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good update. was sad with Geet bearing so much and maan listerning to her. will she be able to get her maan precap is scary. update soon
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part 17
poor Geet...
and Maan u better change for good...
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POOR GEET
SHE HAD TO BEAR SO MUCH PAIN JUST TO GET HER MAAN BACK
SHE WAS NOT ABLE TO EVEN FEED HER BABY AND SHE NEEDED HIM BUT COULDNT TELL HIM
SO SHE PRETENDED TO BARGAIN
WHAT PILLS IS SHE TAKING NOW
AND SHE STILL CANT TRUST HIM
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A Life For You
Part 18

She couldn't take it anymore...no...she couldn't she looked into his eyes deep finding answers to her queries to find a way to end his restlessness but cant...she dint saw any way out from the puzzled way of life why can't she...as soon as the song ended...he looked at her with hope

She slowly came out of his grip while he just gapped at her...and ran away from there...leaving a shattered Maan behind

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Sitting alone in the lonesome dark corner of her room, alone clutching her heart close to herself, crying her eyes out, feeling betrayed, stabbed, slaughted by her own soul, what have she ever dreamt of, what have she ever wished from her life, what else she ever wanted from her God...but what, what have she got

Betrayal, deception, disloyalty, perfidy, vengeance, hurt, sourness of heart at each step she took in her life only to bear it for her whole heart, the confidence she broke inside her with his cheatings, the self loathing she got with his continuous slaughters if her heart, how badly he had slited...The relation she always treasure was nothing else then a slow mentality infidelity of his continuous double cross on her

What have she ever done to deserve such hatred, such demoralization of her own self.

She always felt that her intense feeling of being in love will last forever...that she couldn't ever believe that he never felt the same way...she never believed that her sacred relation have been betrayed every day, even knowing him, his life style, his true self, she could never believe it, but always lived it...she was sure she had the same wavelength in love as him, she understand him...she was condemned by love, alienated, starved, forgotten by love...she was killed each day

Being betrayed by the one you love the most is devastating, is killing, slaughting you soul in million pieces enough to kill you...to kill your soul, and here she lived it, knowing the results she lived it, whom to blame for it, whom to cry for it...she smiles sarcastically at her own thoughts, she knew it all the while, she knew it since beginning she was the one who still took this step but she is the one to kill her own heart to get him back

She killed herself, lost herself in the midst of the fight to get him back to her she lost the confidence in herself to hold him forever, what was she always and what have she became now is just a thin line of self destruction and devastation she was going through, she was living now...

She remembers the day she met him, the life she left with her, the time they spent together, the life they lived with each other, the life which she always treasured, the life which always revolved round him, Her life...each moment, each second, each togetherness just flashed in front of her eyes as if she was reliving her life...as if someone was spilling of the beans f his own life in front of her with each flashing snap

har wo pal, har wo lamha, har wo sath, jaise yaadon ki kashti main thamm kar samundar ki lehron ke beech unn toofan main yun hi machalne ke lie chod dia gaya ho...

but that was enough to make her realize what she needed the mist in her life, what she treasured and for what she did this...she knew what she have to get her life back...realization is the greatest

Yes, there is more beyond this...she knows, she believes, she have faith in it

It's always said do what your heart tells you to do...she did the same, she will do the same, she knows her heart now

She love him...god demit she still loves him, she always loved him...she loves him with all her strength till insanity, but the thing she can never do sanely was to hate the same person ever even with her inch of strength...She know he have changed forever, changed for her, for their baby but she simply can't trust him...Why the hell she is doing this not just with him but to herself...

No, she can't see him burning in that fire of regret and remorse, she can't see him sulking for a single chance the chance she have giving him long back no, not anymore...

She will make him come back to her, make her heart fall in trust with him, with her love for him...She trusted him...but she have to create that trust for herself now...SHE WILL, SHE HAVE TO DO THIS...she thought to herself

She makes a determined face and gets up she will make it clear today itself at any cost any how she have to make it all end today, it long of her heart ache and his remorse it needs an ending today

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Sitting in the bar counter of the hall, sipping his nth drink, dried tears and those forelone memory lanes which he lived actually ruined with his own foot prints, he took another drink and pored it in the glass not knowing where and what he could do to make her realize he have changed, make her realize he is her all her, not just from body and wealth, but his heart, soul and even his each breath was hers now...

Repenting each dead he did in his life but what can he do now the mistake...no not a mistake but the sin was done never to be redone but how can he make it up with that

He dint knew...cursing himself, cursing his destiny, cursing his own hands to stab her heart brutally

When two hands snaked him from back slipping from behind engulfing him in them...

He held her hands from lying on his chest and rubbed it slightly but that wasn't the feeling he feels with her, it wasn't her touch, he felt disgusted and jerks the hands from his chest and turns...BUT...when he twirls round just to encounter the most painful eyes, just to see the depth of hatred in those hazels, he captures those disgusting feeling in her eyes, she was in pain he knew, he was the reason his remorse only grew with the thought...

Unknowingly again he gave the same pain, same hurt he always gave her, what was that she dint knew

He followed her gaze just to see a smirking Pari standing beside him almost leaning on him...with the smile he knew what she meant, what she did...he knew what she wanted and he knew she was successful...he was the reason she was here, he was the reason she hurts His Geet today, BUT he knew it was his mistake

Geet's heart was throbbing so violently...Her heart stopped to see the scene...she came here to apologize for her indifference, to clear everything, to make him come back to her, her life...to get him back...to grab him back...but the sight welcoming her just took her breath away...Pari hugging her Maan while he slipping his hands in hers...her world just stopped right the moment she saw the site...Tears breams in her eyes...

Where his world just stop at the sight just to stop his thudding heart in a dreadful silence...He saw those teary eyes...something break in him...he dint have that strength anymore in him that he can afford to lose her yet again...getting her this close was a dream and the broke pieces of his dream was pricking his heart, making them bleed in the vengeance of his own deeds...himself. He saw her shivering body pleading for a soothing warmth but killing herself for seething the same warmth yet again

Her whole world has crushed down under her feet...She is all alone in this mean world now...yet again betrayed...yet again left alone...but yet again she wanted him to cocoon her in his shell never to open up to the harsh world out...she didn't say anything, only stares at his eyes...questioning him, question her existence...

his whole world was spinning...he never imagined it will pained so much to see her pain...she didn't said anything but her painful eyes were enough to kill his should yet again

He wonders how many times will his destiny play against him...he saw her retreating figure and immediately ran behind her

Just to get hindered by Pari...he looked at her with furious eyes...while she just smirked

She came close to her, he felt disgusted and moved his head away...he smile bitting his ear whispering

I told you...i'll burn everything you treasure, if am not able to get you I'll mind no one will get you...

Especially not that bitch

That was it he lost it grabbing her hairs fisting them tight...if a single flinch came to her I'll mind it you beg death and I won't let the death come anywhere near you

That's MSK's promise for his life...

He threw her away and moved back leaving a screaming sarcastic voice of Pari behind

MSK you finished, you ruined...even God wont forgive you for your deeds Mr Khurana

You FINSHED...

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He knew where she must be sitting where she must e hiding herself...he knew it...he ran behind her to the terrace of the hotel to find the heart wrenching sight in front of him...his life sitting lifeless with no tears but visible ache in them...sitting alone on the swing, swaying it lifelessly with her legs to and fro...

Geet...he whispered coming close to her...kneeling beside her on her feet...keeping his hands on her thighs

Jaan...it wasn't the way you saw...I dint knew it was Pari...

So you must be waiting for anyone else Mr Khurana...sorry to disturb you then...she looked at his disgusted and shrugged off his hand from her thighs...


Mishty...

You lost your only chance to call me this...

You lost me...you lost it...

Pleas Jaan trust me...I

Trust you...she laughs manically getting up from the swing moving away from him...I can't even trust myself anymore how am I suppose to trust you...Tell me what can I do now...what can I do to make you mine...am sick, tired of trying day and night to get you back...fighting to have you in my life with our child, with us...but seems like my all efforts meant nothing to you...they never were...I was nothing for you...I never was...

Jaan trust me...am all yours...only your Maan...he tries to touch her face but he shrugs it off...

You know in all these years I slept with a single dream to have you...but seems like dreams never come true...anyways they are dreams only they can never be true, they not suppose to be...

It was my illusion, my fake dreams that you have changed, you can change but you can never change, you CAN NEVER CHANGE...YOU LISTENING TO ME...YOU CAN NEVER...her voice was high, quivering, shaking...with the pain her heart was feeling her venged heart

Geet...he whispers

No...she walks away a little...no...not anymore please...not again...I hate this feeling that I can't hate you...even after all this I cant hate you...why Maan...why this heart betrays everytime I try to hate you...why...she cries clutching her heart tight...stabbing it with her nails

Mishty...he felt a lump in his heart, his worlds chocked in his throat watching her pain...looking at her shivering self...

But just within a second she composed herself...making her eyes go blank to an extent no one could match...making him shiver in fear of the worst he could ever expect...

Maan please get away...let go...please...Maan...I beg you leave me, live the life the way you wanna live your life, I won't stop you, I will never be there to stop you...go away Maan please...stop all this and go away...

I cant...he shrieked in horror moving back with each word his steps betrayed him moving away from her...

You will...because I don't want you anymore in my life...go away...she was screaming...killing herself with each word...like a maniac she was taking her anger out on him...

I will die...he uttered like a hurt kid whose favorite toy was being snatched off

I will die without you jaan...please

I will die

Then die...she looks into his eyes but something shiverd her the intensity in those eyes, the carziness in them is shock her soul...she moved her gaze away from his not willing to accept anything

Not knowing what, which fear was engulfing her...???

She looked away closing her eyes

I Love You Mishty...I really do...the words echoed in her ears making her shudder in horror with the emotions filled in them and she looked behind just to get her life washed away with the sight...Her face turned pale...she didn't have time to say another word and he was already standing on the rim and he turns to face her...he smiled innocently within his tears pleading her to believe him, his love...There was no fear in those dark brown eyes he smiled heartedly and just stepped backward looking at her with tears in his eyes and a smile of commitment on his lips...her eyes kept him captive as it moved lower & lower...She ran towards him and jumped out, leaning out, trying to hold his hand

But it was late...too late...he hit the ground...

It felt so light as his heavy burdened heart flew passed in seconds the whole life came crumbling down his feet, to the ground. Blood rushed his head...Pouring out of his almost smashed structure... a haunting smile in those dark deep eyes...his heart seemed to be in peace of eternity... bleeding fighting for her last breath



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