MG FF: Femme Fatale (2) - Page 79

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Geet is one crazy woman!! She has the wildest humour! (Of course, all credit goes to you 😉)

The present is a mixture of light-hearted fun and dark clouds looming around...

The conversation between Maan and Geet was absolutely hilarious! Had me laughing out loud and once again thanking my luck for being alone in the room! 😆

In the past, perhaps Geet's family was quite an influential one and so they had to pay the price for being involved in that project. But I wonder why those people are still after Geet? It's not like she is a danger to them living in an isolated village like that. Or... is she? I think I just have to wait for the next part to answer my questions. 😊

As a whole, the update was just perfect! Thanks for PMing and I hope you update soon. 😊

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

Geet's life has turned into a very hard shell where sany feelings can't enter...

she loves Maan but can't reveal her identity...

that is so hillarious when she gave him pill for the infection in his important part...

amazing update...

thanx for pm...

Originally posted by: 123mitul

fabulous...i thoroughly enjoyed maaneet's interaction😃😃

Originally posted by: tellyme

Read all parts in a go...

Great going...

Nice writing and great story line

Geet is super intelligent and funny too... Actually she is so free with Maan she doesn't care what he things and thus her awesome body parts conversation...

Bacharach Maan now is used to all her weirdo... Love their conversation all the time...

I hope Maaan is later on able to break the wall she has surrounded herself with and bring a girl out of her Machnine self...

Originally posted by: t_areeb

love the way she always have the upper hand over maan

and her arguments are too good

..and someone is after her? it is good that she is all prepared

Originally posted by: spvd

part 13
awesome part dear...
past
OMG he told her everything...
and is that the reason he named her Pari?
the kid is too smart enough to understand things...
present
OMG that was damn hilarious...
Maan is not getting offended nowadays in fact grateful in his own ways...
cont soon dear...

Originally posted by: Luvforever

Hey!!
Thnx 4 d pm of ur anthr ff & i jst read it & its anthr fantastic work of urs... Its totaly amazing wid new plot & characters... I m totaly in love wid it so, plzz do continue & pm me.. Waiting:-)

Originally posted by: RaDMG25

love that maaneet try and out do each other with their witty remarks loved the infection dialogues tho bravo sanj 👏

Originally posted by: shristi1

Awesome dear.

Continue soon.

Originally posted by: heytal

Commenting for the first time for ur ff

Sorry for being a silent reader so far

😕

Love ur ff

Maan n Pari

childish yet smart,haughty n understanding,naughty yet innocent,confident yet caring,rebellious yet grounded,emotional yet detached.

Maan n Geet

Crazy,absurd,witty, humorous, sharp n smart.

The update was amazing

Geet n Maan are totally hilarious

Oh my this Geet is something, she gets the most craziest ideas out of the blue

🤣 🤣 🤣

Its really difficult to control my laughter n end up getting weird expressions from my mom n bro,certifying me crazy.

Their squabbles glimpses their past yet they are quick enough to mask their emotions.Will they ever put their guards down

😕

Pari's past is very painful,n it is rightly said pain makes u a more mature n brings out the best in u

though it is quite early but still whenever i read this ff one thought crosses my mind will they live happily ever after

😒

Gurvider singh😲 fishy

Continue soon

😊

Originally posted by: shristi1

Awesome dear.

Continue soon.

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 da pm n fantabulous emotional update! Past n presnet well incoroporated! Rajiv n Geet convo was sweet! Poor Maan bt Geet rescued him! Love her answers! Maan shld nt b shocked! Well written! Who is Gurvinder? Update soon..sorry 4 late lieks n comments

Originally posted by: Hot_Indo_Chilly

Amazing!

Originally posted by: drdee142

Great update Sanji. I so love Geet she truly is a gem, so absolutely hilarious and I loved Maan being playful and flirtatious with her.

So the secret of Geet past is gonna be revealed, I'm so eager to know what it is.

Dee

Originally posted by: dona86

awesome update..

loved geet's remark...

Originally posted by: junglli billi

Yipppy i love dis geet! N ofcourse maan alwaz. N u too. Jst wishin for tis thread to be finished soon by us

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

simply amazing part!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: Adorable-Dia

loved it

Originally posted by: lovelycutietedy

loved it dear

Originally posted by: 97531

Superb update dr,

do continue soon.