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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: mel420

😆 milgi fursate from gurti's profile and hello princess should sing not you and give me mine brains back right now who will I update without them

😆😆😆 Excuse me...if u r not commenting...its also all GurTians problem 😭 and I am sad, they are derservable 😭

I send ur brain in a package to London 😆

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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: music_girl
😆😆😆 Excuse me...if u r not commenting...its also all GurTians problem 😭 and I am sad, they are derservable 😭
I send ur brain in a package to London 😆

hey I did comment anyway will be waiting for the package thx in adavnce

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: mel420

hey I did comment anyway will be waiting for the package thx in adavnce

U have to comment everyday 24 Hrs 😃

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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: music_girl
U have to comment everyday 24 Hrs 😃

Nahiii now my BP is rising

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: mel420

Nahiii now my BP is rising

why😲

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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

Guys princess was getting bored so her I am to torture you all with my update. Guys if you hate the update don't blame me Francessa had my brains. Yes she has send it back but I didn't receive the package yet 😛 No but jokes apart Ruchi are you feeling better sweets. Take care of yourself. Love ya 🤗

Part 3
Ruchi and Nisha where getting ready for the party.

N:Ruchi where going on the scooter. Mom said yes cool na
R:😆 so what did you this time to butter mom
N:😲 babaij dehko sab mutjpe kaishe ilzaam lehgathe hai

Ruchi just laughed. The girls where ready. The bid goodbye to mom and left for the party.

Maan had, had a call from Adi. If he wanted to build a mall in HP he needed personally to take permission from Ms. Shighania.Nothing happend in HP without her premission. Maan left for HP. Maan's car suddenly stopped. Maan walked out off the car. Dham his engine. He tried calling Adi but he was not having no signal. He looked around he saw a nearby house looks like a party was going on. On the door was writing Sara's sweet sixteen. Maan walked towards the door and rang the bell. Sara's mother openend the door. But sara's mother didn't react she kept staring at him. She reconized him. He was geet death husband. Then how come he was standing in front of her door, Maybe he just looked like him. yes that must be it. She told him to come in. Adi told maan the other car would be there in the morning. Sara's mom told Rani told maan that he could stay here till his husband came. then her husband would drop him where every he needed go. The reason of Rani's politness was that somewhere she had a feeling that this was Geet's husband. She needed to now more about him. Maan thanked Rani. The door bell rang again. It where the neigbours they needed Rani's help. Rani left a while. She persumed nothing could go wrong. And left. Nish was talking and didn't look where she was walking. She bumped into Maan, whom had a juice glass in his hand that spilled on Nisha's dress (ohoh). Nisha glared at him. Like she would eat him raw. Nisha started shouting.

N:Can't you see where you walking eh fool you ruined my entire dress.

Maan looked up to look at the girl who had the courage to yell at MSK.

M:Excuse me but you where not looking at is this a way to talk the elder.

Nisha looked at shock at maan he looked like his dad. Nisha knew her behavior was wrong. She didn't knew what got in to her. She was about to say sorry. When maan spoke again.

M:Haven't your mother learned you any manners

Ow he didn't Sara thought Nisha would not leave him now, cause no one says anything about Geet or else Nisha can get hell angry and she forgets whom is standing in front of her.

N:How dare you talking about Manners. You wouldn't now what manners where when they would hit you in You

Nisha was about to grab Maan's collar. When Ruchi came from behind and hold her arm.

R:Stop it
N:You now what he said
R:dad

Ruchi looked in shock at Maan. Maan looked at the girl calling him dad.

he freezed for a moment. She reminded him of geet so much. The innocence, the sweetness in her voice and that look in her eyes. No it couldn't did that mean geet was still alive and so was his daughter. before Maan could react he heard the girl who was about to attack him.

N:He can't be our dad oky he just looks like him. ehhh he is too big of a jerk to be are dad.

Sara gave Nisha a shocked look. Nisha didn't think when she was angry but now she was really crossing her limits. Why was she over reacting.

(Sara)
S:Nisha calm down what's wrong with you
M:Wait you (He pointed at Nisha) and her(Ruchi) are sisters
N:Who the
R:Nisha bas yes where twins.

Now Maan was sure hmmm the hot tempered one defo went on him. A smiled crept his face and before he knew it he hugged them both tied. Ruchi started sobbing. Sara looked shocked and Nisha pushed him away.

M:I am sorry kiddo for talking to you like that
N:It's ok but don't you dare touching me
R:Nisha he is our dad (Ruchi said between sobs)
N:No he is not
M:Nisha please I know this all is shocking
N:wait you my dad right what is my surname
M:Khurana
N:Wrong

Ruchi looked in shock was Nisha right so he wasn't her dad. A drop fell from her eye. Maan saw that and wanted to wipe it away but Nisha stopped him.

M:Handa your surname is Handa
N:Wrong again mister
R:Are surname is Shingania
M:what shighania but

Nisha grabbed Ruchi's hand let's go they left from there with a broken Ruchi. She thought she had finally found her father how wrong she was. Maan stood there shocked he closed his eyes he thought his Geet was still alive his hope shatterd again but why the hell did she call him dad. He needed to now more about him. He texted Adi. Adi texted back.

Adi:
There the daughters ms shinghania the one you have to meet.
Maan:
Fool I need full information
Adi:
Her full name is Geet Shinghania. Her husband died after 3 months after their marriage. Ruchi and Nisha's date a birth is **-**-**** Geet has a lot of respect in HP cause she has saved a lot of girls out of the hand of men who beat, cheat and treath there wife as dirt. She has given girls a equel position next to men. She has changed the thought of thinking in Hp Where men thought women where nothing sir.

Maan closed his eyes he was almost sure that this was his geet. a tear pricked maan's eyes.

Maan:
Adi what do you now about her husband.

Adi:
Nothing much only that his full name is Maan shighania.

Maan:
Adi give me the adress

Adi:
Sure I already. remember.

Maan:
Right

precap: past and why did nisha react this way.

Okay almost every ff I read is setting quotes so I thought cause my holidays are over and I will get busy again her is my quote I want atleast 10 people to sing a song 😆 and I mean it. Oh and it has to be your own song so now pasting got it folks and then you will get the next update She I have lost it completely that happens when your brainless 😆

Next:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/55743988

Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

rres ---------edited-------

GUYS IF U THINK AM RIGHT PLZ LIKE 😆

First of all...sorry I took mel's brain...😆😆😆

Now she crushed me under 😆

her brain i tell u...think 100 km far away ...no sweat

coming to the update...she really lost her brain for using Amie Jackson and Miley Cyrus even though I know she loves MC but really 😆

It's sad...but Nisha shant behave like that...and Maan knew it was he daughter...but the name change...

Guys beware we are talking about Mel and ehr weird imaginations! Plz beware she'll twist everything in a moment 😆

Edited by music_girl - 13 years ago

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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: music_girl
why😲

QUOTE] why😲
cause I have to vote 24 hrs he that's stress full😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: mel420

QUOTE] why😲

cause I have to vote 24 hrs he that's stress full😆
at least everyday dear here's ur song:

Frankie " perferences : AL

"I'm With You"

I'm standing on a bridge
I'm waiting in the dark
I thought that you'd be here by now
There's nothing but the rain
No footsteps on the ground
I'm listening but there's no sound

Isn't anyone tryin to find me?
Won't somebody come take me home
It's a damn cold night
Trying to figure out this life
Won't you take me by the hand
Take me somewhere new
I don't know who you are
But I... I'm with you
I'm with you

I'm looking for a place
I'm searching for a face
Is anybody here I know
'Cause nothing's going right
And everything's a mess
And no one likes to be alone

Isn't anyone trying to find me?
Won't somebody come take me home
It's a damn cold night
Trying to figure out this life
Won't you take me by the hand
Take me somewhere new
I don't know who you are
But I... I'm with you
I'm with you

Oh why is everything so confusing
Maybe I'm just out of my mind
Yeah-he-yaa, Yeah-he-yah, Yeah-he-yah, Yeah-he-yah, Yeaaah!

It's a damn cold night
Trying to figure out this life
Won't you take me by the hand
Take me somewhere new
I don't know who you are
But I... I'm with you
I'm with you

Take me by the hand
Take me somewhere new
I don't know who you are
But I... I'm with you
I'm with you

Take me by the hand
Take me somewhere new
I don't know who you are
But I... I'm with you
I'm with you
I'm with you...

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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: music_girl
rres ---------edited-------
GUYS IF U THINK AM RIGHT PLZ LIKE 😆

First of all...sorry I took mel's brain...😆😆😆

Now she crushed me under 😆

her brain i tell u...think 100 km far away ...no sweat

coming to the update...she really lost her brain for using Amie Jackson and Miley Cyrus even though I know she loves MC but really 😆

It's sad...but Nisha shant behave like that...and Maan knew it was he daughter...but the name change...

Guys beware we are talking about Mel and ehr weird imaginations! Plz beware she'll twist everything in a moment 😆