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Posted: 13 years ago
wow lovely update nicely written
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Just read this FF dear.
it is simply awesome.
And the dance sequence is beautiful.
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 5
wow so lovely...
Daadi is too good...
cont soon dear...
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amazing updante n gr8 selection of song...my fvrt...

i guess dadi is interrogating maan...continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update!
loved it!!
Oye hoyyyeee Maan and Geet ChoriChori ChupkeChupke!
Aww loved the whole dance sequence!
The naughtiness yet the shyness and the dance was too good!
He he Daadi arrived! Ab beta Maan bachke kahan jaoge?
Awesome precap
cont soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it all...😃

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It'tefaaqiana Ishq

Part 6


They danced with all the strength and power they had in them not caring about the world but wanted to enjoy the dance, this moment, this feeling which was emerging in their hearts taking away their souls and mind in the world of insanity and love the giggles, the laughter, the sound of payals, the kangans making the heart beats go frantically raise in a new world of passion and possession in them

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Dadi there's nothing like this how many times I have to say this, cant you for once calm down and leave me alone please...Maan was getting irritated with the set of questions following one by one from dadi maa since morning now...grrhh no since night when the dance got over and he headed back to dadi pulling her in a bear hug telling her how much he missed her here, but she had a different plan all together to poke his nose with the teasing gazes, and frustrating questions...

Beta don't you dare hide anything from me you know I know you quite well to miss this sparkle in your eyes, you like her na, tell na beta you actually like her...Dadi asked with the slight hope in her eyes following Maan everywhere, from room to hall, from terrace to garden, kitchen and even waiting outside washroom not budging from her question and irritating him to bits with a new set of question added each time she opens her mouth

Goshhh how much dadi maa can speak in a day...Maan wonders splashing water on his face hiding himself in washroom since long now...

But how was is suppose to know dadi can reach there as well to make him go nuts...beta you coming outside or I shall start banging your door now...

And what were you doing till now, you shouting outside since I entered here...Maan made a weird face

Maan you gonna spit it out or no, see no one cares for me an old aged woman has been trying to find a single simple answer but no one here is here to answer her, baba ji see what days have come here, see what all this poor lady has to go through and only reason is her only grandson, baba ji I don't wanna live here anymore call me to your home soon please, no one needs me here...dadi maa said loud so that it was audible enough from inside the washroom

Dadi...Maan said in an angry tone from inside

Maan...dadi said in a low tone

Dadi maa stop this na...Maan said in a straight tone

Maan you haven't started speaking it yet...dadi folded her hands in front of her chest

Dadi maa please...Maan said in a baby face looking at his reflection at the mirror

Maan...dadi said it dragging making a baby face

Dadi you gonna end this topic am getting irritated now, I said na nothing is there, means nothing...Maan came out of the washroom and turned to look at her face with anger and frustration

Maan you gonna elaborate this topic or shall I go and ask her...Dadi asked in a super frustrated tone now making

Maan shriek in horror what if dadi go and ask her...OMG...she will reject before even proposing and knowing dadi he knew it clear dadi can do the same without any worry or hesitation and that was enough to cut the hell out of this poor soul and he screamed on top of his voice...Nooo...dadi you won't...fine yes I love her...he blushed while saying so...BUT DARE YOU say anything to her...Maan gave a stern look to dadi while dadi maa was smiling sheepishly

So finally you saw her, o sooo you ready to marry...dadi said with round eyes...you love her means...dadi maa was all in her dreamy land imagining her grandson on horse with all that sehra and sherwani enchanting his already bright face with a new ray of happiness, and Geet in her bridal attire with covered head and blushing furiously to having the gaze of her would be husband on her tantalizing her senses with all the sound of music in background...

Dadi...dadi...where you landed come back to realty I haven't said anything to her...Maan said waving his hand in front of dadi and his last word was enough to bring dadi out of her dreamland which came crumbling down on his feet and dadi made a puppy angry faces to his idiot grandson

Means you haven't voiced you feelings in front of her, yet...dadi maa feigned anger in front of her while Maan silently nodded looking everywhere but his dadi maa who was now at her worst mood possible

How many days you have been here, how many days you have seen her, how many days you have been enduring these feelings in your heart, how many days you have been falling in love with her, how many...

Just two dadi maa...Maan said in an irritated tone to stop the bombs of questions his dadi was blasting on him one after the other,

Ohh..!! I forgot...Dadi maa pouted cutely making cute faces to Maan

So when will you say her today or tomorrow...oyee why tomorrow don't you know, "kal kare so aaj kar, aaj kare so ab"

Why don't you go and say her now...dadi asked super excited with the magical glint in her eyes

Dadi you have lost it, truly have you had your BP medicine yet...Maan asked cheking her forhead and nerves

Maan you behaving like a jerk

Yaa right and what about you...Maan said in a fake anger

Can I go now I have a lot of work to do?? Please...saying so Maan turned to go but his feet never gave him way when a low voice reached his ears...

Maan you know what you doing...right...Dadi maa asked a in a low but strong voice making Maan stop in his track he turned slowly with a dipped head unsure where this question came from, unsure what was the meaning of it, unsure of the answer itself, but one thing he knew was dadi maa had something in his voice he can never fail to realize the depth of dadi maa's words but...

He raised his head a little above and looked straight in the eyes of that elderly lady who knew the world more than him, he knew the intensity the blank darkness in her eyes was speaking volumes trying to say but still he was unsure what he was supposed t read from them...he looked upto her wrinkled forehead clearly showing worries but for what, was he wrong, he can't even think of it, is it for him, he knew it wasn't for him, he can't be that much unknown who dint knew his own dadi maa worrying for him, but then for whom these worried lines were, for her, but why he couldn't fascinate the reason...he looked back to her eyes and smiled weakly and said with a deep breath taking all the courage...

Truly saying, I don't know, I don't know what am doing, what am gonna do, what am I suppose to do, but what I know, she is the one, she is the one for whom this heart missed a beat for the first time...he said pointing towards his heart...for the first time I can say I wish to have her, in all way I wish her to be with me not just physically...he smiles slightly lending his head a little back looking directly towards the sky, may be finding her mum today...no, I can't , I truly can't say this to be just a physical attraction, it is more than that I know it is far more then we can even fascinate or we can even think for...

He looks down to her eyes...I want her whole, whole for myself, physically, mentally, physiologically, emotionally just for me with me, I want to possess her to my dearest life, I want to endure her till my last breath, I want to treasure her till I forget my own self, I want her to desire me the same way, all I want is her, I don't know what this feeling is, I don't know what this emotion is, but what I know these two days are the most beautiful and the most peaceful days of my life,

He turns round from dadi with that glow on his face, with that sparkle in his eyes, the surge of emotions in his heart was not at all explainable he knew...dadi I don't know is love possible to happen in two days or not, is this emotion is called love or not, but what I know is the feeling she filled in my heart was never instilled by anyone in my heart...

He again turns around and looks dadi's face with hope and emotions he held his arms and tells with confidence in his eyes...I don't know what it is, but dadi you know what, I will have her in my life, I will make her fall for me, she will endure the same feeling as I have in my heart for her, she will love me the same way am insane for her, she will na dadi maa, please say she will feel the same...he asked with so much hope and emotions that even the god could melt at the depth of his eyes...dadi simply nods her head and caressed his face with her palm with those lonely tears falling from her eyes and said with love and the effection she could gather for that angel in herself...she is an angel beta, she will love you more than you love her...

That was enough to make his heart go zoom with happiness as if he got the biggest desire fulfilled with her single yes and he hugged her tight, close showing all his love in the hug

I love her dadi maa, I love her...he said looking at the opposite direction where she was busy arranging the hall with food and drinks for the guests...I love her...

Do you know who is she...dadi asked him patting his back in a soothing way when he absent mindedly answered lost in her...yess I know...he said loudly making dadi sigh in relief

She is an angel who descended down the heaven just for me, just for your grandson, for her Maan...he said under his breath...lost in her angelic beauty...


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Edited by dazzlingdivz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
me first

loved it...😊
pls maneet scene de do...pls...
Edited by neethuMG - 13 years ago

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