MG FF: Femme Fatale (2)

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Anubhuti

@tellyme

Sparkler

+ 18

Posted: 13 years ago

#721

Read all parts in a go...

Great going...

Nice writing and great story line

Geet is super intelligent and funny too... Actually she is so free with Maan she doesn't care what he things and thus her awesome body parts conversation...

Bacharach Maan now is used to all her weirdo... Love their conversation all the time...

I hope Maaan is later on able to break the wall she has surrounded herself with and bring a girl out of her Machnine self...

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mitul

@123mitul

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#722

fabulous...i thoroughly enjoyed maaneet's interaction😃😃

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#723

love the way she always have the upper hand over maan

and her arguments are too good

..and someone is after her? it is good that she is all prepared

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#724

part 13
awesome part dear...
past
OMG he told her everything...
and is that the reason he named her Pari?
the kid is too smart enough to understand things...
present
OMG that was damn hilarious...
Maan is not getting offended nowadays in fact grateful in his own ways...
cont soon dear...

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prati

@Luvforever

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#725

Hey!!
Thnx 4 d pm of ur anthr ff & i jst read it & its anthr fantastic work of urs... Its totaly amazing wid new plot & characters... I m totaly in love wid it so, plzz do continue & pm me.. Waiting:-)

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RaDMG25

@RaDMG25

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#726

love that maaneet try and out do each other with their witty remarks loved the infection dialogues tho bravo sanj 👏

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HeytzMaaneet

@HeytzMaaneet

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#727

Commenting for the first time for ur ff

Sorry for being a silent reader so far

😕

Love ur ff

Maan n Pari

childish yet smart,haughty n understanding,naughty yet innocent,confident yet caring,rebellious yet grounded,emotional yet detached.

Maan n Geet

Crazy,absurd,witty, humorous, sharp n smart.

The update was amazing

Geet n Maan are totally hilarious

Oh my this Geet is something, she gets the most craziest ideas out of the blue

🤣 🤣 🤣

Its really difficult to control my laughter n end up getting weird expressions from my mom n bro,certifying me crazy.

Their squabbles glimpses their past yet they are quick enough to mask their emotions.Will they ever put their guards down

😕

Pari's past is very painful,n it is rightly said pain makes u a more mature n brings out the best in u

though it is quite early but still whenever i read this ff one thought crosses my mind will they live happily ever after

😒

Gurvider singh😲 fishy

Continue soon

😊

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#728

hi thanks 4 da pm n fantabulous emotional update! Past n presnet well incoroporated! Rajiv n Geet convo was sweet! Poor Maan bt Geet rescued him! Love her answers! Maan shld nt b shocked! Well written! Who is Gurvinder? Update soon..sorry 4 late lieks n comments