MG OS-Dus Bahane Karke Le Gayi Dil

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Hello my long lost Maaneetians!😊

I'm back with another OS to entertain every spectator and if you've just casually glanced in this direction or clicked into this topic then I must say, welcome :)

Here is my OS! Please Comment and of course my no.1 Rule, Enjoy 😊

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Dus Bahane Kar Ke Le Gayi Dil...

Maan Singh Khurana walked through the deep hallways of the Narcotics Control Department scanning everything around him.

"Sir!" called a feminine voice.

Maan stopped and the girl rushed to Maan and said, " Sir.. Sir there is a call for you, it's from Ranveer sir..." replied the girl.

"Thank you Avantika, I'll get to it" replied Maan sternly. She nodded and she walked off and Maan continued to his office.

He received Ranveer's call, " Haan Ranveer, kya hua?"

"Looks like the most dangerous Malaysian drug trade has been halted completely since their bases were in Delhi itself" said Ranveer.

" Acha, to?" asked Maan.

"Looks like Miss.Handa has done it again" replied Ranveer. Maan frowned, " Ranveer who is this Miss.Handa that everyone so fondly refers to?"

Ranveer chuckled, " She is the head officer of the Narcotics Control Department in Mumbai"

" And so I heard..."replied Maan.

" She's damn good...and Rishi Sir was also telling me she has broken into the Malaysian drug trade bases and completely destroyed half of them and their remnants in many parts of India" replied Ranveer.

"Impressive" replied Maan sarcastically.

" And now both Delhi and Mumbai will be working together to further destroy the drug trade from Bangalore" added Ranveer.

"So you're saying that we work with Miss. Handa and her department?" asked Maan.

"Exactly..." replied Ranveer.

"Rishi sir told me to tell you, since you were out of office" informed Ranveer.

" Thanks Ranveer...I'll get to connecting with Miss.Handa soon" replied Maan as he shut the phone down and laid back on his chair.

He closed his eyes for a second until he received another call. Maan connected it to his blue tooth, " Hi Rishi.."

" You better come now Maan...we've gotten this in our hands..." replied Rishi. He shut the phone and Maan immediately stood up.

He reached for his guns and strapped them to his belts. He walked out of his office and down the stairs to the parking lot.

He drove away with full speed and he received the address of the location where Rishi was...

It only took him a few minutes to get there and he saw that it looked like a rundown shack.

He parked the car and saw his other police officers surrounding the area... Maan reached for his gun and placed it closely to him as he snuck into the area.

He rushed behind the wall of the shack and looked in to a thin young woman pacing around...

A hand was placed on Maan's shoulder and he immediately turned around and aimed it to the person...

"main hoon" replied Rishi.

Maan aimed his gun away and replied, "Sorry Rishi.."

"I think its time to go in? What say?" asked Rishi. Maan nodded and he went in and saw that the young woman stopped pacing around.

Her big heels stopped tapping softly and cleverly against the ground...

"And that is Miss. Handa" replied Rishi in a hush tone.

Maan narrowed his eyes... " Lets go..."

The two men came in and the young woman turned around... her eyes fixed onto them...

It was almost a piercing stare...

She hushed them and Rishi nodded...And Maan couldn't see her because some parts of the shack were dark and some were bright because of the sun and broken ceiling.

Suddenly someone jumped out from behind and tried to grab at her until she twisted his arm as she flung him forward.

She crashed him onto the floor and took out her gun and Maan immediately went in...

He tried to get up until Maan stepped onot his hand and pointed at his forehead, " Don't even try..."

She pulled her gun away and only said, " One...Two...Three..."

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Desigirl144 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Maan looked up and knew exactly she was going to do...it was a classical raid!

She shot up at the lights creating sparks and suddenly a few men came running out... They ran towards her and Maan until they face their backs to eachother where he then shot two men and she shot the other two...

The shack remained quiet again and then she whistled and all the police officers entered the shack with guns aimed...

They held everyone else in who was hiding in hostage and then Maan ordered a few to arrest and then he stepped out of the shack.

Rishi clapped, " Good job officer.."

Maan nodded and then Rishi smiled behind him, " And there is Miss. Handa..."

Maan turned around to see a girl with black pants, a white long sleeved shirt that was rolled up to her elbows...She wore her aviator sunglasses and she had her holster strapped over her shoulders with guns and another belt around her tiny waist with more guns...She wore black high heels and her hair was pulled back into a bun...

"Officer Handa... lovely to see you again" said Rishi. Maan stood there as she reached them.

She pulled her sunglasses up to reveal her light green eyes...

Maan held out his hand, " Nice to finally meet you Miss-"

" It's Geet..."replied Geet in her strong yet graceful feminine voice. She smiled to the side and shook his hand...

He could not help but stare at her beautiful face...Rosy pink lips and pure light green eyes...a cute nose...

" And nice to meet you Mr.Khur-"began Geet.

"You may call me Maan" replied Maan. Geet broke into a wider smile, " Nice to meet you Maan..."

They took their hands away and Maan finally said, " Impressive...That trick is only used rarely"

Geet smirked, " Well... if it's rare, then it's probably used by skilled individuals isn't it?"

Maan was impressed with her striking confidence...

"I'm glad you classify yourself as a skilled officer Geet...you are one" replied Maan.

"I'm quite impressed that Officer Maan Singh Khurana has a few words left for compliments" said Geet.

Maan let out a deep smirk, " I only give to the more deserved individuals Miss.Geet...you ought to consider yourself quite lucky"

"I take it as a compliment and not as a favor from you Mr. Maan"said Geet as she slipped her phone into her belt.

Maan kept quiet and he only watched with amusement... She was quite fiery for her age and she beamed confidence around her.

She slipped her aviator glasses on and said, " I'll take your leave... goodbye Rishi..."

Maan raised an eyebrow and she smirked, " Consider this a favor too Mr. Khurana..."

She walked away and Rishi chuckled, " She is the best one...best head officer we have had in ages..."

"I can see that" replied Maan.

"Did she hurt your ego?" asked Rishi.

"Not at all..." replied Maan.

He pat Maan on the shoulder and walked away chucking to himself...

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I hope you all enjoyed it! Please Comment and Like!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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cool! great to see u back but please update others too :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wait is that the end?? Pl do cont...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was so different and awesum..
Loved to c geet in a diff face..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow yaar
suprbbb😃
lvd it...

Edited by parikashyap - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great that you are back.
OS was good. Very much impressive with Geet.
I always love you idea of using action base story.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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somebody managed to impress officer Maan
has to be special
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow relii nyc os luvd it x
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update...
maan ki takkar mein koi toh hai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
loved it😊

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