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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: monica9feb

Abhinash aisa nai h... Hm maan ko bash sirf isliye kr rhe h kyo ki usne jo kiya h wo glt h... Agr use ye lgta b h ki geet glat h to iska mtlb ye to nai na ki use physically nd nd mentally touture kre... Usne 1 bar b geet se sch jane ki koshish nai ki... Nd geet wo to itna sb ho jane k baad b sirf maan ki khusiya hi chahti h... Ab b wo apne bare me nai soch rhi... Wo to sirf apne baby ko uske papa ka pyaar dena chahti h... Bt maan ne itne time me use nai smjha to wo ab kya smjhe ga... Apni gussse me usne sb kuch bigad diya... I hope nxt update me maan ko sch pta chal jayee...



i appriciate ur thoughts but kisiko blam nahi kar rahi hun i know ki maat ek sin kiya hai and he deserves severe punishment
aur tumney jo kaha ki maan ko pata lagana chaiya tha jo ki maan ney kiya but jo culprit hai wo bahut shatir hai sab kuch geet key against kar diya hai
aur tum boi ki maan ko geet se sach jana chaiya tha are jab maan usmein viswas hi nahi karta to how could he listen to her truth

mujeh abhi bhi lagata hai ki jo person who photo mein hai use uppar maan ka bahut bharosa hoga else who kabhi ki geet pey shak nahi karta

mujeh to lagata hai yeh sab sameera rahul aur aniee ka kiya dhara hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
Please please stop tortutring Geet
she doest deserve this
when Maan will learn the truth he will regret...
amazing update dear!
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Posted: 13 years ago
i read ur ff in one go... Wht confused me is geet hated him b4 flashbacks too much but all of a sudden she is not hating him for forcing her...

But rest u r saying maan is not in his right mind n not hate him...

But reality is if he just torchured her physically n mentally(which hed is already doing) then its ok but forcing her tht to sooo brutally forgetting her being a human never justify his out of mind he is behaving more like a monster which creates hatred for him in our minds...so i will hate maan no matter wht may b ur justification...(sorry 4 tht)
he is talking abt her char.. But wht is his char?? He is being a man by forcing a girl!! If he is such a well brought up guy unlike her as he thought he wud have revenged her betrayl in any other way but not by raping her n tht too for more thn a month...whts gr8 abt him other than him being a low life himself...

N reagrding baby at the amount of suffering geet is going do u really think tht wud survive.. N dont u think baby will always remaind the brutality with which maan behaved with her...

I know people will hate me n even bash me for being insensitive but i personally dont want baby...bcoz it really is impossible for the survival chances at the amount of suffering she is undergoing... Even after she came 2 know abt baby.. Maan forced her pretty brutally...


Really yaar i want baby out of love but not out of hatred n mistrust...

N rest ur choice but i personally dont want baby...n want maan n geets family to suffer a hell
Edited by bhanu_rekhag - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG.. Geet is suffering too much.. hope she goes away with Dadi somewhere..
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART 10
Ok guys I know wat science and medical says as being from a science background I do keep my track for the developments. But mostly in Indian society people hardly go for virginity test. It happens only when someone reports a rape and as far as my concept is concerned geet has not done it. And about abortion test even I know tat it can be happen but can are so called society accept to go under all this test. Even if the person is very modern and so called from the 21st century but our traditions and values don't give us a chance to go for it. There are also cases of rapes where people fear of their dignity and don't report about it. However modern we are but our traditions and values don't accept to do all this medical test.

Yes I know tat Maan is wrong and he has done the biggest mistake by not trusting his love but as far as I can understand anger turns a person into a devil so for this I don't need to give justifications. Maan and her family could go for those medical test but when anger has taken a toll no one thinks about the truth. and as far as the proofs I said there are some professionals who do fake photography and you cant even recognize tat the photo is real or not. I know I may not be able to give the correct explanation for my concept but I have tried my best.

and I did not say geet is weak, yes she loves Maan a lot and she knows him inside out so she fears of the aftermath consequences when the truth will be out. She did try to find out the truth but the person who has done this was so careful tat no one could get it. And in one update I have said tat Maan did meet one of the person with whom geet photo was there and tat person has confirmed about the relation. So as far as this I have made my points clear enough. I know tat maan's behaviour cannot be justified as right and I will not do it. As I know he is wrong but my main point is tat when a person love someone with passion he hates the same person with the same passion also. But ya wat Maan did was wrong. I have not shown geet weak here she truly loves her family and maan but this does not mean she is weak. My further updates will show tat.

As far is reality is concerned i m well aware about it but friends this is a fiction and if we consider all tat i would never be able to write one. So hope you understand my point of view and enjoy this. I once againg will remind you tat this is not a light hearted story like most of that as i m not good in tat my i cant express my emotios of pain well. So here in this one i tried my hand on my best emotions called pain and hate, anger, love. Evn my furhter updates will be full of pain, emotins and love.

I hope you will like this part and like most wanted geet to be shown bit strong i tried and yes i have not changed my concept. In my prologue i did not say tat geet hates maan but it was her out burst of motherhood. And in this part i have shown it. And about geet hating maan or not will be shown later as my story line proceeds.

Thank you all and hope you enjoy this and will rejoice a bit as geet is back to her strong character .

And I do believe giving a chance to rectify the mistakes' so here maan will to get a chance but will have to pay a big price.

PART 10

Maan was working in his office when he got a call from Arjun saying tat Annie ahd a fall from the staircase and was hospitalised.Maan was hell worried for Annie and rushed to the hospital. The khuranna's and Handa's were all present except Geet. Annie was inside the emergency room wher the doctor were taking care of her. After wat seemed like hours doctor came out with the news of Annie having a miscarriage. Everyone was shocked by hearing this dreadful news . No one could dare to go and meet Annie but they had to. Slowly everyone went inside and consolled her. Maan was sad nad could not meet Annie so he preffered ataying out when Geet's dcoctor met him. The doctor called Maan inside cabin and Maan thinking tat she may be Annie's doctor went to meet her.

Doctor: Mr. Khuranna where have you been.

Maan: doctor is there any problem with Annie tat you called me here.

Doctor: Mr.Khuranna I have called you to talk about your wife. She was to come here for the abortion and here are the papers.

Doctor handed the papers to him and Maan was all the more shocked by hearing about geet. He went through the papers and it had his signature but he could clearly make out tat he had not signed.

Maan: geet and Abortion

Doctor: Mr. Khuranna your wife is pregnant an was here for a abortion few days bac as she said tat you both are not yet ready for the the baby.

Maan got up from his seat and went away taking the papers before the doctor could complete his sentence. Maan was all unaware about this and he was so angry on geet tat he rushed to KM. he reached the mansion and yelled out to geet and ran to his room. He saw geet sitting in one corner of the room which made him more angry. He marched towards her and grabbed her by her hand pulling her up. He threw the papers on her and geet was sacred by seeing his anger filled eyes.

Maan: yeh sab kya hai geet.

(wats all this geet)

Geet could not understand wat he was saying and slowing picked the papers and was shocked to see the abortion papers which she had signed on his behalf and had submitted the same to the hospital.

Maan: tumari himmat kaisi hui mujhse yeh baat chupane ki geet. Tumari itni jurarat ki mere ghar mein rehkar bhi yeh sab kiya tumne.

(how dare you hide all this from me. How dare you do this while living in my house)

Geet: Maan meri baat suniye..

( maan plesae listen to me)

Maan: baat ab kaunsi baat batani baki hai geet. Tumhe jo karna tha tum woh kar juki ho. Oh was it tat after being my wife also I could not satisfy you lust geet. Was it tat this child was nor mine.

(wat else is left to say geet. Wat you wanted to do you did. Oh was it tat after being my wife also I could not satisfy you lust geet. Was it tat this child was nor mine.)

Geet: bas kijiye maan. Bas kijiye. Apne khud ke bache ke baaremein aisa kehna ka soch bhi kaise sakthe hain aap.

( just stop it maaan. Stop it. How can you think such low about your own child)

Maan: tho tumari himmat kaisi hui meri bache ko maar dalne ki. Kaisi himmat hui Khuranna khadaan ke waris ko maar dalne ki. Agar yeh mera khoon hota tho tum itni himmat nahi karthi geet ki tum mere bache ko maar dalthi. Yeh kyu nahi kethi ki yeh tere kisi aashiq ka tha. Kyu nahi kethi ki yeh tere ush zindagi ka sach hai jo tum humesha se jeethe aayi ho. Kyu nahi kethi ki yeh kisi aise insan ka bacha hain jiske saath tum raatein rangeen karthi thi aur jab mann bar aya tum ushe phek diya. Aur tum keh rahi ho ki yeh khuranna ka khoon hain.

( than how dare you abort my baby. How dare you kill Khuranna family's heir. And if really this baby was mine you would dare not take the step to abort it geet. Why don't you say tat it was one of your so called boyfriend child. Why dint you say tat its one of you truth about your dark life. Why don't you agree tat its was one a person with whom you spent nights and after using him you threw him out. And now you say tat its mine)

Geet: just shut up maan. Just shut up. How dare you say tat.

Maan: kyu bura laga. Yeh kyu nahi kehti ki yeh mera bacha nahi tha.

( why are you hurt. Why don't you just say tat its not mine)

Geet: haan nahi tha yeh aapka bacha. Kyu ki yeh ek rapist ka bacha tha. Maan Singh Khuranna jishne apni hi patni ka rape kiya uska bacha tha yeh. A bloody rapist child. So how do you think tat I will keep this child of yours.

( yes its not your baby. Because it's a bloody rapist child. Maan singh khuranan who raped his own wife, its his child. So how do you think tat I will keep the baby.)

Maan: don't you dare geet. Apni juban pe kabu karo warna acha nahi hoga.

( don't you dare geet. Mind you words and tongue otherwise it wont be good for you.)

Geet: warna kya maan. Aap shayad bhool rahe hain ki jabse aapne mujhse shaadi ki mujhe ghar ke bahar jaane se rokha hai tho yeh kisi aur ka bacha kaise ho saktha hai. Tho hua na yeh aapka yani business tycoon Maan Singh Khuranna ek rapist ka bacha. Aur aap chahthe hai ki main ish bache ko janam do.

( otherwise wat maan. I think you have forgotten tat ever since the marriage m under house arrest. So how can it be someone elses child. So finally its yours. A bloody rapist child. And you want I should give birth ti him)

Maan: tumari himmat kaisi hui geet jo tumne Maan Singh Khuranna ke bache ko maar dala.

(how dare you kill my baby geet.)

Geet: kyu dard hua aapko. Abhi tho aapne kaha na ki yeh aapka bacha nahi hai phir ab kyu.

( why its hurts maan. Just now you said na tat its not your baby than why now.)

Maan gets angry and slaps her.

Geet: kya galat kaha maine maan. Agar main aapko batati ki main aapke bache ki maa banae wali thi tho aap maan lete, nahi na. phir ab kyu. Jab main chik chik ke bata rahi thi ki maine kuch nahi kiya tab aapne vishwas kiya jo ab meri baatao pe karthe. Waise bhi yeh ek aise insan ka bacha tha jo apne pyar par vishwas na kar sakha. Jo apni gusse aur nafrat ki aag main sach nahi dekh sakha. Kya kaha tha aapne ki aapne ush photo wale insan se sach pucha aur ushne yeh kabul kiya ki mera uske saath naajayaz rishtha tha. Aur shayad aur bhi tasveerein dekhayi hogi na. par maan jab aap khud mujhse ush insan se durr rehne ke liye kehte the tab kaha gaya tha aapka yeh vishwas. Yaar phir jab ushe aapko yeh jhoota sach bataya jhooti tasveero ke saath tab maan liya na. aur ab kis haq se aap ish bache ko aapka keh rahe hain. yeh mat bhulaye ki aap sab ne milkar mujhpar izlaam laga hain ki main ek bachalan ladki hoon. Tho haan aaj main kabul karthi hoon ki main hoon aisi aur yeh bacha meri aayashi ka sach hain.

( wat wrong did I say. If I had to tell you tat its your child would you believe it. No you would not. When I was shouting out for my innocence did you belive me than how come you would do now. Anyways it was your child who did not trust his love who did not see the truth in front of his revenge and anger. Wat you said tat the man in the photo proved tat I had illicit relations with him and you believed but where ths belief went you you used to warn me for staying away from them. Oh is ot tat when he proved himself right you believed it. And now with wat right do you say tat its your child. Don't forget tat you all blamed me and tagged me as a flith girl and yes now I agree tat I m and this child is the result of tat.)

Maan was hell more angry on her and slapped her again. Geet was frustrated the moment he first said tat it was not his child. She was all the while taking his torture because she loved him but now when he said tat it was not his child the mother inside her could not bear it. She had to show him his real face.

Maan: so you agree tat.

Geet: haan aur yeh jo bache ki baat kar rahe hain na aapko nahi lagtha Mr. Khuranna ki jab logo ko pata chalega ki yeh ek rape ki nishani hai aur yeh ki MSK ne apni hi biwi ka rape kiya tho log hasege aapar. Aur jaha tak ish bache ko rakhni ki baat hai tho main kisi rapist ki bache ko nahi rakhna chahthi. After all mere reputation ka sawal hai.

( and now when you are talking about tha baby don't you feel tat when people will come to know tat the baby was outcome of a rape and tat MSK raped his own wife people will laugh at you. And how can you think tat I will keep a rapist child after all it's the question of my reputation.)

Maan: geet tum shayad bhool rahi ho ki tum Maan Singh Khuranna se baath kar rahi ho.

( geet I think you have forgotten tat you are talking to MSK)

Geet: nahi bhooli main Mr. khuranna. Par ab jo mere samne hai who sirf aur sirf ek rapist hai jo apna badala har raat mujpar zabardashti karke leta hain. ek aisa insan jo har raat apni patni ka rape kartha hain. aur apni mardagini deektha hain. aur aap chahthe hain ki main aise insan ke bache ko janam do.

( no I havent. But right now who is standing in front of me is only a rapist and who rapes his wife almost everyday. And you want me to keep his baby)

Maan gets more angry and raises his hand again to slap her but this time geet holds his hand in mid air and says.

Geet: don't mr. khuranna. Ab aur nahi. Bahut sehan kar juki hoon main aapka torture ab aur nahi. Bahut bezaathi ki aapne meri par ab nahi. Aapne har ek hadh paar ki maan. Socha ki ek din aapka gussa thanda hoga par nahi. Socha ki bache ki baat sunkar tho aap apna gussa jhod denge. Par acha hua maine ish bache ko janam dene se pehle hi maar dala. Kya kethi main ushe ki uska Khud ka pita ushe apna nahi mantha. Main theek kiya na mr. khuranna.

( don't Mr. Khuranna. Not any more. I had enough of yours but not now. You have crossed every limit now thought tat you will cool but it never happened. Thought tat by learning about the child you will leave your anger but its was good tat I aborted it. Wat would I tell him tat his own father does not accept him)

Maan: haan geet theek kiya tumne. . Acha kiya jo tumne mere bache ko abort kiya. Aur yeh bhi dekh raha hoon ki tumhe bahut himmat aayi hai. Shayad koi naya aashiq mila hain.

( yes geet you did the right thing. Good tat you aborted the baby. And even I can see tat you have become stronger. I think you got someone else)

Geet closes her eyes in frustration and says: himmat tho bahut thi mujhe maan. Par kya hain na aapse pyar karne ka natak karna tha na tho chup chap sehan karthi rahi. Par ab nahi, bahut ho juka hain tho socha kyu na ish khel ko yahi khatam kare. Woh kya haina Mr. Khuarrana taq aa juki hoon main aapse. Utna mazza nahi aata ab aapke saath bed pe. Pehle socha ki chalo smart, hot aur happening hain par jab sachayi ka pata chala ki aap sirf naam ke liye handsome aur hot hain aur kuch nahi tho main bore ho juki thi. Par beech main yeh aapka bache ne mera jeena haram kiya tho socha ki chalo jaane se pehle iska bhi kaam khatam karthe hain. and now you see tat m fit and fine.

(I was always strong maan. But you know na tat I had to show att I loved you so I gave in to your tirtures. But not anymore. I ma tired of you mr. khuranna you are not so good in bed anymore. I thought tat you are smart and hot but later I came to know the truth. And I m now bored of you. And by mistakely this baby came so I ahd to abort it and now you can see me fit and fine)

Maan: Acha kaam kiya geet. Par yeh mat sochna ki main tumhe itni aasani se jaane dunga geet aur ab jab tumhe itna bada khadam uttaya hi hai tho iski tho sazza tumhe milni hi hogi. Just wait and watch geet.

( good work geet. But don't think tat I will leave you so easily you will have to pay for it. )

Geet: be careful Mr. Khurranna. Yeh mat bhoolna ki main aab aapki aur koi baat nahi maanugi. And don't forget tat I can take you behind the bars for raping me.

( Be careful Mr. khuranna. Don't forget tat now I wont listen to u. and I can put your behind bars fro raping me)

Maan: tho tum mujhe jail bhej dungi.

( so you will sent me to jail)

Geet: agar uski jarrurat pade tho woh bhi karne se peeche nahi jaugi ab.

( if time comes I will surely)

Maan: dekthe hain geet ki kaun kya kartha hain.

( lets see geet who does wat)

With this maan lecft geet all alone and geet broke down. She was holding since the first time maan said tat its not his child. She knew tat this would be coming but was not ready to face it. She had to be brave for her child now and therefore decided to make him believe att she had aborted the baby. She knew the every word she said was wrong but now she had to do it. She could not let maan torture her more when the baby was breadthing inside her. She also knew tat maan wont kep quite for long and was planning to destroy her more , but now she could not take any risk for her baby. She got up witnher determined mind of taking some drastic steps. She went to her wardrobe and started packing her clothes. She knew tat she was taking a big decision of leaving the house but to save the baby she had to do. She knew about maan's anger more now and after knowing the false news about abortion he wont keep quite. He would go to any extent for harming her but now she was not alone. She had to save the baby from her love, her husband and foremost from the father. She could not let the baby suffer due to their misunderstandings. She finished packing and went down as she knew tat no one was in the mansion and slowly went away by giving a last glance to her house. She had tears in her eyes because she knows tat once she is out of the house she will never be able to return back. She did not know where she will go but she had to go far away from here so tat no one could find her.

Precap: who will know the truth about geet.

Edited by sdlife19 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
yay… Me FIRST…

Hmmm me feels that Geet is wrong…

Agreed that Maan should not have spoken about the child being someone else's…

But by proving that she aborted the baby, she made things all the more complicated…..

But yes me is glad she stood strong for the sake of her baby….

A good decision of leaving the home….

Precap is really good… Geet really needs someone right now….

Awesome update….
Edited by ruchs - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum update dear:)
lovved it:)
i m with geet...wants to see maan burning in hell of guilt..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome loved it



pata nai not feeling bad for anie



somewhere i think she is responsible for maaneet problem




nd i start lyking dis geet



she is rite



how dare he told its not his child at first




waiitng for the next going to love it
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg finally geet did the rite thing way to go girl finally yuppy so happy iwant maan n her family to repent badly 😉

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