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FanDeep

@Fandeep

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Posted: 13 years ago

#391

Hope history not repeat again,may be geet will recognise avantika.as always ur update was AWESOME.

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alfik

@alfik

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Posted: 13 years ago

#392

dunno what to comment...just that i don't want Geet to go through the same pain and torture...because if this happens again with her then may be she won't be able to come back from the darkness...I hope Maan soon realizes that the reason behind the pain that he had seen in her eyes for the first time was partly because of him...i know it was not intentional on his part and i really hope that HISTORY DOES NOT REPEAT ITSELF...i have faith in you and i hope you won't let that faith crumble Ash...keep up the good work and am sorry to write this but i feel there is a little bit of drag in the story...thats how i feel no offence to you please...no matter how you take this story i will still read it even if i have to cry i will still read it...

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Sneha

@sneha.juneja

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#393

aaoowww..

again a sad and painful part..

kya yaar Doll..

me feeling so bad for Geet

and I can see history is repeating itself..

After so much difficulty, Geet started to open up

but now she is again detaching herself from evry one..

Why there is so much of pain in her life..

Maan is all busy with his new life

and here Geet is all alone..

I hope they wont end up

the way they did 15 yrs back..

i luvd the part whr u described Geets life without Maan..

Her conversation with Dan and the whole situation

is very well written..

I just hope Maan pays attention to that old tape soon

so that he can remember his sweetu

and their beautiful childhood memories..

I luvd the conversation of Maan and his parents

abt his convocation ceremony.. it was really sweet..

But plz Doll enough of sad parts..

plz plz its soo sad to read abt their longing

and the pain they both r going through..

Now do bless us with a happy update

will be waiting..

Edited by snehaj - 13 years ago

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maanmeet1

@maanmeet1

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#394

history repeating itself...pls dont hurt geet...

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anaum91

@anaum91

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#395

awesommmeee...ab toh maan ko yaad dilaado k koi sweetu b thi..😉

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blueopal

@blueopal

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#396

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that's sooo interesting...looking fwd...

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#397

kaha rah gayi???? when r u going to update????

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#398

Hi Ash...just caught up on all parts...just awesome...

I am happy that Geet confessed so clearly...byt now yeh lambi judai..hmmm

will Geet recognise Avantika?

Don't know...

sorry for a short comment...still got 212 unread PMs but next update se regular comments...pakka

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Mishty Shah

@MishtyShah

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#399

i have finally updated my comment on pg 63

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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#400

a bit held up with exams..
will try to update tonight..if not then tomorrow!!!😳

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