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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Angelic_analyst

One OF My Favourite Seq. 😃


mere to sab fav hai m surly gnna gt confusd wid favs 😕
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetgirls1

Ab to mujhey paka yaken hai maaneet ko alag karne mei lage ho tum! Amy n geetu. Yr rahem karo. Btw awesum update. Ab kuch raita pelaya na to mujh se bura koi nhi hoga. Dear wise what happened to u ? R u ok?


waah waah...merepe doubt
baba ji dekh re ho na aap
chaddo...
and yap m fine just a lil down wid hlth nthin els 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

lovely update khatarnak ending

waiting for next part


waah waah...sara updt lovly ending khatarnak
iss writr ko smack krna chahie na 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
MAAN WAS FIDA FROM THE FIRST GLIMPSE

BUT ARMAAN AND GEET
NOT POSSIBLE

LOVED THE SONG

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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb part 👏 👏
plz update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago


It'tefaaqiana Ishq

Part 4


Maan genuinely shaked saying'No not a big deal it's Ok

And moved his gaze towards the girl..anyways howz you'you fine

He asked the angel looking down all the while

Yaa thanks

Geet you dint hurt yourself na'Amy asked in concern

O so her name is Geet'Maan thought smirking

While the next set of words left him baffled

If you hurt yourself who was I suppose to merry'Amy pouted

Oyee hello shall I call Ridhzi to back off...

Ooo...I was just kidding Geet...why you taking me soo serious...did I say anything no na then why...Arman shrieked in horror

I heard everything Mr. would be husband...you better don't take Mr. sweetheart for granted I can back off this wedding if you flirt round my best friend...Ridhzi came from behind

Amy gave deadly glare to Geet while Anjy and Geet just giggled at his face...

I dint said anything and sweetheart she is my best friend as well...amy pouted

Aoww I am your best friend first Mr Arman Malik...and then your Would be beautiful wife's...saying so she hugged Amy sideways

That's unfair...who's my best friend...Ridzi made a baby face

We both...Geet and Amy said in unison...

And made everyone giggle, laugh holding their breaths

But one mute spectator was watching all this in amusement...Maan was looking at there faces blank making an effort to make out something atleast from their faces but seems like everything was in vain...sensing his restlessness Geet poked Amy raising an eyebrow

Oohh sorry bro...he said a sorry to maan and moved his gaze back to his silly gang

So guys here meet my brother Mr. Maan Singh Khurana...you can call him Maan

And Maan here these my sweethearts...

She is your sweet sweet bhabi...he looked lovingly to Ridhzi...Ridhima Gupta...you can call her Ridhzi...she was waiting for you quite a long time dude, but dare you say anything against me...you'll have to pay it back hard at time then remember it

Hei devar ji...i can call you Maan veer ji right...Ridhzi smiles sweetly

Yaa bhabi you can call me Maan as well...

She is Anjali Gupta, Anjy...my saali, adhi ghar waali and winked at Anjy to get that killing teasing smile from Anjy...

Jija Ji adhi k chakkar main puri ko gussa matt karo...and turns her eyes to check Maan head to heal...she turns round Maan with spectacular eyes and remarked...hmm not bad so you Maan he talks about day and night...nice meting you Mr. Khurana

The pleasure is all mine beautiful lady...he smiles back

And now the most important person of my life my sweetheart Geet Handa, Geet...she is my best friend, my second love you know...Amy gave his deadly smile to get a glare from Ridhzi and Maan

Oohh...Man calm down...i can understand Ridhzi getting angry why you getting angry bro...chilaxx..

May be have fallen in love at first sight with are princess...Anjy remarked rolling off laughing her head off

Their non stop leg pulling masti and enjoyment knew no bonds when they became known to friends and when they shared lots of talks no one knew but two person were still marking there comfort zones with each other no other then Maan and Geet

Maan was stealing glances getting a chance to talk to this angel but for Geet she was hiding herself from him not letting him have any chance of talk

Maan sensed her restlessness and decided against...he made it a point to talk to her the time he finds her alone from this crowd...he was dying to hear something from her...But she was way too shy to utter a single word infront of him...where she was quite comfortable in her bubby self with other it was just him she was abl to open up freely

May be she feels this with every stranger...he sooths his baby crying heart

He came to know Geet was the one who helped Amy and Ridhzi to patch up, she was intern in Amy's batch in Sanjeevani working with him since 2 years...basically from Punjab and loved to talk...he wonder does she really talk this much...

She helped Amy to take his heart out in front of Ridhzi as she knew she loved him since long but Amy's flirty nature always left her insecure with a relation with him

She was the one who convinced Ridhzi and made this whole set up and finally this wedding was possible also just because of her

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The hall was set, the lights were shimmering the already lighten atmosphere of the whole farmhouse, the shimmers hanging on each corner the glass finish to each wall the curtains flowing was giving a vibrant view to everyone...

It was mehandi night today the hall was beautifl decorated accordingly

The noise of girls giggling teasing and making fun was audible to everyone, the hall was having that fresh mehandi smell filling the air with new freshnes...

I called for 200 more plates where is my order till now...why everything is not ready yet

The function is today not tomorrow...do it soon...or eklse it wont take me a minute more to take my orders back from you...Maan was getting everything ready in the dining hall when his eyes caught an attention of something

Geet clad in green looking ever so gorgeous...was appling mehandi on her hands sitting next to Ridhzi...while a small girl playing with her dupatta again and again placing it on her head...

Shivangi stop it na...see my mehandi will be ruined...Geet made a baby face

You look beautiful with this veil on your head...the girl complimented making Geet smile shocking her head

That is true he thought she was actually looking breathtaking

You know Geet it is always said if your mehandi give a dark color then your husband will love you more the his own life...Anjy marked making the two girls blush...

And Maan wonder will I love her more than his own life...anyways I do love her very much he remarked and smiled shaking his head at his own thoughts

That means Amy will love his basket very much see her mehandi is already dark...Geet finished laughing teasing Ridhzi...

Acha acha...we'll see when it will be your turn...Ridhzi retorted...

There laughing, teasing session came to an end when the lady applying mehandi asked what name to engrave on their hands

Armaan...Ridhzi said shying with the name...

Oyyee hooyee see someone shying even now...Anjy teased

And what name shall I mark on you both hands...the lady asked Anjy and Geet

Maan so badly wished he could go and tell them to mark his name but controlled his urge telling his heart it's not the right time yet...

Geet and Anjali...as we don't have anyone in our life yet...Anjy marked with a sad face while Geet just rolled her eyes...while our poor Maan could just make pouting sweet faces...

Precap: Sangeet and Dadi Maa in Mumbai


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Edited by dazzlingdivz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice updt...poor maan consoling his heart😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very sweet update dear...
Smiley love kiss
Maan is sooo much in love for Geet...Hayyee...
OMG!!! Maan wants his name on Geet's hand...Bechare ko severe loveria ho gaya hei...😆 😆
Love it graphics


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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update 😃
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