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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 3A n 3B
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scary precap...
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awesome story , all parts r very very gud continue this ff this will get gud responce after words
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PART-5

Maan proposed Sam not seeing the happy face of Geet am mean in absence of Geet.Maan was feeling restless as if he had betrayed someone but didn't know who he betrayed.Meanwhile Adi stood feeling helpless seeing the proposal & was praying to babaji so that this proposal will be broken down soon.When the dance of Maan & Sam's moment came then someone's voice said from the projector,"Raj our plan is successing..."Every man who were present in the farewell party witnessed the CD which was played by Adi.Adi didn't know that this type of content is there in the CD & remembered that this was the CD which Geet gave him to play in the farewell party convincing that it is only music CD.Sam saw the CD with mouth hanging open with shock.Maan saw the CD with shock & now understood why yesterday Geet had come to KM.When Adi saw the CD then he recognised the man who was with Sam & said,"Yeh aadmi tumhare saath kya kar raha hai,isine Pinky ko badnaam karne ki koshish ki."On that time Maan's eyes widened with shock & he remembered his harsh words to Geet accusing that she tried to defame her best friend in front of society.Maan said slowly,"Adi tum is aadmi ko jaanthe ho."Adi said angrily,"Jaantha hoon,agar yeh aadmi miljaye to mein iska khoon kardoonga,isine meri Pinky ko choone ki koshish ki.Are yeh aadmi toh Geet ko balatkar karne keliye yahan aaya tha leking badkismathi se meri pnky phas gayi.Us waqt hi Geet ne Pniky ko bachaya tha is se lad kar.Pniky mujhe sab kuch bata diya tha us waqt.Aur yeh aadmi Sam ke kehne par yahan aaya tha."Maan asked frozen Sam,"Sam bolo kya yeh sach hai,yeh sach hai,batavo."Sam stood silently not able to handle the situation lowering her head with shame.Maan saw her & shouted at her,"Speak up."Adi stood seeing her fuming & said,"Yeh kya batayegi,yeh to apne hi jaal mein phaas chuki hai ab."Maan stood there with guilt & remembered his harsh words to Geet & said,"Hey babaji,yeh meine kya kardiya.Geet to mujhe aaga karne aayi thi lekin us par kabhi meine vishwas hi nahin kiya,us par jhoota inzam laga diya."Sam gained up courage last time to control the situation & said,"Maan,don't believe Geet,she's the tricky cheater & b****.On that time she got a tight slap from Maan & said furiously,"Don't you dare talk about my friend like that,she's my friend,my best friend."And he pulled the diamond ring from Sam's finger & ran outside in search of Geet.Adi gave a disgusted look to Sam & followed Maan immediately.Sam stood there angry on Geet that she has flopped her plan completely.

Maan ran to hostel but the room was empty & came to know that Geet & Pinky both have left to Hoshiarpur from roommates.Then Maan & Adi ran to bus stand & asked about the Hoshiarpur bus.But on that time in inquiry the man got the news that the Hoshiarpur bus has fallen into ditch because of break failing & none were alive.Maan & Adi stood there frozen in shock hearing the news on that time their friends came there & try to make them to present world.Then Maan,Adi & his friends drove to accident spot & came to know that Geet & Pinky both died.They couldn't see the body as the bus caught fire falling to the deep into the ditch.Maan's heart stopped to beat & saw the disaster scene completely blank.Adi couldn't bear this departure of Pinky,his beloved & his little sister Geet.Maan & Adi's parents couldn't bear the state of Maan & Adi & they sent them to London to further study.Maan & Adi didn't came to India till the need came & now they're coming back after 5yrs of the Geet's & Pinky's death.




AFTER 5 YEARS---------------


The two girls climbed down from the train holding the luggage in the Delhi junction.The hazel eyed girl took the luggage while light brown eyed girl called taxi.They sat in the taxi & told to the driver to go to Janakpuri keeping their luggage in back of the car.The driver drove the taxi to the place & the light brown eyed girl paid the taxi driver & took their luggage & entered the house.The hazel eyed girl was Geet & the light brown eyed girl was Pinky.The two girls entered & ringed the bell.A man came & opened the door with aarti thali.The two girls smiled to the man & was about to enter but was stopped by man & he did the aarti.Geet frowned & said,"Yeh kya uncle aap bhi aarti kar rahen hein.Meren ghar mein bhi aise kar rahen hein jab bhi mein jaathi hoon tab.It was only the small accident,this is ridiculus."Manchanda said sternly doing aarti to them,"You may think ridiculus but how much we've suffered we only know.Jab tum dono ko behosh wahan dekha tab meri jaan jake waapas aayi."Geet felt bad hearing her uncle's words & said guiltily,"Am sorry uncle if I've spoken u rudely."Manchanda said,"Oh dear you're so sweet that I never be angry with you."Geet smiled sweetly."Are mein to poochna hi bhool gaya that ki tumhara interview ka kya huva tha us din."Geet said happily,"Uncle,i've been appointed as junior architect of Khurana constructions.Par kaash mein Maan ki company ke baare mein pata karthi to mein ek baar usse mil lethi."Pinky asked frowning,"Kyun phir se ek baar kehlwane ke liye ki tumhari shakal mat dikhana."Geet said innocently,"Lekin usne aisa nahi kaha tha us din..."Pinky said angrily,"Lekin matlab tho aisa hi tha..."Before Geet retort back Pinky uncle interrupted them & said sternly,"Enough girls get ready for your first day of work."Both the girls got ready gulping down the delicious breakfast which was prepared by Geet & went to catch the bus to KC.

Precap-Adi-"Maan,you're going to see the biggest miracle in this world."
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved the concept and updates...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART-6

KHURANA MANSION AT 6AM

A man of 24yrs aged doing his working out in gym & practising Tai-chi with the help of the stick.That man had chocolate brown eyes,M-shaped pink rosy lips,long nose & stuble.This was Maan Singh Khurana.He was the most handsome man having 6 packs abs & the perfect body shape.He's perfect in everything but his eyes had a strange pain & guilt & today his eyes had the pain even more.Because today only he had heard the death news of Geet & Pinky.Maan closed his eyes but Geet came to his vision smiling then a smile crept on his lips.He remembered Geet's pranks & his smile had widened remembering Geet's pranks & pouting face.This wasn't unnoticed by dadima who was the head of Khurana family when she walked to the gym to talk to him about his marraige.Dadima said smiling,"Kya baat hai aaj hamare pote ke chehre par itni achchi muskurahat dekh rahe hain.Kya baat Maan aap kise yaad karke itna has rahe hain."Maan saw his dadima walking inside the gym & said composing his grim expression,"Koi nahi dadima,aap yahan kyun aayi hain."Dadima said politely,"Hum aapse aapki shaadi ke baare mein baat karna chahte hain..."before she continue Maan said,"Please dadima,mujhe shaadi nahin karna.Aap is baare mein baat karna mujhse band kardijiye."And he took his towel & exited the gym before dadima insist him to listen to her.Dadima twisted her lips & said,"Hum ek ladki ke baare mein baat karna chahte hein jinhone hamari jaan bachayi thi doobne se jab hum Amritsar gaye huye the aapke liye.Woh ladki bahut khoobsurat hai,bilkul pari ki tarah.Thik he Maan bete,agar aap hamare pote hai to hum aapki dadi hein.Kaise bhi karke hum aapse haan bulvahi lenge Maan bete."Here Maan reached his room & sat on the bed & closed his eyes then once again geet came to his vision then he opened the drawyer of his bedside table.There was a photo frame which was kept upside down.He took the frame & saw the photo.There Geet stood beside him with Pinky & Adi smiling at him peacefully.He remembered his row with Geet & a tear rolled down from his eyes.Maan said wiping it immediately,"Kyun mujhse door chaligayi Geet ek baar bhi mujhe mauka nahi diya apne galathi sudharne ka.Aaj bhi mein pashchatap ki agni mein jal raha hoon.Tum par jhoota inzam lagane ki saza yeh hai ki mein apne doston se door hogaya.Kya tum wapas nahi aa sakthi mere liye.Mujhe tumhari hasi mahsoos karne do,tumhari shararate mahssos karne do,tumhari mazak mahsoos karne do."Then he took the photo & kept it in the drawyer back & said in disappointment,"Tum us jagah chaligayi ho jahan se wapas aana bahut mushkil hai."Then he closed his eyes & then once again Geet came to his vision & then a small smile crept on his lips but opened it & went to washroom to freshen up.He got ready wearing the white colour shirt & coat & tied the tie to his neck on that time dadima called,"Maan,breakfast is ready,jaldi neeche aajavo."Maan took his laptop & some files & came down & gave that to driver to keep it in his car & went to dining table to have breakfast.He had his breakfast silently & went to the office.

Maan sat there in the usual traffic but saw outside through the window then he saw Geet & Pinky there who were waiting for the bus.The bus came & no one was there when Maan blinked once again.Maan was disappointed & he made grim face once again thinking its only a dream.Meanwhile Pinky & Geet entered the KC at correct time & sat there waiting for the boss.But someone who was familiar entered the office before the boss,it was Adi.Adi saw Geet & Pinky there & was shocked & stood there with frozen state,his heart stopped beating as if he has seen a bhoot.On that time Sasha who was wearing short skirt entered the office & walked ahead Adi not glancing him for a second & saw Geet & Pinky there.Sasha came near them & asked,"Kaun hai aap log?"Geet & Pinky took their appointment letter & showed it to Sasha.Sasha saw that & said,"MK,abhi bhi aate honge,aap dono unse milke report kijiyega."Both nodded politely & Sasha gave their appointment letters back & called Adi.Adi stood there stunned seeing Pinky & Geet but his Pinky alive & Geet my little sister she's also alive.Both Geet & Pinky turned towards Adi & saw them with amazement.Geet saw Adi & said,"Adi veerji."And saw towards Pinky who stood there with shock seeing Adi.Adi walked towards Pinky & touched her & felt her soft feathery skin & familiar scent for he was crazy 5yrs ago.Adi hugged Pinky immediately feeling her skin & his heart started to throb in top speed feeling her there.Adi asked feeling her,"Where were you been,pata hai kitna dhoonda maine tum dono ko aur aaj purusat mili aapko mujhse milne keliye.Mera dil kabhi nahin mana tha ki tum dono mar chuke ho lekin is duniya se mein chaltha raha.I won't talk to you both.Tum dono meri jaan hi nikal di aisa karke."Geet said politely seeing his angry face,"Lekin Adi veerji aap yahan kya kar rahe hain."Adi was about to say that this is Maan's office but resisted fearing that Geet would exit immediately hearing his name & said simply,"Mein yahan kaam kartha hoon aur mein yahan ke accounts dept handle kartha hoon."Geet said smiling,"Achcha tab to Pinky ke liye bahoot achcha hoga kyunki woh aapke under hi kaan karne wali hai."Sasha didn't saw their get together & went from there to do her work.Adi smiled at Geet & took the appointment letter from Pinky & said,"Mujhe nahi pata that ki meri beloved yahan kaam karnewali hai lekin Geet tumhe meri boss se milna hoga"seeing her appointment letter,"You'll have to report him only."Geet said nervously,"Adi veerji aapka boss kaisa hai?"Adi smiled but said frowning,"Khaddos hai,bahut hi hot tempered guy hai."Geet gulped down her saliva nervously & asked,"Itna gussewala insan hai?"Adi nodded on that siren sounded & all the staff who stood freely started running this way & that way nervously.Sasha ran near the door of his office & kept some file there & ran & stood in front to say him good morning.Adi gulped down saliva & ran immediately to his office dragging Pinky & Geet from there.Geet saw only back of the boss who went to his cabin nodding to Sasha only from Adi's cabin which was in his left side.Maan went inside & dialled to Adi & said,"What is it Adi,tum kis miracle ke baare mein baat kar rahe the.I was in the lift that 's why I didn't listen u clearly."Adi said nervously,"Wahi mein dikhatha hoon sir,kya mein aapke cabin mein aajavoon?"Maan said bossily,"Thik hai aajao."Adi took Pinky & Geet to Maan's cabin immediately.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely update
so finally the face off b/w maaneet
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice1...wowww...
hey dear r u frm mysore??????? im frm mys...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow now maan will see geet
Dadi is planning maan to marry geet
Superb update plz count my like I m on ph
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it ,now maan & geet aamne saamne 😊
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nyc story...
continue soon...
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