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Posted: 13 years ago


thank u for liking the update DI
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Hey MAriam, you are online

When you are going to update this




will be updating shortly dear
just have to collect some pic for the update and then will update it
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: preethia

loved the update

so we get to know the past of geet but when will others know abt her past especially maan
waiting for the next




thanks for liking the update dear
Nobody know the past of Geet except her and Brij and later on Dadi gets to know
others don't get to know when Geet confess her loves to maan after marriage and that too By Dadi

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Posted: 13 years ago

Thank you sooo much guys for liking the previous update and commenting.

Enjoy!!!

-Unforgettable Memories Part 25-

"Geet Di" a girl shouted and came running to Geet
Geet- Soni slow down, nahi tu u will fall
Soni- Geet Di, where have u been, I have been looking for u everywhere and that Sadu principle made me take a round trip of this huge college just to get you.
Soni was a freshman in this college, and Geet used to help her out with studies when she comes to college.
Geet- Soni how many times have i told u not to call him sadu" Geet pauses and then says "Call him khadus" and they both starts laughing "btw why were u looking for me" Get asked controlling her laugh
Soni- that Khadus + Sadu= Maha pakao was looking for u, he said to tell u to meet him in the main office." with that saying she left giving Geet a hug

Knock...Knock
Geet- did u call me
Mr. Sha- Yes first congrats Geet for getting ur design approved by you first client as an internship student
Geet- thank u sir
Mr. Sha- ok coming to the main point, we will be holding the V-day party this year after a week, I have tried contacting the senior who are close by us and could join us in the party and u and Vishal being the only senior doing the internship in HP I thought you both might helps us with party planning. I have already talked to Vishal and he has agreed to help u as u only get along with him so I also want u to help the teacher with the party planning.
Geet- ok sir I will help u
Mr. Sha- thanks, ok then there is a meeting going on in the conference room regarding the party, why don't u go there and see what the teacher are planning and let them also know what u want to do for it.
Geet- ok sir" saying this she leaves from their and goes to attend the meeting_____
That day Geet went home a little late and when she stepped in Haveli she found everyone sitting together, She puts her bag on the table and goes and sits next to Brij and hugs him sideways resting her head on his shoulder.
Brij- Kya huwa gudiya, why you look so stressed out
Geet- kuch nahi Veer ji bas aise hi
Brij- itna late kyun
Geet- I was attending Meeting with teachers for the V-day party and Mr. Sha asked me to help them
Brij- hmm, when is it
Geet- right after the V-day week
Brij- ok u go and get freshen up and take rest, Mama will get something light for u to eat
Geet- hmm" with that saying she took her bag and left from there. the others just sat there watching her go, it had been so many days now and they haven't seen a single smile touching her lip
Brij- Mama did gudiya talk to Meera at all
Rano- nahi, since she left she hasn't talked to her, Meera ne tu kitni bar try ki use baat karne ki par wo....
Brij- it's ok Mama guess she just needs some more time, aacha aap uske liye kuch khane ke liye le jao
Rano- hmm__________

"Geet are you coming in the for the V-day party" Vishal asked as he made the list of Food to be coming in for the party night.
Geet- I don't know V, I haven't thought about it aur waise bhi abhi tak main ne aur Meeraaa..." Geet eyes welled up with tears as the thought of Meera came. After so many days Meera name came on her lips, thought there was not a single min when she didn't missed or didn't think of her. "Geet you ok" Vishal said as he placed his hand on her shoulder, breaking Geet trance, Geet shrugged his hand of her and stepped away from him as he was standing very close to her and says "haan, I am fine, shall we do some work, nahi tu pata chal ke baton main time nikal gaya and our work in still not finished
Vishal- hmmm" and they both again gets busy with the work, well actually only Geet was busy in doing the work while Vishal was just standing there looking at her, the way she moved her curls behind her ear, they way she was making her faces when she couldn't get something right or couldn't find something, She walked from one place to another lost in her works she didn't even noticed Vishal was staring at her, well it should be the way he was checking her out, as he gaze moved all over her body. He comes out of his checking out secession when he saw her packing her bag, he looks at the clock and says "what the..." he quickly puts whatever he had in his hand and comes to Geet and says "Geet agar main tumse kuch mango tu kya tum mujhe dogi"
"Kya" Geet asked as she ripped a page from the note pad and kept it in her bag
Vishal- first promise karo you will give me what I ask you
Geet- V, till u don't tell me what is it that you want from me, I won't promise you, kya pata kuch aisa mang lo jo main de na pao tu
Vishal fixes his glasses and says "Tu theek hai, tum kal right after you finish with ur office hrs, come straight to college you will know what I want"
Geet- theek hai
Vishal- thanks I will see u tomorrow then or haan H-V-Day

Geet- V, Valentine-day is tomorrow not today

Vishal- I know that Geet but I wanted to be the first one to wish u
Geet- hmm" with that saying she left from there, that day she went home happy as tomorrow was V-day, she also went for shopping with raji, after dinner she went in her room changed into her night dress and then lit out some candles and placed them on the table and went to toward the window, and watched the moon. She then opens the window and a cool breeze blow on her face blowing her hair in the air, she looked heavenly under the Moon, her face glowing under the moon and a small smile was touching her lips all the time. She stood there for sometimes then she went back in her room and played on her favorite song, least did she knew someone else was listening to the same song just thinking about her.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FyS-gKT1-G0[/YOUTUBE]

(PLZ LISTEN TO THIS SONG)

Vishal: Ae Hei O Hoo Hoo Hoo Hoo

He twirled around his room holding Geet pic

Geet: Um Hum La La La La La
Geet wnet and stood near the window watching the full Moon smiling

Vishal: Chand Ne Kuch Kaha
Raat Ne Kuch Suna...
Chand Ne Kuch Kaha
Raat Ne Kuch Suna
Tu Bhi Sun BeKhabar
Pyar Kar
O Hoo Hoo Pyar Kar

He went and stood in his porch and looked at the Moon and started singing

Geet: Aye Hai Chandni
Mujhse Kehne Yehi
Aye Hai Chandni
Mujhse Kehne Yehi
Meri Gali Mere Ghar
Pyar Kar
O Hoo Hoo Pyar Kar
Geet opend the door of her poch letting the coll breze come and she wnet outside and started singing

Vishal: (repeat)
Geet: La La La La La La La

they sang the melody together lost in the beautiful night.

Vishal: Kya Kahoon Kya Pata
Baat Kya Ho Gaye
Dil Lagi Yeh Mere
Saath Kya Ho Gaye
Ek Ishara Hai Ye
Dil Pukara Hai Ye
Is Se Chura Na Nazar
Pyar Kar, O Hoo Hoo Pyar Kar
Then Vishal comes in his room and goes toward Geet pic and looks at her lovingly and creases her face and sings

Geet: Chand Ne Kuch Kaha
Raat Ne Kuch Suna
Tu Bhi Sun Bekhabar
Pyar Kar
O Hoo Hoo Pyar Kar
Vishal: Ae Hei Aa Haa Ha Aa Haa

Geet: O O O O O O
Um Um Um Um Um Um
La La La La La La La La La La La La

Hai Koun Kya Khabar
Koi To Hai Magar
Sapnoo Mein Hai Kahin
Aata Nahin Nazar
Main Yahan Woh Wahan
Aa Rahi Phir Yahan
Main Yahan Woh Wahan
Aa Rahi Phir Yahan
Aawaaz Kiski Magar

As she sang those lines, all she remembered was hers and Maan moments

Vishal: Pyar Kar
Geet: O Hoo Hoo Pyar Kar
Vishal: Chand Ne Kuch Kaha
Raat Ne Kuch Suna
Tu Bhi Sun BeKhabar
Pyar Kar
O Hoo Hoo Pyar Kar

Geet: La La La La La La La ...
Jispe Hum Mar Mitei
Usko Pata Bhi Nahin...
O O O Jispe Hum Mar Mitei
Usko Pata Bhi Nahin
Kya Gilaa Hum Karein
Woh Bewaffa Bhi Nahin
Humne Jo Sun Liya
Usne Kaha Bhi Nahin
Ae Dil Zara Soch Kar
Pyar Kar
O Hoo Hoo Pyar Kar

Geet stood looking at the Moon and for a friction of sec she sees Maan face and then she lightly wakes her head thinking like this.

She went in held out a card that said "My Love"

Vishal: Ae Hei Aa Haa Aa Ha Aa Haa...
Chand Ne Kuch Kaha
Raat Ne Kuch Suna
Tu Bhi Sun BeKhabar
Pyar Kar
O Hoo Hoo Pyar Kar

Geet: Aye Hai Chandni
Mujhse Kehne Yehi
Aye Hai Chandni
Mujhse Kehne Yehi
Meri Gali Mere Ghar
Pyar Kar
O Hoo Hoo Pyar Kar
Vishal: Hei Hei

Geet: La La La La La

Vishal: O Hoo

Geet: Um Hum Hum Hum Hum...

As the song ended Geet goes and lays on the bed and soon falls asleep, and that was the only night she peace fully slept lost in her dream world after Meera left____


Continue Below...

Edited by Mariam94 - 13 years ago
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The next morning Geet got up excitedly and said to herself "Happy Valentine day Geet" with that saying she removed her spread and went into washroom to get freshen up, she comes out of the washroom wearing a red anarkali churidar, she wiped her hair and puts some lotion on and then went down shouting "Happy V-day" to everyone, she went in the kitchen hugged Rano from back and wished her and kissed her cheek, she went to Raji and Chinto and wished them too, they were happy seeing her happy after so many days that it brought tears in their eyes. She was going to Brij room when she saw him coming down; she went to him and hugged him saying "happy V-day Veer ji". The only person was left was Meera, and then tears rolled down her cheek just thinking about her but then Geet compose herself saying "Geet tujhe tu khush hona chiye ke Meera ke sapne pure ho rahe hai, usne jo chaha wo use mil gaya aur tu bhi tu Meera ki khushi hi chathi hai, hai na phir teri aankhon main ye aansoon kis liye, Geet mana Meera yeha nahi hai abhi par tu bhi ye ache se janti hai ke agar tu udas rahe gi tu Meera bhi hogi, and you know you don't want that, then from now on no more rona dhona, ok" Geet smiles and whispers "Happy V-day Meera, I miss u but I want only ur happiness Meera only ur happiness come back soon_______

After she had her breakfast and bid bye to everyone she left for her office, on her way she picked some chocolate for everyone in the office to wish them...after wishing everyone gets busy with their work, Geet had to do a little extra work as she had this files to read and submit to her so called grandpa boss, as she was going to Mr. Arujha cabin, she picks a white rose and slips in the file and says "aab deakh ti hoon aap mujhe kaise wish nahi karte mere Daddu (GrandPa)" and with an innocent smile she went in and hand him the file and waited for him to open but he just kept it aside, Geet waited for few min and when Mr. Arujha saw her still their he said "Geet do u need anything"

Geet- Daddu, mera matlad hai Sirrr aap ne file open nahi ki

Mr.Arujha- matlab

Geet- nahi wo I mean aap ek bar check tu kar lo ke I haven't done any mistakes

Mr. Arujha- will check it later

Geet- nahi abhi karo" Mr.Arujha looked at her and said "badi mushkil hai tumhare saath, pata nahi Sukhdev kaise handel karta hai tumhe"

"Daddu aap meri insult kar rahe ho"Geet says showing her fake anger

MR- Arujha- mei itni majal kaha hai ke main Geet Handa ki insult karo" saying that he opens the files and see the rose their and a sticky note saying "Happy V-day Daddu", "hmm tu ye correction karni thi tumhe" Mr. Arujha asked and kept the flower next to him

Geet nods in yes and says "wo kya hai na sir mera jo boss hai na wo bada hi boring hai, V-day ke din bhi boring works de deta hai, tu aab bechari hum jaise staffs yani ke Geet Handa jaise staff ko tu kuch karna pade ga na kuch masti karne ke liye" she winked at him and left from their before he could say anything, while Mr. Arujah sat in the chair smiling seeing her happy after so many days and seeing the old Geet coming back to them.

Geet worked in the office till 2 in the afternoon and then left for college, She met with Soni and wished her and then she went looking for Vishal ash he told her he would meet her in college today, and soon one of the boy came to her and told her that Vishal is waiting for her in the auditorium_______

"V" Geet called out as she went in the auditorium but found it pitch dark, "V, kaha ho tum, are u here" as she walked in the door closed with a thud sound and Geet jumps back scared, for some reason she felt something wrong is going to happen, something that would change her life as she felt the same feeling that she felt few years back, just the thought of it made her sweat and shook her from inside, she wanted to run out of the auditorium but she started walking toward the stage as if her leg had gotten mind of their own and soon a spot light was on her.

she stepped down on the first stair and a light turned on she looked down at her feet feeling the softness under her feet and saw white rose petals were on the stairs and then music started playing along with a picture of her from her high school was shown on the projector.

Plz listen to this song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ROvgxr422RQ

(Thanks to Abi for suggesting me this song)

Tear rolled down her eyes as her fear took over her

but she still continue to take her step, same thing happened, instead of white rose there were Yellow rose and her picture changed into a yellow dress matching with the flower color.

As she continues to take her steps down the light turned on only difference was the rose color changed from yellow to pink.

(Ignore the Sindor and Mangalsutar)


Pink to orange

Orange to Lavender

and to other colors as her picture change along with the meaning of the roses were shown too_____

As she came to the end of steps she was scared to take her last steps, scared to lose her faith on people, scared that her trust will be broken once again, scared that here after her life will not be the same, scared to lose herself once again and this time there was no Meera to help her out, Geet looked at the last steps and the picture of her in front as tear rolled down her cheeks but before she could have turn and run out of their unknowingly she steps on the last steps and the picture changes of her in a red dress

and that's when she heard him saying "I LOVE U GEET" and red rose petals fell on her from the top and the light turned on revealing his face "Vishal Saxena" Geet whispered as Vishal stood in front of her

Geet shook her head in no not believing any of this while Vishal took his steps toward her but before he could come close to Geet she ran away from their at one point she almost fell down but she steady herself holding the chair, as the fear took over her and she looked back at him and saw him coming, she picked her bag that fell and ran out of there. Students moved out of her way as they saw her all sweaty, scared and running out of breath, some tried stopping her but she just ran and ran till she reached Handa Heveli and into her room. Rano was shocked seeing her like this, she also ran after her but found her room locked "Geet...Geet tu theek hai na, Geet" Rano said as she knocked on her door,

Geet who was sitting next to the door scared stood up and opened the door at once and hugged Rano tightly "Geet kya baat hai" Rano asked seeing her behaving differently but before Rano could get her answer Geet fainted in her arm "Geeet" Rano screamed as she tried holding her in her arm as they sat on the floor "Geet...Geet kya huwa, utn na beta, Geeet" Rano said as she patted on her cheek_______

Precap: I hate u"

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Edited by Mariam94 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mariam94




will be updating shortly dear
just have to collect some pic for the update and then will update it

You have reserved the places...it seems your are shorty updating..
Eagerly waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful and terrific update..
Loved the song..
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update

geet soo scared


past jaldi se khatam karo.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
yaar aur kitna parts lagega to unfold geet's past
jaldi se i want er past to unfoldso that present mein story age badhe
continue soon

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