MG FF ~Dil Ka Hai Jo Haal~ prt 1 updt - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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NOTE: Dis part is b4 d prolouge.

PART 1


London
Its early mrning of Holi. A big mansion is fully decorated even its in London. As it blngs to royal family of D Raichands it is decorate with high class interiors.
A man was enterng a big room following a 7 yr girl carrying a thaal of colour. Dey both were walkng without making noise. Just den a 7yr boy sees dem
Boy: Dad Maahi wt r u both doing? 😕
Maahi: Oh! Prem u scared us.
Dad: Ya Prem
Prem: Dad, Maahi dont think to keep dis colour on mom. 😕
Maahi: oh mom k chamche v r not thinking to do dat...
P: Then its ok or else she wld get angry
M: 1st let me complete P . V r nt thinking v r doin it 😛 Right Dad 😉
Dad: S my princess. n P dont make noise. Lets go M.
P: Bt Dad. P sighed n thought 'dey both r goin to die'

Maahi entered d room n sw her mom was in deep sleep. She signaled her dad to come in. He cme in n slowly started to keep d colrs n went out of d room after finishing 😃

After sometime d womn got up n wnt to fresh up. As soon as she sw her face in mirror she shouted
Womn: MAAHIII, RAHULLL

In living room where Prem Maahi n Rahul(dad) where watching tv herd d shout n were afraid.
P: I tld u both nt to do so bt nobdy listen 2 me.
M: shut up P. Dad wht v vll do nw. Mom is super duper angry.
R: i dont knw. Oly 1 prsn can save us kmw
Both R n M c 2wds P wth hope. P sense something fishy
P: NO NEVER. Ill alwys b on moms side
Both M n R muttered 'Mom ka chamcha'
Den M sw her mom desending d stairs angrily. She hid bhind her father n pushed him in front of mom. R was afraid 2 c his wife
R:(innosently) GM Sweetheart. Wt happen y u r angry Geet?
Geet: u r asking me y im angry. Dont u act Rahul 😡 n where is M? Im nt gonna leave u both 2day.
Just den M cms infront of her
M: it was just a prank
R: ya Geet. Y r u making it big
Hearing dis G starts crying
R sighed n muttered 'Moodswings' went near her n made her sit
[ya Geet is 4 month pregnant]
R: baby dont cry im srry
M: s mom im sorry 2
Geet was not looking at dem she looked at P n winked at him n gestured him 2 bring colr. P wink bk n brought clr in his hands n gave it 2 G. Where as both R n M were on deir knees.
G: ok i vll forgive u bth bt...
M n R: bt wt
G looked at P n winked n both son n mom thrw clrs at M n R and ran. Both of dem took some time 2 undstand n even dey ran behind den n all 4 started plying wd clrs happily.

Dis is Geet's happy family

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In delhi
A man was seeing Geet's pic wd tears in his eyes
M: Sorry Geet im d reason 4r ur death bt dont kw y i still feel u r alive. 2day on Holi b4 9yrs i sw u 4r d 1st time. I really mis u. 😭 Whole world think dat Maan Singh Khurrana have everything in his life bt i dont want any thing i only wnt u Geet only u 😭


phew finish 1st part hope u all like it n plz comment.n plz press d like btton. Thnks 4r ur b4 comments.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
Great update...
Geet married and has two kids with one on the way...nice but too bad maan is not her husband.. 😭
Geet seems happy...
And on the other side maan is upset because he thinks geet is dead...
So what is their past..out must be huge...
Continue soon...
And plz fo update your other work-jo pyar ho gaya 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
part 1
wow nice part...
Geet is married to Rahul and has 2 kids and 3rd one on the way...
Maan saw Geet 9 years back...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update
so geet has cute little daughter
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Maan is remembering Geet...he thinks Geet is dead...

but in London Geet is married to Rahul and have two children...third is on the way...

yaar one request...please don't use R G P like alphabets instead of full name and sms language...this makes me too much confused and bored...this is just request...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
Nice concept,
loved it,
plz pm m when u will update next.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
great start dear
looking forward to unfold the story
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
pm me pls...nice story😊



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Omg geet married.
2 and half kids.
Maan seems devdas type. Great going.
Cont son.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow nyc! Ad me in ur pm list, update sn. Awesum

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