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Posted: 13 years ago
di jo marzi karo
me gnna read it nyways
bt please up sonn
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

both make maan saw geet condition and remembering past it cordinate well


yap doin tha same now
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: icy_magma

Past pehle dikhao...please...
Past ko le kar bahut tension ho raha hai...
Please pehle past ko dikhao and pura past reveal kar do...
Please...
Pretty please...


doing both side by side
just one or two more ups
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Priya291188

Show it the way you have done so far like a proper co ordination between past & geet's condition with every update of geeet's health maan gets flashes of his past with her & this way he feels more sorry
but don't kill geet either send her to coma or show a ML but don't kill her


hehehe just 2-3 ups more
doin it the same way
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ritusoni2233

divz jana gaaliya to pdegi hi na...


tune msk ko rulaya n geet ko abi tk thik ni kiya ...

ye baten km h kya

nyways awesome update

waiting 4 next


ritu baby
tu meri frnd hai na
i doubt
koi to meri side le lo
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: swetha10

hey dear waiting to knw abt the past...


doing it dear just in a few while
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: gbhat

nice Ss, read all the 6 parts at a stretch good. update soon


thnxuuu m glad u lykd it
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Posted: 13 years ago

A Life For You
Part 7

I did this'meri wajha se sab kuch hua'I am at fault'I am your culprit'I did it

Maine galati nahi harr kadam pe gunah kie hai humesha uss pari ko dard dia hai

Usne to kabhi ek cut ka pain nahi saha tha and maine'huh'maine use dill ka dard d dia

Sab meri galati sab'I am at fault not her

You know na angel'sab meri galati thi'fir kyu

Why god is so unfair with her'I never believed in him but she always did

Then why she is suffering all this

Usko kyu'his sobs turned into wild hiccups

He remembers his each mistake he committed'

Each time he was harsh on her'love making demit its called virtual rape

Each time he slapped her saying it's her mistake'huh'you always loved to put your deeds on others when they turn out of your control

Each time he betrayed her for the sake of bloody pleasure'no other girl could have ever fulfilled your needs then her, you always had to come back to her at the end

Everytime she slept empty stomach'she waited for you to come so that you can spent sometime talking with her

Everytime she made lame excuses to be drop family trips and functions'she wanted to spent some time alone with you'you jerk

Everytime you played with her emotions without caring about the damage you're causing slow by slow to your ownself

Each morning she showed laziness it was just for you'you idiot'so that she can snuggle into the warmth of yours for some more time

Every minute she spent in kitchen with heavy works and tiring jobs just to make something for you to'that you can relish

From morning breakfast to mid night coffee's she always fulfilled your wishes without voicing any dislike any word

Everytime she managed it to office for lunch, just to witness your shameless acts with your so called GFs'it was never for keeping an eye on you it was just to make sure you had

Each time she had felt restlessness because of a single tiny flinch of your forehead

Each time she fought with you just for you

Each time she hide you shameless deeds, your sins, your mistakes

It was every time, every moment, every second, bloody damn everything was just for you

You bloody idiot moron

You were wrong every moment, Every step, every second'it was always you

You Maan singh khurana'you the ruller of world'the bloody damn idiot person who couldn't even rule his own life

His soul screamed at his conscious

Leaving an unlashed mark on his stabbed heart

Baby you know you dada is the worst animal ever you can ever think of

He said with closed teary eyes leaning his head on the corner of bed in support

As if seeking punishment for his sins sitting on the feet of the little angel

Maine humesha galatian ki'har samay sirf ek bewakuff ki trhaa galation pe galatian karta raha

Kabhi kuch nahi socha uss pari ke bare main

Baby you know your mumma is a little fairy who came in this beasts life as a ray of light but

You know what this beast did

He shattered her

Destroyed her as if she was some mere trash

Where this beast should have worshiped her like goddess he made her his slave

His need

Yaa she was my need but you now baby now she became the necessity of my life

My breath

My soul

My heart

My existence

He opened his eyes and looked back at the sleeping angel

Manvika dada pe ek favor karoge please

Punish your dada, kill him

Because I know'you mom still can not do it

But please tell her to come back to me

Just once baby

Please tell her to come back to this beast

I need her to become a human

Because the cause her departure will do to this beast will be worst then ever

I won't be able to live

Or let anyone live


Just once baby tell her to come back

Ever if she don't forgive fine let it be

But tell her to come back


And another set oh tears flow down the stream

Remembering the time which made him realize her importance

The time he regretted the most

More than his birth on this world

He regret that moment

He remembered clearly the last moments he spent with her just a few hours back

Maan yeh sab kab takk chalega...it's enough now...

I can't take it anymore...not anymore...

meri to tumne kabhi parwaah ki hi nahi at least for god sake now

For are baby...change for once Maan...please...

What will be your effect on our baby...she was going mad demanding an answer this time

What's the matter now...why you creating such a mess...

What you need...go get my credit card and get it'he replied coldly without any emotions pouring his drink

Huh for you it's always about money and commodities na

She replied with a slight smile of utter disbelieve

What'he asked again looking down the counter

Spit it out soon'I am seriously not in a mood

Pari'

She gasped as she utters the words and he closed his eyes knowing what's coming next


Precap: why Geet is here !! 💔


Prev:Part 6 Next: tPart 8


so here it goes again

no words this time no one trust me 😭😭

I know

so just I wanna tell that next will be past and the next to next will be wholly soully Geet

as I am really missing her now

thnxx fr all the support means a lott

really

AND WHO ALL WANT PMz PLEASE SEND ME BUDDY REQUEST

I'LL NOT BE ABLE TO PM OTHERWISE


❤️Luv Divzi


Edited by dazzlingdivz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
emotional maan realising his sins please do next soon waiting for the reason of geet condition



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Posted: 13 years ago
My god u made me cry .ek to update itna acha tha saans rok k pura pada but divz u r so naughty jaha saari past clear hone wala tha wahi full stop laga diya very bad u r such a devil ...he he hje chal really yaar it s simply awesome , har update interesting se very very. Interesting hota ja raha he .for maaneet sake next update jaldi de aur lon long update dena plz

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