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Posted: 13 years ago

It'tefaaqiana Ishq

Part 3

yaa right ab chale...am already hell tired
yaa fir airport main sab baate karni...hai kya...??


Ooo teri...Chal chal...ghar pe maa bhi teri wait kar rahi hai
faltu baate kar ke time waste kar raha hai...
Ghar nahi jaana...
and started stacking Maan's bags in car

tu kabhi nahi sudhrega kya

naa kabhi nahi
and both made their way towards home again having their own fights and leg pullings


Zooommm

A sleek red sports car enters the gaint black gates of farm house

And the two handsome hunks with black ray bens on sexy smart looks and ever dashing personalities and killing looks and worthy attitude stepping out the car ready to kill any girl with a single look

Why we didn't moved to Malik mansion'why we here??'Maan enquires lifting his one eyebrow

It's the wedding venue brother'the bride and groom's family, relatives and friends all here

So why you wanna go mansion'to clean my room for SR...amy winked

Maan smacked his head playfully

You nerd you dint even got your wedding started and you already dreaming of your SR'Maan made a weird face

Wait for your time buddy'I'll ask the same'amy replied

Move your silly bum and make it inside my would be wify wanna meet his only devar you know

Amy said with a stern voice and moved inside

Followed by Maan shaking his head at the silly man infront of him who was suppose to get married

As he enters the farmhouse where amy's wedding was suppose to take place a sudden thrill, some different wives started coming to him

As if a magnetic pull was ready to pull him towards itself as he was mere iron shred

(MSK and mere..Divzi thinks was she in her mind while typing this)

He felt his heart feeling some different thrills and emotions all of a sudden

He looked here and there as if searching something but he himself wasn't sure what it is

When a sound hit his eardrums

Ohh god she again started with her singing'

Who's she'Maan asked out of curiosity

You'll see'Amy shook his head and made it inside the mansion


switch the song on sweethearts 😉

Kehna hi kya

gumsum gumsum gup chup gumsum gup chup

halchal halchal ho gayee teree honth hai kyon chup

halchal halchal ho gayee teree baithe hain gup chup

pyare pyare chehre ne karte hain ishara

dekha teree aankho ne hai sapna koyee pyara

hamse goree naa too sharma kehde hamse jara

Lost in himself he starts moving towards the source of the voice..as if the melody was taking a toll on his senses

He moved in a little pace trying to fill his each nerve ending with the melody

He heard a few movements coming from a direction and made his way towards the different side

He enters a huge enlighten room

Hindering his view from the view infront of him

He moved his head from one side to another to get a view what is making him loose his each ounce of sense

hamse goree naa too sharma kehde hamse jara

he saw a few girls giggling and one was in the middle'may be she is the one singing

He thought to himself'

He hides behind the pillar to watch the magical view

Which seem to have casted spell on his each cell

kehna hee kya yeh nain ik anjan se jo mile

chalne lagi mohabbat ke jaise yeh silsile

arman naye aise dil me khile, jinko kabhee mai naa janu

woh hamse, ham unse kabhee naa mile, kaise mile dil naa janu

abb kya kare, kya nam le, kaise unhe mai pukaru

She twirls singing in her own world but to his luck his view was blocked by other girls round her

But he took a glimpse of the smile adoring her face

Her supple lips with that cute little gloss'OMG'he was lost in them

His throat went dry with the single look of her lips

He had a sudden urge to kiss hard on them marking them his

And the smile'killer dude'he thought to himself

kehna hee kya yeh nain ik anjan se jo mile

chalne lagi mohabbat ke jaise yeh silsile

arman naye aise dil me khile, jinko kabhee mai naa janu

woh hamse, ham unse kabhee naa mile, kaise mile dil naa janu

abb kya kare, kya nam le, kaise unhe mai pukaru

The flowing wind around him felt as if they were singing the enchanting soulful lyrics of love

A new tale has begin with the stream of new emotions filling the atmosphere

The new turmoil of feelings and the pull towards the owner of this soulful voice was surging in his blood

He smile to himself thinking the lines and shook his head

Man'you never saw her'Even now you couldn't have a glimpse of her yet

And you thinking of her'you lost it Maan

And she twirls again giving her back to him oblivious to the pair of eyes dieing for her one glimpse

Ooops wonder girls die for MSK's one glimpse and her MSK going crazy for a girl's glimpse'She has the charm Maan'he thought

And here she starts moving ahead

Making him go crazy as he so badly desperately wanting to see the face of the owner of this voice

pehlee hee najar me kuchh ham kuchh tum ho jate hain yu gum

naino se barse rimjhim rimjhim hampe pyar kaa sawan

sharam thodee thodee hamko aaye toh najre jhuk jaye

sitam thoda thoda hampe shokh hawa bhi kar jaye

aisi chale aanchal uthe dil me ek tufan uthe

ham toh lut gaye khade hee khade

His view wonders on her back with the single strip choli of her lehanga

Making him gulp hard'

He was lost'lost in the first look of her milky soft skin looking like the moonlight in the already enlighten room giving her a flow of heaven

She again twirls round and his gaze automatically turns on her bare belly hidden by the net dupatta

Coving her elegantly still flaunting her milky skin gorgeously

He shook his head at the audacity of checking out a girl like this mentally smacking him to move away

But his mind was brutally betrayed by his heart as his feet were cemented on the place

The slow torture she was unknowingly doing on this Maan's heart was creating havoc in his heart

The sudden hurricane was pondering in his heart making him stop his beat

He was at loss'A big loss with his eyes wondering at her each little asset making him shudder down the spin

He smile at himself with the black magical spell cast on himself with a complete stranger in front of her

kehna hee kya yeh nain ik anjan se jo mile

chalne lagi mohabbat ke jaise yeh silsile

arman naye aise dil me khile, jinko kabhee mai naa janu

woh hamse, ham unse kabhee naa mile, kaise mile dil naa janu

abb kya kare, kya nam le, kaise unhe mai pukaru

She slowly moves back and the sweet rhythm on her bangles felt magical to his ears

OMG I love this voice'O God I can listen them day and night with ease

Lost in her music she makes a little move with her hands flowing in air

Now maan was about to faint

God she is already driving me crazy'help me please'he whispered silently

Whereas that unknown girl was lost making noises from her bangles with a small small dance moves

Just to tease each sense of poor Maan hiding not from world but from himself as well

He was going insane with the dangling of bangles in her hands

gumsum gumsum gup chup gumsum gup chup

halchal halchal ho gayee teree honth hai kyon chup

halchal halchal ho gayee teree baithe hain gup chup

pyare pyare chehre ne karte hain ishara

dekha teree aankho ne hai sapna koyee pyara

hamse goree naa too sharma kehde hamse jara

She again moves ahead lost in the lyrics singing for herself more than anyone else

And with a sudden move her ankles made another sound which now took maan to the verge of insanity (divzi wonders what whatever he is doing does that sound sane anywhere)

Her anklets seem to make their own musical notes drowning Maan in there variation

Her each step made a different tone where Maan was memorizing each note by heart

Her each step made maan skip several beats

Thudding his heart like no tomorrow and here she was all oblivious to the poison she was inflicting in someone unknown to herself

He so wanted to grab those feet with those soul chanting anklets and kiss her ankle to worship the melody in them

hamse goree naa too sharma kehde hamse jara

Oohh Gosh'her danglers O Man she already driven me crazy

The golden jhumki on her milky white shinny skin'perfect combo I must say'he thought mesmerized with the thought itself

Willing to engulf her into him and whisper the black magic cast on him in her ears

Her each aspect was getting on his nerves getting into his nerves

inn hontho ne manga sargam sargam too aur tera hee pyar hai

aaj dhundhe hai jisko hardam hardam too aur tera hee pyar hai

mehfil me bhi tanha hai dil aise dil aise

tujhko kho naa de darata hai yeh aise, yeh aise

aaj mili aisi khushi jhum uthi duneeya yeh meree

tumko paya toh payi jindagi

His feet involuntarily started moving towards the down casted angelic beauty in front of his eyes

While his heart started racing a marathon with each step as if it will explode any moment

He saw her cute little nose..Ooo cut little apple while frowning'soo willing to kiss her cute antics

And her rosy cheeks without blush..O man again wanna kiss her natural cuteness

And her supple petals'O teri'Maan you need brain stop thinking about kiss

The wrinkles on her forehead while annoyed of all the teasing session of her peers

Aowww looks so adorable na'so wanted to kiss them away

And now mentally kicked himself

Kiss kiss kiss'The great MSK thinking of kissing a girl like this'MSK go get a brain you lost somewhere with Araman Malik the great'today am soo gonna kiss this amy for manipulating my sweet innocent brain

kehna hee kya yeh nain ik anjan se jo mile

chalne lagi mohabbat ke jaise yeh silsile

arman naye aise dil me khile, jinko kabhee mai naa janu

woh hamse, ham unse kabhee naa mile, kaise mile dil naa janu

abb kya kare, kya nam le, kaise unhe mai pukaru

Still his feet dint gave into his plea as if they were not in his control anymore

And moved in a slow pace hypnotized by the bound an unknown was bounding n him

A complete stranger forget about name he haven't yet saw her face yet and here he was all lost in her

Huh'Love at first sight is it'he smirked at himself and then thought'yaar lemme have the sight peacefully atleast then

His each step was moving him a danger he knew'checking a stranger in such an atmosphere'Maan get ready for jutti chappals now

OMG The MSK and jutti chappals'tomorrows newspaper gonna flash on with me now'he thought and was about to turn in fear when he saw her tripping with a sudden push by her friend while playing and teasing sessions and he involuntarily moved towards her

kehna hee kya yeh nain ik anjan se jo mile

chalne lagi mohabbat ke jaise yeh silsile

kehna hee kya

She close shut her eyes in a fear to touch the hard floor soon to get hurt and was waiting for the thud when two strong hands engulfed her within themselves

And now his most dream come true and he saw the most vibrant face in front of his naked eyes

He was lost in her flawless mesmerizing beauty when she opens her eyes slowly

And looks in his dark desirable eyes'and

That was it for him'he couldn't take this slow torture anymore

He let himself drown in the ecstasy of her dreamy oceanic hazels

Lost his all senses as if he was in them by now

Angel'that's what escaped his mouth

And she looked at his in aoww'.and whispered haann'in confusion

Just to get the most killing smile on this earth

(Aowww dreamy dreamy dreamyland landing of Divzi)

They just drifeted in an unknown world where he was just not at all willing to come back from while she was dragged with him

Lost in themselves when a sudden tap on his shoulder by amy made him end the never ending eye lock and he looked away shuddering of the thoughts and silently made her stand straight

When each and every other girl circled her and Amy looked at him grinning foolishly

Sorry sorry sorry'I dint mean that yaar'it was just fun and you were about to get hurt'Anjy made a sorry face and then turned to look towards Maan'thanks'actually it was my mistake'she extended her hand for shake

Maan genuinely shaked saying'No not a big deal it's Ok

And moved his gaze towards the girl..anyways howz you'you fine

He asked the angel looking down all the while

Yaa thanks

Geet you dint hurt yourself na'Amy asked in concern

O so her name is Geet'Maan thought smirking

While the next set of words left him baffled

If you hurt yourself who was I suppose to merry'Amy pouted


Precap: Main ni btaana...I am not gonna tell anything you people think think 😳


Prev: Part 2 Next: Part 4


sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry FOR ALL THE LATENESS AND ALSO FOR GIVING IT TILL HERE

I WASN'T REALLY ABLE TO TYPE MORE 😕 ME STILL NOT ALLOWED TAKE STRESS

and sorry sweeties i couldnt reply to all so i didnt replied to any

but

THANK YOU FOR ALL THE LOVE YOU PEOPLE SHOWED


so now give me my comments and like

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Edited by dazzlingdivz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oyeee...yaha msk k head pe kiss kiss chaling...uparse last me kya likh diaaa..
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg!i hope amy s lying..
this can't b true..
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG..dnt tell me amy gonna marry geet..plzzz...aisa nahi ho sakta
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Posted: 13 years ago
😕 wht??? ammy is marrying to whome? pl. update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
AMY GEET MRRG YEWWW🤢
HOPE YE JHOOTH HO...😃
PRECAP-- MAAN KO NA USS AMY KI ACHE SE PITAYI KRNI CHAHIYE...😆😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
super updt.loving ...hmm msk or lov at first sight...
lovly entry of angel
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Love it graphics..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update loved it but ammy is gonna geet omg
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BAHUT HI ACHCHA WRITER HO TUM LEKIN BEECH MEIN HUMEIN ATKAA DETHI HO...!😡😊😉

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