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CrazzyBusy

@CrazzyBusy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: muskanp

will wait sweety😳

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and we will wit for ur next update Di
Di aap aaj kal bauth busy ho kya???

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Sushmacholke

@Sushmacholke

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#152

YEAH...SMILEY ONL9
PUCHKIA OR SILENT KHURANAS???????

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Sushmacholke

@Sushmacholke

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

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Dilsay

@Dilsay

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Posted: 13 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: muskanp

will wait sweety😳

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Thank you Muski for your reply

It always makes me happy when ever I see you on line ...😊😃

u see we your matwalees start hoping to get updates ...😆😉

Kiya kahoon aap ki is update kay liyay... bus main tu parhti gayee aur pata nahi chala na janay baat kab khatam hogayee ...

I always enjoy reading different variation in your updates regarding the intimate scence...

Being one of your ardent reader here is my 2 cents on the intimate scenes you have written so far

As compare to your other SS and FFs this is the very first time that you made Geet to take the first step in terms of being intimate that is also for the first time or SR ..A very good inititave and a wonderful change to read . In this SS this part was written beauifully actually very classy.

The ahem ahem part was so classy that I have just one verse to quote for it ...

wo ayay bhi aur chalay bhi gayay aur khatam fasana hogaya..

It was really worth waiting for this update ...gr8 piece of writing 👏👏👏

Thanks again for always bringing joy and happiness with your writing

for all ur work

Edited by Dilsay - 13 years ago

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Sushmacholke

@Sushmacholke

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#155

YEAH...SMILEY ONL9
PUCHKIA OR SILENT KHURANAS???????
Jo bhi ho daudega:-)):-)):-)):-)):-)):-)):-)):-)):-)):-)):-)):-)):-)):-)):-)):-)):-)):-)):-)):-)):-)):-)):-)):-)):-)):-)):-)):-)):-)):-)):-)):-)):-)):-)):-))AWESOME SUPER LOVELY UPDATES THANX A MILLION TON MAGICAL MUSKI
WAITING WAITING WAITING WAITING WAITING WAITING WAITING WAITING WAITING WAITING WAITING WAITING WAITING WAITING WAITING WAITIN

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CrazzyBusy

@CrazzyBusy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#156

wah meri jaani kya comment di
I am sure Di will be on the 9th cloud reading ur comment

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Dilsay

@Dilsay

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Posted: 13 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: Mariam94
wah meri jaani kya comment di
I am sure Di will be on the 9th cloud reading ur comment

ayay really acha laga tujay ...

me talk from

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sweetkj

@sweetkj

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#158

waiting...

you are online.. update milega??

you have forgotten aparichit..plz continue that too..and DA ki bhi update..plzzz plzz pretty plzz! :)

LOVE
KJ

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CrazzyBusy

@CrazzyBusy

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: Dilsay
ayay really acha laga tujay ...
me talk from

tujhe kya laga main aweyein hi bol rahi
sachi i really loved ur comment
when i go to comment i just go speachless and all i end up saying it Awesome update
i am sure Di must be bored of reading the same comment from me
but sachi di ki update read karne ke baad i just go blank, word search karne pe bhi nahi milte😕
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CrazzyBusy

@CrazzyBusy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#160

DI gusse ho ke Offline mat chali jana plzzz
wo kya hai na jab bhi aap online ate ho na
hamein bas yeahi lagta hai ke aap aab update do ge and we just start begging for another update
tu phir se kah rahi DI plzzz give us one more update😳