The Blissful Moment..!! MAANEET OS part 2(A) pg7 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update
luved it😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hmm...now as u said this story don't have any other part and u leave it on our imagination...

yaar I am really very good in imagination...i like living in Maaneet dreams everytime making different stories in my thinking but when u ask for it ...I am BLANK...

so if I try to take the story line further...

Maan then goes abroad for further studies keeping in mind that when he will return and take up his father's business, he will confess his feelings to Geet and ask her hand from her parents as they are from same community so they won't have any problem...right now Geet is not in condition to accept his love...so he will leave it for future...

he return after 2 yrs and then he become MD of his company got busy in his work and taking his business to new heights...it took one more yr...

then one day he went to Geet's house and shocked to find no one there...asking neighbors...they told him that no body in Handa family is alive...they are dead in accident when going to their hometown to attend marriage ceremony...

he will be very shocked and then completely got engrossed in his work and work and work...Daadi very sad wants him to settle down...but he is refusing as usual...

after more 2 yrs...now he is very big businessman...
one day he goes to London on business tour to meet some client and when client's team came to meet him...he was shocked to see Geet in that team...Geet also recognized him...they said hello and all...then after meeting Geet left...

he from his sources finds Geet's ph. no. and calls her... there are many questions...the news about her death, whether she loves him or not...how she is here...or is she still single...

he calls her to meet him in park...Geet comes to meet him...he told her about his visit to her house and news he got about her and family...she told him that there was no accident but her parents were murdered...her father married her mother, his love ,without family's approval because she was child widow...they have to leave their hometown...everything was alright until one day they were called back by their family to attend Geet's paternal cousin's marriage...Daarji was repenting his mistake and make his will giving rightful share to Geet father...this angered his brother (Geet uncle) and Geet's cousin Brij...they planned to kill them...when they were returning a truck dashed them but somehow Geet was saved by some passerby family...
everybody assumed them all dead...when Geet got well she came back to her village not knowing about her uncle's plan...now she is rightful owner of the property in her father's name...Daarji was happy to see her back...but she overheard her uncle,aunty,cousin talk and came to know of their deeds...she shouted and fight with them...village people got to know and they all condemned her uncle and family...and they were arrested...

from his friends help Brij tried to kill Geet but she fled and secretely came back to the family who saved her from accident...they welcomed her with full heart...they accepted her as their daughter...then because of her life in danger they shifted to London...they are Malhotras...mr. Malhotra is a doctor...and now Geet is working in a company...

Maan-Geet friendship start again...they started to hang up together and official meeting also as Geet's company is Maan's clients...slowly they come close and one fine day he proposed her...she accepted...he visits her parents(new) and ask for alliance...they are very happy...

Daadi came to London and they got married...

and then they lived happily ever after...

phew...done from my POV...

yaar this type of story I have already read many times in this same forum...that is why mera dimag itna hi chala...and u know I can't bear many twist and turns and misunderstandings...


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Love it graphics
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awwnnn.. that was sad.. geet that was the worst decision.. waisey can we plzzz get an epi... : )
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
wow abbyu did great jobit was one of awesome OSand the game is so superbi am on vacationwill write my view as soona s i get backluv ya
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very well written Sweets..
all the pain & emotions
were beautifully described..
The story is too gud
and the characterisation was superb too..
And I absolutely luvd ur idea of this unusual game..
lets c wat future holds for thm..
you can wait for 10 pages,
take all the suggestions from readers..
And which evr u like the best
write the second part accordingly..
How abt that..??

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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
OMGGG!!!!!!
ABBBYYY I LOVEEE YOUUU!!!! 🤗🤗

Okay, You've Not Seen My LAMBHI Comments😆 So Here's One Coming Your Way😈


You're Not Gonna Believe This!! I Was Smiling Sooo Much Wgile Reading This!!!
Like 4 Times I Went Back And Texted You Saying I LOOOVEEE YOUUU!!!!!
I Know You Were Confused😆 But OMGGG I Loveee Youu Abbyyy🤗

Okay Shall I Tell You?😆

*Geet's college was two hours away by metro from her home'
Yes.. She lived in PQR and got admitted in XYZ College'
So.. That brought two hours journey for her*

THAT Is You😳😆

*Aakriti*

Is Someone On I-F😉

*Hehehe*

😆Abby Does that when texting me😳

*I have always been the favorite of my teachers..*

Yes I Know Abby You were a teacher's pet🤣 Jokee!! I Was One Too😆

uhh.. What a boring class man..!!

YEAH!!! Abby I Know You hate your college!🤣

Aku.. I'm just too hungry..Chalo let's go to the canteen..

HUNGRY+FOOD==ABBY😆

Concentrate on your food girl..

🤣How can you concentrate on your food when An 'M' Shaped lips wala hunk is right next to you?!😆

Aku: omg Geet.. You found class boring and this is what you find interesting..

🤣 This line just cracked me up!!

Bubyeee
I Say BuhBye, You Say Bubyee😆 ABBY!

English honors

😲Abby Abby Abby!!! You Do That Don't you?😉
Or Am I Just too excited😆

Now I'm Gonna Stop.
I LOVE YOU ABBYY!!!!
It was like, I'm Reading Abby😆
OMGG Sooo Cuteee
You Are Sooo Full Of Lifeee !! Like OMGGG Sooo Adorable!!!!
I Kept Saying ILU ILU ILU Cuz I Couldn't Stop Smiling!!!!
And She Tells Me This OS Is Not Good!


No No I'm Not Done Yet!🤣

THE STORY!
😆
Okay, Abby Is Sooo Cuteee
She Meets Maan Singh Khurana Who She finds Good Looking😉😆
Then They Become Friends, Close Friends Like Cat And Mouse🤣
Then Just when everything was going well, Abby's ears take her to the wrong direction and she hears people saying she's dating MSK!😲😆

Judaiii Judaaiii😭😆

What A Stupid Idea!
What People will think!
Abb--I Mean Geet!!! You Fool!! MSK Doesn't Care, Why Do You!! Oh Right, Her Parents😆
Abh Kya Her Family Will Come To The College To Find Out That PEOPLE THINK They're Dating😆
Tie A Rakhi On Him End Of🤣

What Do I Think Will Happen Next?!

Maan Walks Closer to Geet, the lights go off and only One Light that shines Upon the two 'Love Birds'.
Maan goes down on his knees and says
"Marry Me"
🤣🤣
Wait Wait! Hold The Applause!🤣

Geet Looks Down with Tears and,
SLAP!!!!
"My Mum And Dad will kill me!!!"🤣 She screamed with tears rolling down.
"Then I'll ask for your hand Inni!!" Maan shouted, getting up from the hard floor.
"Why My Hand?!" She shouted.
"Marriage Dumbo!" 😆 Maan Said.

And Happy Happy Days Are Here Again!
Happy Ending!😆

Such A Cuteee OS😳
I Lovee Youuu Abbbyyy🤗

Edited by ..Sadiie.. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
Lovely OS dear...

Leaving the end open for our interpretation was a beautiful thought...But would have loved to have read ur ending...

Thanx for the pm...

Waiting to read more such from u...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
Aah Abby... Loved this OS...

The way u started and their frndshp it was awesum...

And hayeee... the song was cheery on the top...

Next moment I would have loved to make them confess...

Indeed it was a blissful moment...

Luv ya sooo much...!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
@All... thanx to each one of you... 😊

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