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jenny

@ajenn

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: mel420

thanks a lot how cute is this congrats aww I love it

Yeah.. cute just like me

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: ajenn

Yeah.. cute just like me

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Part 43
Maneet ran towards Geet and hugged him.

M:Mom it's all over na we will get a happy family now
G:Yes thx to you and you wonderful friends. You kids must be tired come I will bring you to be.

Geet put Maneet in his bed. When she walking down she heard a noise from the balcony of emma's room. She walked inside. Evelien was crying. Geet put a hand on her shoulder.Evelien turned to look. When she saw geet she looked away and wiped her tears away.Geet could see the pain in her eyes.

E:I am just leaving to my place don't worry
G:No evelien mom you don't have to leave but won't you tell me why you thought I stole Maan from Emma why you behaved that rudly towards me.
E:Emma used to tell me from the start how you used to flirt with every boy at school when Emma was not around. She told me that every one in school talked about your flirty behaviour. That's hwo she found out. I tried to tell Mohinder but he didn't want to hear a word against you. So I decided that I had to do something. I saw you as my own daughter yes but a daughter who had was a the wrong path. That's why I wanted you and Emma to stay together, so you would be scared to flirt.Emma then started telling me how difficult is was to stay with you, cause you would always talk bad about me.
G:I never
E:Geet you don't have to justify your self I now you could never do something liked that. I wish I would have find out sooner. Anyway she said that so that she didn't have to stay with you and she could flirt with guys. One day she came crying to me telling me that Maan was a new guy in school and they really liked her. maan said he wanted to be engaged to her and they would marry after two years. But she said you talked him out of it and stole him from her.I really started hating you. I hated your sight I thought you destroyed me little girls happiness by your cheap acts but it was Emma who was cheap you where a angel send straight from heaven.

Evelien started crying silently. She found it diffecult to tell everything to geet.Geet consult Evelien

E: I again tried to warn Mohinder but he wouldn't listen. I was so angery on you the day you where with maan and he bought that dress for you. i thought you must used your fake innocent face to get what you wanted. That's why I shouted on you on the terrace. Sorry geet
G:It's okay evelien mom
E:I am not worthy to be called mom
G:Shh don't say that. it wasn't your fault.
E:Why are you so good

Geet just smiled.

E:Trust me geet I didn't send those pictures. I swear. I would never fall so low that I would trow fall accused on a girl never.
G:I know I believe you
E:And I just wanted Emma to get married to Maan one side so that people wouldn't talk bad about your dad. I didn't want the world or your dad to think that is was my fault that I couldn't bring you up because I was just a stepmom. I tried so hard only if I knew that Emma was lying to me all the time.And at the other side I wanted Emma to marry Maan so that my girl could get the love of her life and be happy. How wrong I was. Latter when you left Emma came to me she told me Ronald tried to rape her. I told her that we would file a case against him. She told me not to do that or else you would be back and destroy in the house. You would make up some lie and come back and steal maan again from her. With a lot of diffuclty I said okay. I remember how she always said she sold her sould to ronald just be with maan, now I get the real meany of it. I am disgusted by mine own daughter Please I beg of you geet forgive me I am ready for any punishment. You just tell me

Geet just hugged Evelien somewhere she fell bad for her.

G:It's okay I forgive you people make mistakes.
E:Another thing about the funeral maan was against it he did it cause we told him. Trust me he didn't liked it but looks like his anger took the better of him
G:Hmm
E:I heard you guys are married
G:yes
E:Congo
G:Thank you and please don't blame yourself it's okay.
E:Thank you

Geet left while evelien cried the whole night thinking how her own blood deceived her.Geet went downstairs everyone had left to sleep. maan and mohinder where still sitting and talking. When they saw geet Mohinder stood up.

M:geet beta

Geet showed her hand and stopped him.

G:Please leave me alone I am tired
M:geet won't you listen to your daddy once
G:I am sorry be I am parentless
M:Please geet don't say that
G:Why cause you trust or because you loved me and defo didn't tell the whole world that I am that. Tell me Mohinder Handa why shouldn't say that.
M:Beta
G:Don't call me that. I am dead for you get that.

Mohinder couldn't take it anymore. Everything was getting to much for him. he got a heart attack. Geet and Maan rushed to the hospital. He was aloud to go to home after a couple of hours. geet got scared by the accident. And even though she was angery she decided bygoners to be bygoners. Mohinder and Geet had a heart to heart talk.After Mohinder was feeling a bit lighter geet went to her room she was looked outside the window. She fellt like her tears had dried up and her heart and turned cold. Geet was no more. Maneet's mom was standing here who didn feel anything for anyone. She didn't care about anything anymore expect for maneet cause enough was enough.

Insecure
In her skin
Like a puppet,
a girl on a string

Broke away
Learned to fly
If you want her back, gotta let her shine

So it looks like the joke's on you
'Cause the girl that you thought you knew

Maan walked inside he saw Geet standing with her back to him. he walked towards her and hugged her from behind.

M:Misty are you okay.

Geet freed herself. And gave a tight slap on Maan's face. Maan was to shokced to raect the first five minutes.

She's so gone
That's so over now
She's so gone
You won't find her around
You can look but you won't see
The girl I used to be
'Cause she
She's so gone

Maan came back to his senses when he heard geet's voice.

G:Let's make a couple of things clear. You are not allowed to touch me. We will share no realationship in realy. But before the world and specially maneet we will be a happy married couple. Is that clear.( okay ruchs I didn't seperate them physically but there souls are seperate now, hey you told me not to seprate them so physically I didn't shoulb be more precise😛anyway I kept my promise now you keep yours)
M:Geet no why are you talking like that I now you must be angry on me but geet please listen to me.
G:Mr. khurana there is nothing to listen to. And if you don't want to do that you can leave I can take care of maneet myself I will explain him.
M:No I will never leave my son
G:Fine then don't come close to me oh and another thing I am not angery on you I am just disgusted by myself that I could ever love such a egocentric, unsensible, heartless monster.
M:geet

Pain was evident in his voice, but geet couldn't care less her heart had turned ice cold. Maan walked over to geet and grabbed her hand. geet jerked it away.

G:Are you deaf didn't you just hear me.

Are you shocked?
Are you mad?
That you're missing out on who I really am

Now it looks like the joke's on you
'Cause the girl that you thought you knew

M:Geet please I love you

geet gave a sarcastic laugh.

G:Love Mr.Khuaran do you now what love means. Love means trust but you never trusted me and you still don't.
M:geet please don't say that I know I made mistakes in the past but I trust you now.
G:Oh so that's why you didn't tell me the truth. even when I asked you
M:Geet I didn't tell you cause I didn't want to hurt you

Geet gave him a sarcastic smile

G: And what happend now Mr. Khurana. Oh you thought I would never find out I must say you are not only egocentric but also really dumb. I was such a fool I trusted you always. but not anymore. cause without trust there is no love my trust is gone and so is my love for you.
M:Geet please don't say that.
G: Why shouldn't I say that maan. You didn't trust me, while I did. You killed me you even had a funeral in my honor what do acpect me to do run in your arms and so oh Maan I love you so much I can't live without you guess what I can and I did for the last 12 years and I was fine without you.Much better then now. I wish you had never come back. I hate the moment I met you, I wish I could erase are moment off togheterniss from my memory.
M;geet please don't say that I can't live without you. my heart will stop without you.

Geet laughed hystercially. and clapped in her hand.

G:wah what I dialogue maan but though day I figured out how much truth there is in those words. You can't live without me that's why you had every year you held one minute silence so my soul could rest in peace. Maan today I wished I would have died the moment I walked out off the door. I wouldn't have to go through so much pain. death would be so much easier.
M: GEET HOW can you say something like that misty
G:Oh please stop your natak.
M:Geet you think

Before maan could finish her heard the door close. Geet just left she wasn't in the mood to listen to his crap.

She's so gone
That's so over now
She's so gone
You won't find her around
You can look but you won't see
The girl I used to be
'Cause she
She's so gone
Away like history
She's so gone
Baby, this is me, yeah

She's so gone
That's so over now
She's so gone
You won't find her around
You can look but you won't see
The girl I used to be
'Cause she
She's so gone
She's so gone

You can look but you won't see
The girl I used to be
'Cause she's(long hold)
She's sooo gone

So long
She's so gone
Gone, gone, gone

precap: a broken maan

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Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago

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Aakriti Srivastava

@aakritisri1111

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: mel420

aww how sweet😳 but I might start a new ff called dirty revenge

really? I'll eagerly wait 4 it...

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Ruchi

@ruchs

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

MELLL…..😡

ME REFUSES TO COMMENT…..😡😭

You broke my heart….🥺

Yess me won't do anything to Geet in Twisty deewangi but me take no guarantees for Maan, Pari, Vicky and of course Geet's baby!!!😈

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sadavirk

@sadavirk

Navigator

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

abhi ke abhi update dooo now plz...

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roopali

@rsroopali

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

areee it was so emotional reee

after readinggg soo ma nyyy happyyy mometsss

sad oneee is paininggg

n hope everything comes 2gether n bcomes like b4 happy happpyyy typesss

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504887

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

OMMMGGG MEL WHAT WAS THAT?????????
I AM truly SHOCKED SHOCKED SHOCKED!!
let me recover from my shock?
KYAAA
WHHHAAATTT
KYYYUUUNNN
NAAAHHHIIINNN

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jenny

@ajenn

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Mel... You are mind blowing.
This is exactly what I wanted to happen. I might be evil to separate Maan and Geet but am thinking from Geet's perspective. I love Geet's outburst. Fantastic. Every single words were nail'd perfectly.
Initially , I didn''t like Maan was forgiven so easily by Geet.
But after knowing he even perform a funeral for Geet, I can stop myself from hating Maan.
Different ppl might have different opinion, for me it has always been be honest to your love. If you love a person truthfully, you wouldn't disgrace your love if the person broken your heart, because you were faithful from your side.

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#50

Maan deserves this...first thing is trust in any relationship...

he failed in it...

Eveline is really innocent...I can't digest this...then what was that Emma talking with her on phone about their plan to separate Maan-Geet when Maan heard her and came to know about the truth...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...