap: Geet 18 and Maan 24 years.

So hope you all like this part. I know you all wanted some tadka part but I had to give the introduction. How Maan is so possessive, wats his mind set and all. Why geet is so sacred and all tat. So hope you will like this and comment. So from next part I will next the story on line..

Love you all..

Edited by sdlife19 - 13 years ago

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