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Posted: 13 years ago
MONSTER! HA HA HA HA HA!!
Kudos to you Maan!!
awww Geet crying and Maan was so hyper to calm her down!!
awww how innocently Geet told about Pari and Maan was like I have been fooled-April Fool lol! he he see Ruchi here is the result of deewangi of ur twisty deewangi ROFL!!
awww Maaneet moment was cute! loved it!!
and Ajenn tell ur parents to accelerate their act since we cant bear Emma anymore!
@Mel: I cant curse my classmates dear since I have to tolerate them for 1 more year lol!
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Anu-Ananya

OMG stealing Emma's make-up! It is as if you have stole her eyesight Francess lol!!
he he Monster Emma!!
ooh! Maaneet too scared of me! I mean all KHURANAS scared of me WOW!!!!!!
HE HE i am so good at "or else" statements. lol!
OMG brushing my puppies teeth! My poor puppies had to touch that yucky Emma grrr!!
he he Geet too scared! Wow Scary is deffo a compliment for me!
OMG that music thing was hilarious! You rock Francessa! ha ha Emma had to sleep on the floor! loud music! Owww Maan really called her


hey sally stole the make-up not Francessa
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Anu-Ananya

MONSTER! HA HA HA HA HA!!
Kudos to you Maan!!
awww Geet crying and Maan was so hyper to calm her down!!
awww how innocently Geet told about Pari and Maan was like I have been fooled-April Fool lol! he he see Ruchi here is the result of deewangi of ur twisty deewangi ROFL!!
awww Maaneet moment was cute! loved it!!
and Ajenn tell ur parents to accelerate their act since we cant bear Emma anymore!
@Mel: I cant curse my classmates dear since I have to tolerate them for 1 more year lol!
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm!


chalo one yaer to go you will defo survive I hope your classmates survive to😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
ha ha all the children cried as Emma entered without makeup! OMG she even called Eve! ha ha seriously this girl is really a fool! With no mind of her own but again scheming and look at that bitch Eve she is still planning against Geet! Gosh these two are such creeps! I so want to punch on their face! No even better how about children fake to throw rotten eggs on their worst actor pics and instead throw on Eve Emm he he!
OMG Emma and Ronaldo Ewww!! Cheap cheap cheap!
they should be made to eat cowdung!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Okay guys I am back with another update guys Ruchi commented love ya Ruchs. The dialogue of Rsroopali are said by herself. That also counts for Ananya's cursing in the previous part. And the piranha's idea goes to my anu completly. Love you guys you make it easier for me to write. So Francessa this is my secrate to write a update in two minutes I steal commenst and paste them🤣so keep commenting guys goes you might find it in the next update

Part 38
Geet finished reading. She looked and the clock it was already 3 o'clock. She looked at maan who was peacefully sleeping in her lap. She caressed his hair. She had a tear in her eye. After reading deewanigi she felt connected with the character. It reminded her of the 12 year long separation from maan. A tear fell on Maan's forehead. Because of geet moving and now the tear maan was awake But geet didn't now. She kissed maan's forehead and mummerd a I love you. Maan smiled. geet thought that maan was smilling in his sleep but that wasn't the case.

M:Misty when I am a sleep jab bhi tumko mutje pe pyaar aata hai na.

Maan opend his eyes. But instead of fighting with him. Geet removed his head from her lap lay next to him and hugged him.

G:Nahi to muthje to hamesa aap pe pyaar ataa hai

Maan was shocked to hear that he expected geet to fight him deny it ect. What geet did next gave him another sweet shock. She gave him another kiss on his cheek.

G:I love you soo sooo much maan you are truly in every sense my dhak dhak

Maan smiled and blushed (MSK BLUSHED PEOPLE, that is not a joke)he hugged geet thighter.

G:Wah kya baat hai my dd is blushing.

Geet pulled his cheeks

M:Kya karoon meri geet jo flirt bhangi hai
G:Oh you called me flirt leave I won't talk to you

Geet turned the other way round with a fake angry was. Hai she looked so cute.Maan smiled and hugged her from behind.

M:Sorry misty
G:Hmm it's okay now let me sleep my dreamland oops maanland is waiting for me.

She winked at Maan and closed her eys. Maan got another shock did geet just say Maanland. Maan smiled and thought wah laghta hai deewanigi ka asar hai.Should personally thank Ruchs.With that thought Maan feel asleep.

In the morning Maneet got a phone from Ajenn.

M:Hi ajenn did you got the info
A:Yep I am sending the parcel to you mom insists that maan uncle and geet aunty see it. Mom says that you guys are to young to see it.
M:Hmm I see
A:Oh and another thing
you now rsroopali.
M: rsroopali????
A:Ananya's sister
m:oH we always call her Roopali
A:Hmm se has send a package for ananya.
M:alright I will tell her thx for everything . thanks aunty for me btw .
A: I will but I am telling you Maneet I think mom and dad know your parents. They where yesterday really worried for them and happy that they are together. Dad was saying he really misses Maan uncle and mom said she misses them both. Dad says he really feels bad about everything that happenend I heard them say that
M:Whats the name of your parents
A:Sheen and Vicky
M:What sheen and vicky. They got married
A:Yes but why are you so shocked maneet what do you now
M:Sheen was mom's friend she supported her through al this she and Meera aunty where the only one who believed her. And vicky uncle is dad's brother
A:WHAT OMG that makes us family
M:Oh that's so cool
A:And you now I now Meera aunty to she comes here all the time
M:Do they life in calefornia
A:Yep. Mom, dad and meera aunty left india I don't now why
M:Hmmm
A:Now I get why the names of the main leads in twisty deewanigi are maan and geet creature must be emma and brij evelien🤣
M:What do you mean what had twisty deewanigi to do with this
A:You now who Ruchs parents are?
M:ehh no but I am sure Sally knows😆
A:😆 Ruchs parents are Meera aunty and yash Uncle
M:wait I think yash was dad's friend
A:Possible
M:So she must now about mom and dad and she named the name of her leads to mom and dad
A:I guess she must aslways be hoping somewhere that they would be back together. And beacuse it sounded inpossible in reality she made them one in her book.
M:Hmm that means she must now a lot. We must talk to her.
A:yeah your right. I think all of us must meet
M:Your right

That's when the bell ring

M:I think the packet is here. Will talk to you latte. Bye sis
A:Bye Agent bro

Maneet giggled. After hanging up he walked towards the door. He grabbed the packet. He knew he wasn't aloud to see it but he couldn't help himself hey he was a agent. Sunddenly he felt Ananya's packet moving. He grabbed her packet and gave it to Ananya.

A:What's this maneet
M:Don't now your sister send you this packet.

Ananya first read the letter:

Hey sis,

Having fun😆. I am sending butterfly. So she can bite Emma.
I've got a briliant plan for you guys to teach Emma a lesson.
Make her take you guys to a zoo. Lock her up in the zoo cage
and let the animals have fun with her. 🤣

Love you Ananya,

Roopali

Maan looked with shocking eyes to the lettter. he couldn't believe Roopali wrote this letter. You would never think that such a sweet girl could have such ideas. Roopali looked like a angel. She's got long her till her shoulders. Big Hazel collard eyes. And a very innocent and sweet face. He looked at Ananya who was looking with great pride and happiness to to letter and the packet the got. Maneet thought pakka it's her devil influence on that angel face Roopali.


Precap: What kind of animal is butterfly. Shh @rsroopali don't tell. Why did Sheen, Vicky,Yash and Meera move to California. What happened between the two brothers. And what is Emma's truth
??

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Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Seriously they dont deserve people or family like Mohinder or Geet!
No better state than beggars for them!
Woohoo Maan admits that I would be great help to teach Emm a lesson! Thank you!
How about all going for swimming and Emma knowingly pushes Geet into water! Though Geet knows swimming she would pretend not to know that! And Maan gives her a mouth to mouth which further changes into a passionate kiss all infront of Emm What say Mel?
I dont think its a bad idea!
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Posted: 13 years ago
yayyy Am getting in Maan's good books…..

wow Geet got so affected by Twisty Deewangi….😲

OMG The MSK blushed??? *me faint*😲

Creature is Rimi and Brij is Evelien…😕 Omg matlab Brij is Rimi's Mother…😲. What a twishhtt….🤣

OMG Ajenn and Maneet are cousins…😲

Me ke parents Yash aur Meera hain????😲

Mujhe toh pata hi nahi tha… *Yay… Me ki full on heroine style entry*😉

Yes yes Ajenn , Maneet - me knows a lot… 😉

Hmmm me waiting to meet my long lost cousins now…😆

Me is feeling so pampered right now….😳

In love with Roopali's idea…👏

Abb yeh Butterfly kya hai???😕

Ummm let me guess -A BABY CROCODILE….😉

Me just wants to get hold of these Emma and Evelien , Tie their hair together and throw them off to a river full of crocodiles… GRRR…😡

But me guesses that even the crocodiles would run away seeing those ugly dirty witches… Ewww yuck even they have got some standards..🤣….

Me is wondering what is going on in all the little devil's minds….🤓

Loved the update…😳

Me is loving it sooo much….

Edited by ruchs - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Anu-Ananya

Seriously they dont deserve people or family like Mohinder or Geet!
No better state than beggars for them!
Woohoo Maan admits that I would be great help to teach Emm a lesson! Thank you!
How about all going for swimming and Emma knowingly pushes Geet into water! Though Geet knows swimming she would pretend not to know that! And Maan gives her a mouth to mouth which further changes into a passionate kiss all infront of Emm What say Mel?
I dont think its a bad idea!


😆 chi chi geet ke babaij kaise baate karthi hai. Main masoom bacha I can't write that now be a good girl and keep it to the curses🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg!twist deewngi ne geet ko badal dhi..
thanks ruchs...
so butterfly!!gud idea!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome lovely mindblowing FULL OF FRIENDS update 😆
loved it a lot😃

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