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Posted: 13 years ago
dear i will say ur story is more painful that maaneet because urs is not fiction,, its true and i know what felt losing a friend,, best friend...but yeah i love this story don't worry about anything u write what u want,, that way u want... reader will love that way because all loves ur story...
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Posted: 13 years ago
just want to say i have read some comments
everyone seems to hate maan very much but
we have to see it from his POV also he thinks that he was betrayed by t\his love
so he is just duing all this due to his betrayal
everyone saying dont let geet forgive maan
just think once geet would forgive maan after sometime but would maan be able to forgive himself in this lifetime

if the situation as been different that means if maan would have beeen in the position where geet is now
and geet would have been torching maan all the way would all be saying that maan not to forgive geet when the truth comes out
no then everybody would have told that geet should be given achance to rectify her mistake but not in cas of maan coz we all r womens and we dont want womens to suffer
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 9

Geet was all in pain and though maan had warned her from sleeping on bed but the whole night maan did not leave her for a second. He was so harsh in his moves tat it was so difficult for geet to even move bit. She felt her sharp pain in her wrist and saw tat her wrist was turned almost blue with blood stains on it. She brought her hand closer and saw tat due to the pressure of Maan's hold her bangles were broken and it had cut her wrist and it was still some wat bleeding. She tried to stop it and slowly tried to get up when she saw tat her there were blood stains on the bedsheet. She knew tat it was not only due to her first time but also due to the wound. She was so weak due to the last night tat while getting up she tripped and fell on Maan's chest which made Maan to get up. He pushed her first with anger and then holds her by her hand due to which geet flinches in painb and screams'.ahhh..

Maan: don't. don't scream I have not done anything to you.. and if you keep screaming I wont mind to repeat the whole night again.

Geet was in tears by now which then pain and she tried to remove her hand from his grip.

Geet: Maan chodiye muhje. Dard ho raha hain. Please maan.

( Maan leave me .. its paining. Please Maan)

Maan: oh cut the crap geet. I know you just like to cook up such things.

Geet: Maan haath chodiye please dard ho raha hain.

(Maan leave my hand . its paining maan)

By now geets wound started bleeding again and Maan felt something sticky and lossened his grip on her hand only to see her wrist bleeding. Geet tries to stop bleeing while the other hand holding the sheet covering her bare body. She was so sacred and in pain tat she did not have any energy left. She silently moved out of the bed for washroom when maan said.

Maan: don't forget to change the bedsheets. See your bloody blood has made a mess of my bed. I want them clean before I get mad again.

Geet just nodded and said to herself: Maan yeh tho aapne dekh liya ki yeh mera khoon hain par shayad aap bhool rahe hai ki jab bhi koi ladki pehli baar aisa rishta rakthi hain tho thodi si tho bleeding hoti hain par shayad aapne gusse aur badale ki aag mein yeh kabhi nahi samnjhege. Kash aap yeh sab dekhar tho mujhpar vishwas karte par main itni badhnaseeb hoon ki main aap ko yeh yakeen bhi nahi dila sakthi ki kal ki raat, pehli baar kisi ne mujhe ish tarah chua hai aur woh bhi sirf aapne jiska aapko haq hain. Aur shayad aap yeh kabhi jaan bhi nahi payenge Maan.

( maan you atleast saw tat its my blood but I think you forgot tat when its first time for a girl she somewat bleeds but you have not even realized it as you were the one to break my virginity7. hope you could understand tat these blood stains are not only from my wound but due to your breaking my virginity. First time someone touch me so deepa dnits you who did but you will never believe tat. )

Maan was all ready for office and came down. He saw Arjun siting with his family and chatting. He raised his eyes to meet his when he heard dadi calling out to geet.

Dadima: geet bete aap yaha aaye. Yeh dekhe Arjun aapko lene aaya hai.

( geet beta come here. See Arjun has come to take you )

Maan: lene matlab.

( to take means)

Naina: Maan bete shayad aap bhool juke hai ki kal hi aapki shadi hui hai aur rasam ke anusaar geet ko aaj pagphere ke liye jaana hai. isliye Arjun geet ko Handa Haveli le jane aaya hai.

(Maan I think you have forgotten tat you are married now and as per the tradition the bride should go to her parental house for pagphere. Tats why Arjun is here for taking geet to Handa Haveli)

Maan: yeh sab main nahi manta mom.

( I don't understand all this crap and I don't even believe it)

Dadima: aapke mane ya na mane se koi farak nahi padtha. Aur jaise aaj aap apni shadi ke dusre din office jana nahi bhoole vaise hum apni rasame nahi bhool sakthe.

( you believe or not it does not matter to us. And like you don't forget to go to KCon the second day of your wedding like wise we cant forget our traditions.)

Yash: Maan yeh kya hai. shaadi ke dusre din hi office. Aur shayad aapko yeh bhi yaad dena hoga ki shayam ko geet ko lane tumhe jaana hoga Handa Haveli.

( maan wats this. You are going to office today tat to just the second day of your wedding. And I should remind you tat you should go to pick geet in the evening to Handa Haveli)

Maan: dad mujhe office mein bahut kaam hai aur aap gadi bhej dijiye geet ko lane ke liye. I will be late.

( dad I have important work in office so you can send the car to pick her I will be late)

Naina: maan yeh mat bhoolna ki ab yeh tumari girlfriend nahi balki patni hai aur Pagphere ki rasam ke anusaar pati hi apni patni ko lane jaatha hai. so no more arguments on this.

( maan don't forget tat now she is not your girlfriend but your wife and according to the traditions you have to go to pick her. so no more arguments on this)

Geet was looking at Maan who was hell angry on this. Arjun and geet took blessings from all and left for Handa Haveli. After some time they reached the Handa Haveli where there was no welcome for geet. Geet tried to talk to Rano but Rano just ignored her. Mohinder had already left for office and Arjun after leaving geet went for his work. Geet knew tat no one cared for her so she silently went to her room and closed the door. She sat at one corner of the room crying on her fate remembering how her life changed. It was just few days when she was treated like a princess with all love and affection from everyone but now she was all alone in her life. She was in pain due to the lat night and she felt asleep while crying. No one in the Handa family bothered to call her for lunch or see wat she was doing. Geet was sleeping for almost the whole day due to the pain and foremost she knew tat no one wanted her to be close to her.

It was almost around 8.30pm when she heard a knock on her door. She silently opened her door only to see one of the servants calling her downstairs. She freshened herself and came downstairs only to see Maan talking to Mohinder and Arjun. By the time she almost reached there they had moved for the dinner where Rano and Annie were setting the table. They did not even bother to call geet for the dinner. Geet knew tat she will never be called so she just went inside the kitchen and drank a glass of water and slowly went out in the garden for some fresh air. She had no place to go and her mind was all blank to think about anything. she was now fearing of Maan's anger as she knew tat he would do anything to hurt her but more than tat she had seen the pain in his eyes which was hurting her more. The handa family and Maan had their dinner without even bothering about geet and when it was time for Maan to go Mohinder asked one of the servant to call geet. the servant called geet inside and they were ready to leave.

Mohinder: Maan bete hum janthe hain ki aapke liye yeh sab kitna mushkil hain par sach maan lijiye hum sab aapke karz ke aage dab juke hai. agar aap nahi hote tho hum shayad kisi ko muh tak deekhane layak nahi rehte. Aapne tho ish besharam ladki ke saath shaadi karke humari izzat rakh di aur ish ehsaan ko hum saath janam tak nahi bhool payenge.

(Maan we all know tat how difficult is this for you. but believe me we are grateful to you and will never forget the favour you have done. If you were not there we would not even be able to show our face to the world. You have saved our honor and dignity by marrying these characterless girl and we will never forget it even in our seven births.)

Maan: nahi pap aap aise kyu keh rahe hain. Yeh tho mera farz tha na.

( No papa don't say this. It was my duty.)

Rano; Nahi Maan.. Aapne tho aapki puri zindagi barbaad kar di humare liye. Yaha tak aapne apne parivaar se iska sach chupaya aur ishne aapko sirf dhoka aur dard diya hai. hum tho soch bhi nahi sakthe ki aap kis dhor se ghuzar rahe hain. Jis ladki se pyar kiya ushi ne tume dhoka diya, yeh sab sehan karna bahut mushkil hai beta.

( no maan. You have spoilt your whole life for us. Even you did not tell your family the truth about this girl and wat she gave you only pain and betrayal. We even cant imagine wat you may be going through by seeing her face everyday. The girl whom you loved betrayed you at every step. And I know how difficult it is to face it.)

Arjun: Haan Maan. Papa aur Maa theek keh rahe hai. agar tum na hote tho yeh geet hume kahi ka nahi chodti. Iski wajah se shayad hume apna sab kuch kho dena padta. We are really grateful to you Maan and will always be.

( Yes Maan. Papa and Maa are saying the truth. if you had not married her than she had left us all devasted. Just because of her we would have lost everything in our life. We are really gratefull to you maan and will always be.)

Maan: Please aap sab yeh bandh kijiye. Maine yeh sirf apni behan Annie ke ghar ke liye kiya hai. Main kisi aur ke wajah se apni Annie ko dard aur dukh sehan nahi karte dekh saktha hoon. Aur iski pregnancy ko dekhar mujhe jo theek laga maine woh kiya. So I have been selfish for my sisters happiness.

( please stop all this. I have only done this for my little sister and her family. I can't let my sister to suffer because of someone else. And you know her pregnancy is bit complicated so I did not wanted to take any chance so it means tat m selfish for my sister's happiness.)

Annie: nahi bhai main janthi hoon ki aap kaisa mehsoos kar rahe hain. Aapko mere liye yeh sab nahi karna tha. Kyu ki aapne iske saath shaadi. She does not deserve a person like you bhai.

( no bhai I know how you feel. Why did you do this for me. Why did you marry her. she does not deserve a person like you bhai.)

Maan: jantha hoon Annie par main tumhe aur tumare parivaar ko geet ki wajah se barbaad hote nahi dekh saktha. so now forget all this and smile.

( I know annie but I could not let you and your family to suffer because of geet. so now forget all this and smile.)

Mohinder turned towards geet with anger and said.

Mohinder: dekha ishe kethe hai apnapan. Par tum kya samjhogi aisi parvarish ko. Tumne tho hume jee the jee maar diya. sharam aati hai mujhe yeh kehthe hue ki tum meri beti ho. Aur ek baat yaad rakhna geet ki bhool kar bhi ish ghar ki taraf dekhna bhi mat. Agar sapane mein bhi Maan ya ush ghar ko chodne ki baat sochi tho humara maara hua chehra dekhogi. wais ebhi tumhe koi farak nahi padta ki hum jiye ya mare par phir bhi keh raha hoon. Ab se tumara jeena maarna ushi ghar mein hai. jho woh log kahe wahi sach hain aur jhoot bhi. Aur yeh bhi bhool jana ki tumara koi parivaar bhi hai.

( see this is called love. but how will you understand all this. It's called family life. You have not left a stone to kill us. We are living a hell. I feel ashamed to say tat you are my daughter. Moreover, remember geet tat do not ever see towards this house. Do not even think in your dreams of leaving Maan or tat house otherwise you will have to see our dead bodies. From now, onwards you live or die but it tat house. Wat they say will be right or wrong does not matter. And forget this also tat you had a family of your own.)

Geet was all listening to their words but did not say anything. she was looking the whole house where she lived her life. Her childhood, her playing everything. This house where she lived for happiness is now no where for her. she felt tat she does not belong here anymore and had tears in her eyes.

Days passed by and her life was becoming from worse to worst. In time she felt like killing herself but she could not do tat. she used to take all the torture given by maan in the hope of him coming to know the truth. She tried her best to find the truth but wherever she went she had only got lost. There was no one to help her to come out of this mess. She tried to be normal in front of the khurannas but luck was not on her side. It was day whem Maan was accussing geet and dadima had heard it. Though she was unaware abouth their realationship she just came to know tat there was some fight between the couple and it was getting bit worse. Geet assured dadima tat it was a small misunderstanding but dadima knew tat it was something big. She always asked geet about it but geet gave her excuses and asked dadima not to tell anyone or ask about it to Maan.

Flashback ends...

Geet came out of her past which had bought tears in her eyes. She cried for her love who though was torturing her daily but knew tat he will break every minute the moment he will know the truth. She silently prayed to her babaji.

Geet (ST): babaji mujhe apne aap ki chinta nahi hai. chinta sirf ish baat ki hai ki Maan humare bache ko apna maneyenge ya nahi. Ish baat ki chinta hai ki ish bache ka kya bhavishya hai. babaji main janthi hoon ki meri zindagi mein ab kuch baki nahi hai agar maut bhi bhi aa jaye na tho bhi mein uff nahi karungi par mere bache aur maan ki raksha hamesha karna babaji. Main janthi hoon ki jisne bhi yeh sab kiya uski koi nakoi majboori tho hogi par ish baat se mujhe kuch lena nahi hai. main sirf ish baat se darr rahi hoon ki jab Maan sachayi jaan lega tho kya hoga. Main janthi hoon agar Maan ko sachayi ka pata chalega tho woh apne aap ko barbaad kar denge. Nahi seh payenge yeh sab. Yeh soch kar maar jayenge ki woh apni mishti par vishwas nahi kar sake. Nahi seh payenge ki unhone gusse ki aadh mein mujhe takleef di. Babaji aap ne kabhi meri koi baat nahi suni par yeh ek baat maan le ki chahe kuch bhi ho Maan ko kabhi sachayi ka pata na chale. Aap janth hain na ki maine aisa kuch nahi kiya aur mujhe yeh jaana bhi nahi ki yeh sab kisne aur kisliye kiya par please babaji mere Maan ko ish sachayi ka kabhi pata na chale ki woh galat the. Main nahi chahthi ki woh ushi dukh aur dard se guzare jise main guzar rahi hoon. Agar chahye tho meri jaan lijiye par Maan ko kabhi ish sachayi ka pata chalne nap aye. Please babaji yeh dua Kabul karna.

( babaji I don't care fo me. But I only fear tat will maan accept this baby as his. wat future holds for my baby. I know tat there is nothing left in my life and even if death comes I will accept it without a word but please keep my baby and maan always safe babaji. I knw tat whoever has done this he may a have a reason for it and I done want even to think about it. But I only fear tat when Maan will come to know the truth wat will happen. I know tat if Maan comes to know the truth he will destroy himself. He wont be able to take it. He will die thinking tat he did not believe his misthi. He wont be able to bear tat in anger he tortured me. Babaji you have never listened to me but please hear tat wat ever may come please don't let Maan to know the truth. you know na tat I have not done anything and I don't want to know who has done this and why. But please babaji keep my Maan away from the truth, he should not know about it. Tat he should know tat he was wrong in doubting me and punishing me. I don't want him to go through the same pain which am going. If you want take my life but please babaji don't let maan know the truth. please babaji accept this prayer of mine.)

Precap: Maan's hand on Abortion papers of geet.

So here is the past of Maan and Geet. hope you all liked it. But the main truth about the past is still left. I purposely kept it as I have decided something which I hope you will all like. Oh I know all are eagerly waiting for the truth to come out so in my next two or three updates the real culprit will be out.

I know many are angry on me for torturing geet so much but as my title itself says its love and hate I had to go through such an extent.

And as my prologue says

Hatred is a poison that fills your body. It becomes impossible to think of anything else but the object of your hatred.

"Hate is a disguised form of love.
You can only hate someone that you have the capacity to love because if you are really indifferent,
you cannot even get up enough energy to hate him"

Its necessary for me to make my updates so intense in hatred due to which Maan makes geet's life hell but even though geet loves him. she knows tat wat maan is going through and even though she knows tat he is wrong she does not blame him. so as far as I have said earlier also my story is not tat light hearted and will contain updates of intense hatred and torture. This is a story where Maan equally loves geet but hates her for betraying him. the htred has spread into his body like cancer and he is hell bent on destroying geet. but don't worry I wont let Maan escape so easily as now its his turn to suffer the most and I promise tat he will regret in second of his life along with more passion in his love for geet which was deep buried inside his heart due to his hatred. And as far as the culprits are concerned I will also punish them accordingly.

And one more thing please do not hate maan as he is not in proper state of mind. I know wat he did is wrong and he will be punished for it but will also get a chance to rectify his mistakes but will be suffering a lot..

Plzzz do like and comments

Love you all

THANKS

Edited by sdlife19 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
shooo emotinl yaar
u r r8 GUSSA AKAL KO KHA JATA HAI
bt thx god maan ne blood stn toh dekh liye
hope ki wo kuj time baad shi bt realz toh krega...
bt
fellng vry vry sad 4 geet no one even her own family dsnt' trust her..😡
bt ye geet she is only thnkng abt her maan ki uss ko kuj pta na chle omg...
me😭😭
cont soonnn





nd yes yes me frst 4 d frst time bt accdntly...😆


Edited by tiakashyap - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i hate maan lyk hell















nd geet parents tooo hate dem













dey dont care abt geet












feeling lyk slap the whole family nd maan nd dat annie bas***d


she is preg before marriage i think not sure









nd she is talking abt self respect
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part...but feeling bad for geet..pls continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Is he mad that she doesn t want them to now the truth they should feel the pain she is feeling right now and even worse and why the hell doesn't she leave will she bring her child up in a place where she gets tortured and raped every day if not for herself atleast let her think for her child please don't make geet's character one off those weak women who go trough all this hell for there childeren but the fact is all they do is poison them with hatred for there father and scardem for realationships. Geet should secratly leave the place for always
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it, awesome update. Hope maan soon comes to know the truth in the next part. plsss keep geet and the baby safe. update sooon dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 9
poor Geet...
feel really sorry for her...
not just Maan i want all her family members to repent...
the people who cant believe their daughter and their parwarish they have to repent...
she was such a lovely pure girl and they have literally killed her to no extent in every sense...
and the precap is scary...
he will blame her again so badly...
oh let him burn in hell for his sins and her parents and bro and SIL should regret it high time...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum update dear:)
oh god it was too much emotional dear😭
poor geet😭

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