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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mollycoddle

at the cost of sounding childish and ridiculous...do u belive in sad e ndings coz my heart is not strong enough to handle sad endings...
u know u remind me of someone..she was a a very good friend of mine and a very good writer...crstal rose, who also happened to keep the male lead's POV a secret and wud reveal it in the end, making us bang our heads as to what is going on...

me and my twinnie wer discussing about this story and believe me she is comepletely dpressed over the ff, she has never got obsessed over a story and she feels like killing maan and doesnt want maan to break G's heart or use her...infact she is even ready to see no romance developing between G and M..
well i must say M's character is not as simple as it looks, we have just seen his professional front and the facet where he indulges geet in her antics and derives amusement from her crazy ideas/...he does have some secrets to hide,,and i am not taking Pinky's opinion or rather what she has heard about MSK lightly...there is def a grain of truth in it...but my question remains as to will he be the same with G, will he mislead her and then be done with her, when he no more needs her..i highly doubt...

he is a man who identifies talent, so i dont think so he will lead Geet into believing that he has romantic inclinations towards her, and then dump her (provided i assume that he is not interesting in any long term commitment with her), he wudnt want to lose her , as she might prove to be a great asset to the company...so dumping her after using her...i dont think he is a fool to do that...

the thing is we know that she is someone who completely relies on him for his advice, wisdom, guidance, offlate the instances of the hug, eyelocks...as if they r testing the veracity of closeup ad in real...r making her confused and she feels that they r arousing the dormant passion or feelings that she never knew she was capable of...

she fears losing him , coz of her stupidity of losing control and letting him kno that she has started seeing him in new light ,,,,and is probably obsessively attracted to him,well...it tugs the strings of my heart to see her feel lonely with none of her parent guiding her or soothing her ...to allay her fears, explain this inexplicable surge of feelings..

she sees a parent(father figure not in literal sense), friends, philosopher, guide in him, and doesnt want to lose him , who cud probably show her the right direction and make her achieve her aspirations and test her limits and push them to get the best out of her...

what remains to be seen is will she be able to hold those feelings to herself , name them, and maintain a professional relationship with him, or she wud break under immense emotional turmoil...

i reread the prologue...and two things struck me

presuming it from G's POV , as the entire story till now has been from her POV...so i had a feeling that this might not be a happy ending , or it may be like she might be the one who might decide to give a logical conclusion to he unnamed relationship between her and MSK

and another presumption is the prologue is from both MSK and G's POV, then the second and fourth line looks very much like MSK's POV...but then its just an assumption...

i felt depressed only at the instances where she misses her parents and feels like she is truly an orphan , which shows how much she is dependant on him, which grudgingly i dont like...coz the more a person is emotionally dependant on a person, it is like giving an invitation to badger ur heart and psychological well being...i just hope she doesnt waste her emotions on a wrong man,,, and if unknowingly she happens to, then she bounces back, like she always does and doesnt mop around or feel devastated...


well really looking forward to read the upcoming updates, and particularly MSK's POV

one more thing i just reread the teaser/prologue...
she has said in her interview she has one weapon that noone else has, she has no fear..
and now we have come to that point of the story where she admits to herself that she is scared now and has started fearing...well i thinki shud we take this as a cue for what to expect, something really bad

Oh my..I guess there's a new twist in my thoughts after reading abt the other FF!! 😲
I have read something like this..well that's similar yet entirely different ...In that novel during the entire second half we are only dropped in one corner and left to roam there jst looking at a single side of the story..only during the climax is the secret revealed..well it was psychological thriller ! I never linked this one with that as it had an entirely different thing..about naxalites and all...now after reading your comment ..I couldn't help but think of that Novel..!!
Maan's charecter is nothing less than a huge mystery but I don't think he is a kind who would use and throw girls with absolutely no respect to them or something on that lines.
I don't mind a greyish shade though...I always saw him as a deep thinker ...!!
He might probably manipulate things for his benefit but even then..I imagine the same thing in an entirely different light!!

P.S After reading all these comments and all how much I wish I had taken literature as a minor subject!! 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: World-of-Dreams

Oh my..I guess there's a new twist in my thoughts after reading abt the other FF!! 😲
I have read something like this..well that's similar yet entirely different ...In that novel during the entire second half we are only dropped in one corner and left to roam there jst looking at a single side of the story..only during the climax is the secret revealed..well it was psychological thriller ! I never linked this one with that as it had an entirely different thing..about naxalites and all...now after reading your comment ..I couldn't help but think of that Novel..!!
Maan's charecter is nothing less than a huge mystery but I don't think he is a kind who would use and throw girls with absolutely no respect to them or something on that lines.
I don't mind a greyish shade though...I always saw him as a deep thinker ...!!
He might probably manipulate things for his benefit but even then..I imagine the same thing in an entirely different light!!

P.S After reading all these comments and all how much I wish I had taken literature as a minor subject!! 😆


Oh my god! Both of you sound so depressed. Well do you want me to tell the ending right now !!!! ????? Let me clarify one thing. It was not an intentional move on my part to keep Maan's POV a secret. If I had given it when Geet was trying to interpret his words in her own way, it would have spoiled the fun right? Now that Geet has become a little "normal" I felt it is the right time to introduce his POV.
And no I have not read the other FF or novel you are talking about. This is entirely my own creation. I would not like to label it under any genre!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh God!!!
You sound so MSKish right now!!! 😆
I guess you are higly irritated with all these depressing interpretations all around!! 😆
Oh my ..I feel so stupid right now..!! Sitting idle for two complete days does this to a normal human being !!
I guess I should tyaag all these and concentrate on that same piece of news these news channel wale have been repeating from the last 5 hours!! 😆
lol..I'm laughing like a moron right now and my mama is staring at me!!
And sorry for bringing that naxalites wala novel here..I never wanted to do so..I was jst flowing in the bhavnaayein!!
ANd so sorry for making everything sound so terrible..!! 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
@ world of dreams---i am not saying that maan is going to be a use and throw type..him being a grey character is absolutely fine with me...
its like i dont think it wud be fair on maan's part to lead G on something which he doesnt believe in...he is perceptive enough to judge that G is getting affected and her blabber is a sure shot indication that she is taking his words and actions too seriously...so if he doesnt want to complicate things,...why not clear it in the beginning...

infact coming to think of it...he calling her and telling her about that wallet...sounded fishy to me...i mean he cud have asked soemone else to inform...he didnt need tp personally call her...i am getting delusional and trying to make sense of even things which dont need to make sense😆

@glassdoor...i am not classifying ur story as a particular genre...plss ignore our blabber and dont rush up things..i want u to go with the natural flow and give a free rein to ur imagination...

whenever u feel maan's POV need to be introduced, go for it...go with ur instincts and not with reader's whims and fancies...i might lose my sleep over ur story, u dont lose ur sleep over my blabber😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mollycoddle

@ world of dreams---i am not saying that maan is going to be a use and throw type..him being a grey character is absolutely fine with me...
its like i dont think it wud be fair on maan's part to lead G on something which he doesnt believe in...he is perceptive enough to judge that G is getting affected and her blabber is a sure shot indication that she is taking his words and actions too seriously...so if he doesnt want to complicate things,...why not clear it in the beginning...

infact coming to think of it...he calling her and telling her about that wallet...sounded fishy to me...i mean he cud have asked soemone else to inform...he didnt need tp personally call her...i am getting delusional and trying to make sense of even things which dont need to make sense😆

@glassdoor...i am not classifying ur story as a particular genre...plss ignore our blabber and dont rush up things..i want u to go with the natural flow and give a free rein to ur imagination...

whenever u feel maan's POV need to be introduced, go for it...go with ur instincts and not with reader's whims and fancies...i might lose my sleep over ur story, u dont lose ur sleep over my blabber😆


@world of dreams : I am seriously enjoying all your comments 😊 Not irritated at all...I have received negative comments about Geet before but I have tried to stay true to the story I have in mind. And now everyone seems to be loving her! 😆

@mollycoddle - Please dont be depressed dear...I am writing this FF for everyone's enjoyment. I dont believe in breaking people's heart here...
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Posted: 13 years ago
the feelings that were subdued r coming back...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: glassdoor



@world of dreams : I am seriously enjoying all your comments 😊 Not irritated at all...I have received negative comments about Geet before but I have tried to stay true to the story I have in mind. And now everyone seems to be loving her! 😆

@mollycoddle - Please dont be depressed dear...I am writing this FF for everyone's enjoyment. I dont believe in breaking people's heart here...



depressed not in a real sense..but the thoughts keep on hammering my pea sized brain...well i feel like its not going to sad ending stuff...going by ur words...but i have very rarely come across stuff where its really hard to predict what to expect next or whether maneet are going to end up together...and urs is one of them,...and its really fun to read such stories as it gives u a feeling of roller coaster ride
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mollycoddle

@ world of dreams---i am not saying that maan is going to be a use and throw type..him being a grey character is absolutely fine with me...
its like i dont think it wud be fair on maan's part to lead G on something which he doesnt believe in...he is perceptive enough to judge that G is getting affected and her blabber is a sure shot indication that she is taking his words and actions too seriously...so if he doesnt want to complicate things,...why not clear it in the beginning...

infact coming to think of it...he calling her and telling her about that wallet...sounded fishy to me...i mean he cud have asked soemone else to inform...he didnt need tp personally call her...i am getting delusional and trying to make sense of even things which dont need to make sense😆

@glassdoor...i am not classifying ur story as a particular genre...plss ignore our blabber and dont rush up things..i want u to go with the natural flow and give a free rein to ur imagination...

whenever u feel maan's POV need to be introduced, go for it...go with ur instincts and not with reader's whims and fancies...i might lose my sleep over ur story, u dont lose ur sleep over my blabber😆

Oh God Reva di..I read your comment to 3 times to understand it!! I'm so poor at interpreting or analyzing things!! In fact I haven't even read a novel of romance genre story till now!! 😆
Ahaa.. even I carry this habit of giving importance to some real insignifant things . 😆
I have done the same thing in my last assignment and completely ruined the whole thing!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: World-of-Dreams

Oh God Reva di..I read your comment to 3 times to understand it!! I'm so poor at interpreting or analyzing things!! In fact I haven't even read a novel of romance genre story till now!! 😆
Ahaa.. even I carry this habit of giving importance to some real insignifant things . 😆
I have done the same thing in my last assignment and completely ruined the whole thing!!



either ur interpretative skill is poor or my communicative skill is poor...i opt for the latter...cos very few understand what i say😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mollycoddle




either ur interpretative skill is poor or my communicative skill is poor...i opt for the latter...cos very few understand what i say😆

😲 😲Cummon di..don't make me feel more dumber pls!! I have already fulfilled my today's quota of sounding dumb!! 😆
I don't read much so it takes more time for me to understand such things!!
Edited by World-of-Dreams - 13 years ago

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