Originally posted by: ritzy09
Love the story Simi
you asked a question at the end. My true thoughts are a little feministic so upto you if you want to go down that route
I will want Maan to realise first what a cow and show off extra beuatiful and weight concious girls can be and how nice hearted girls from other spectrum can be. Reality is that there are good and bad people across both spectrum. Maybe some events which just makes him realise that Sameera is not as good as he thinks and Geet is not that as abd he assumes.
Maan should be firends with Geet when she helps him out somehow. As a friend he should encourage her to become fit...not skinny...not fat. Obesity is a health issue and so is being underweight.
As she tries, he encourages and maybe save her from evil trio
Once she is fit, maybe a spark of attraction and rest is history.
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I don't want Maan to ridicule her and then once she ceomes all pretty him falling for her. That is not my image of a hero.
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There is a third angle too. You have not names her crush yet. Maybe that is Dev. Maybe Geet joins another college. There she meets Maan who becomes her firend and again encourage her to be healthy and falls in love with her. Also amkes her realise that a shallow person like Dev is not worth her heart and time.
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Phew that was a long one...waiitng to know which route you go down
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