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Paingel

@Paingel

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#131

nice update pls update soon!! really like to read this ss.

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meettu

@meettu

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Awsome update
Its difficult for geet to accrpt maan
But shr can try atleast

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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#133

ossum dear

wow what msk is upto

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Omg...omg...omg...that ws Amazing part
loved it very much
Thud ...MSK n cooking fir his wife n chlidrens
hahaha good job maan...lage raho!!

past part ws superb...maan ws falling on geets beauty but did not accept that

awww loved maaneet convo...maan trying hard to make geet belive
hope she forgive him soon
eagerly waiting for next part...continue soon
thankx for update n pm

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#135

hum jaante hai jo maan ne geet k saah kiya hai woh bahut hi galat tha...maf karna mushkil hi nehi namumkin hai...magar huein lagta hai agar koi dil se apne uss bhool ka prayaschit kar rahe ho aur zindagi ko nayi tareeke se shuruat karna chahte ho...dil se maafi mang rahe ho toh...ek mauka toh dehi sakte hai na...everybody deserves a second chance...shayad possible na ho magar try toh kar sakte hai na...geet ko maan ko ek mauka dena chahiye...aisa na ho k geet k yeh rukhapan zindagi ko jeene layek na rakh paye...usse jab hoosh aye toh bahut derr na ho jaye...apne nafrat k gehrahi mein itna doobna nehi chahiye jahanse wapas ana mushkil ho jaye...shayad geet samajh jaye aur maan ko ek mauka de de...plz...

superb update...

liked it...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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suba2011

@suba2011

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#136

awesome...fell pity for maan...if possible can you send me your other FFs links...plzzz..i love to read your FFs..

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namita25

@namita25

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#137

awww nice part...

Maan has really changed .. so he kissed Geet forcefully...wondering how will she react to it...

waiting for the next part...

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crazydream

@crazydream

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#138

BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

Amazing

Maan doing everything to woo
Geet n to win her heart.
He is doing all household work.
But I think Geet shouldnt forgive
Him so easily.

Past
Maan wants to take revenge.
He is planning something deadly
Now.
Eager to know his plan.

Continue soon.