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Dhundlae aks

PART 189

Every sec told the story of his longing, every stoke, the passion in the thrust of his tongue into her mouth like he was deprived of his life, his soul, his breath & now he knew it all & just didn't know how to tell her.. with all wat he has done to her. He just went away.. expecting her to be his.. be there for him without any commitment, without anything. A single tear escaped out, even after he fought so much against it.

He didn't let go of her.. he clung to her tightly, with more strength than usual every passing sec. He couldn't bear to part her. He kissed her with all of his might & pulled her so closely to him that it seemed impossible that they were actually two separate entities. She tenderly cupped his face. He closed his eyes taking in the feel with a deep sigh. Like fingers had those magical touch that was able to lull him to a strange sense of security, belonging. He finally dropped her to the outhouse, after getting continuous calls from dad. He rolled his eyes.. somethings never changed.. especially his dad's love for Geet!!! it just seems to grow.. he chuckled.. probably like his heart only seem to grow founder of her each passing day..like it was possible.. but seems it is..
At KM
Every one was really excited. Maan had little something for everyone. But don't know why he couldn't decide wat to buy for mistimia. Not that he didn't try.. but just he couldn't. He felt little too emotional all the time. Every thing he picked he knew exactly wat she would say.. he chuckled & picked lots of chocolates for her.

Later at night Geet waited for him. She was getting excited like a new bride. She was blushing within.. feeling terribly shy with her own anxiousness. Wat exactly was she expecting she thought.. when she actually took a shower & changed into fresh cloths .. before going to bed.
But she was heart broken yet again when it was pass mid night & puchki didn't come. She tried to reason out.. so many things.. jet lag.. may be held up with Daadi.. she tried her best not to expect!!! but this is was something beyond her .. she felt choked with emotions. She couldn't help with.. she just went out to check if he was there... like she was wrapped with sudden embrace of his warmth..she stood their still at the door puzzled. She stood there for few mins taking in the feel when she saw the flower kept near the door step. She picked it up at once, she took in a deep breath.

He saw all that hiding behind the pillar!! he couldn't gather enough courage to walk into her room. From no where the thought of right & wrong was stopping him, the questions that was never asked between them, seemed impt now. How could he just claim her without telling her wats in his heart. It is not right.. not right to leave her longing for him. Does he even deserve her!!! Maan singh Khurana actually felt timid infront of her sanity, her truthfulness, her naivety.. her beauty, her innocence, everything abt her.
When Maan didn't come even the next day, Geet waited near the door, the moment he came to keep the flower she just opened the door at once. He stood half way bending, unsure wat to say to her. She quietly looked at him. He cleared his throat as he raised to straighten himself.
Wo main he looked at the flower & then at her
she simply hugged him resting her head on his chest, slowly one hand reaching to the flower, that he never gave it in her hand properly. He chuckled when she took it from him, very possessively. She walked him to the room hugging him.

She laid face down on top of Maan, resting her head on his chest. Actually been there ever since he walked in. His hands were still reluctant, or was something stopping him within. Though there was this urge to feel her more than just holding her in his arms but he couldn't even dare to hold her. She turned restlessly longing for his possessive hold.. she pouted cutely guiding his hand around her. He sighed deeply ruffling the hair on top of her head. She giggled sweetly feeling tickled. She dossed off feeling amazingly peaceful. Maan looked at her, astound, there was this something strangely wonderful about the idea of just falling asleep with her in his arms. It was something he had not understood probably would kill for now!!! Finally he fell asleep as well, lying on his back with Geet curled against his chest.

The rest of his stay in India only revolved around her. He so much hated her going to KC but couldn't say it loud. Even if he made faces.. Geet promptly blamed her on her boss who doesn't come to office. He didn't know a better option but go to KC. He knew he was inviting trouble. But well it was just for a week. Wats the harm he could be with his misti all the while.. he chuckled.
Yash was taken by surprise seeing Maan in office. He gave him all the questioning look.
Maan straighten himself ji wo Geet ko kuch kaam tha, I thought aab main hi hoon tho..
Yash nodded, not actually expecting much from him.. but can't help his heart leap in hope he may change his mind.

Geet was equally surprised when she saw Maan in office.. she literally waked herself to stop dreaming abt him like this all the time.
Jhalli.. yeh office hain, puchki yanha kabhi nahi aayega.. she made all kind of faces feeling sad abt it. She stood talking to herself.. when Maan took the file from her hand ' is this project u wanted to discuss
Geet self talk ' yeh lo babaji.. he is talking to me in my dream, jab se puchki is come down for ur bday, Geet tu sach main pagal ho jayen hain.
Maan whispered in her ears challen
she closed her dropped jaw & silently followed him to the cabin. Still trying to believe he was actually there..

Both of them kept drooling at each other. Just that Geet didn't know Maan was actually even looking at her. He just pretended to look into her laptop & kept shooting questions.
After all the discussion session
Maan ' why don't u expand this whole idea in a much general & larger scale
Geet looked bit lost
Maan ' this is an awesome idea for creating a tool that could be used in any construction firm
Geet ' lekin, I can't do it alone
Maan ' hire someone
she really felt hurt,
Maan ' do u remember adi from my class
Geet ' chusmist
Maan ' trust me he is really good
Geet just nodded still not very happy, khud bhi tho help karsakten hain
After Maan left to US, Geet worked on getting adi to join KC. She worked on the software, it kept her really busy. Adi was really obliged to Geet. He had been struggling to get a good job after Engg though he was really good. He never liked Maan in college especially because of his attitude, or may be he felt Maan always got everything easily & thats why doesn't know the actual worth of success. He didn't know he was joining his firm under him. He knew he was to report to Geet, but geet treated him more in equal terms.. & her Boss .. whom she reports to .. he didn't pay much attention.

Precap
geets success!!
-PREV PART 188 NEXT PART 190-
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muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
yipeee me second 🥳
aaj sachi miracle day hai

awesome update
wowww geet knew maan was there n she opened the door n took him inside
oh maan tum bol kyu nahi dete

ha ha adi u think maan doesnt deserve it but he is the one who recommended u


Edited by hinal_maaneet - 13 years ago
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awesome part muskii deee...thank you for updating n take care😊
Edited by honeygrape - 13 years ago
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At last Maama updates!

Congo Muskan!
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adi geet maan back to US
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Posted: 13 years ago
I liked how puchki loved mishti...😉nice update...!😃continue soon.😊

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