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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --Dia--

I will try to give it today dear.. Infact I want to finish the FF today itself except for epilogue which may take little time.. 😊


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --Dia--

I will try to give it today dear.. Infact I want to finish the FF today itself except for epilogue which may take little time.. 😊


wow... it would be great if yo can finish it today... would wait... update whenever you can
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --Dia--

I will try to give it today dear.. Infact I want to finish the FF today itself except for epilogue which may take little time.. 😊



thanx di can we know at wat time u will give update plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
thnx 4 pm

congo 4 urr promotion


finally maan knws d truth

hope all goes well now


do continue

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --Dia--

I will try to give it today dear.. Infact I want to finish the FF today itself except for epilogue which may take little time.. 😊



Thanks Dia, I understand will wait 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by --Dia--

Concept 2 (Prologue)

She sat outside the court, holding their son close to her, waiting to see him once more before they separated their ways. He came and sat next to her. Their son was asleep in her lap, not knowing that he won't get to see his parents together again. He looked into her eyes. She saw there was pain, guilt and love. Then why he took such a decision? She knew he loved her, no loves her still as much as she loved him. He was the one who used to tell the importance of having both parents with the kid. Then what prompted him to make such a decision? She knew they were exact opposites. Their likes or dislikes never matched, their aspirations and dreams never matched, their lifestyle never matched. Theirs have been an arranged marriage and there was not a single day in the past five years of their marriage that they never argued over something. But beyond all these, there was something that kept their relation intact, their love. She couldn't come into terms with the fact that they got divorced, the five year long relation has come to an end. She wanted to scream, to beg him not to leave her, but something prevented her from doing so. If he is not happy with them, she should let him go. When he gave the divorce papers, the only thing she asked was she don't want their son to live a dual life, she wanted him to be with her always. She knew it will be difficult for him knowing how much he loved him but to her surprise he agreed on a condition of bringing him to meet him once in every two months. The past six months of staying together under a roof knowing about the impeding doom was the most difficult phase in her life. She wanted to ask him the reason. Like knowing her inner turmoil, he spoke breaking her thoughts, "I'm getting married next month."

Hi dearies, this will be little dramatic than the first one. For this I have the whole storyline in mind. If you liked the prologue, click the like button and suggest a title.


DIA I LIKE THIS CONCEPT BETTER THAN THE FIRST AS IT SEEMS MORE MATURE AND EMOTIONAL
IT WILL EXPLORE THE RELATION BETWEEN A HUSBAND AND WIFE INSTEAD OF FIRST LOVE

BUT DO WRITE THE OTHER STORY ALSO WHEN YOU HAVE THE TIME

WHAT ABOUT NAMING IT SECOND CHANCE OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT AS THEY WILL GET A SECOND CHANCE TO FALL IN LOVE
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Posted: 13 years ago
CONGRATS FOR THE PROMOTION
HOPE YOU SUCCEED IN LIFE

HAVE LOVED THE WHOLE STORY
SORRY AS I HAVE NOT COMMENTED MUCH AS I WAS ALWAYS LATE IN READING
BUT GEET'S LOVE FOR MAAN HAS BEEN SO UNSELFISH, STRONG AND UNWAVERING THAT I HAVE FALLEN FOR HER
MAAN IS LUCKY TO HAVE HER IN HIS LIFE

MAAN I FEELING GUILTY NOW, BUT GEET NEEDS HIM AND HE HAS TO PUT AWAY HIS PERSONAL FEELINGS AND CONCENTRATE ON HER

AFTER YOU END, DO GIVE AN EPILOGUE
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Posted: 13 years ago


Congrats for the promotion...


amazing update...

Maan is still in pain but don't want Geet to suffer...

I don't have any problem with lesser updates but please don't leave ur FFs...whenever u get time please update...

sfter sometime when u will get accustomed to ur new responsibilities then I hope u can give regular updates...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Dia...you know what...?? please hug me yaar...this update made to cry ...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -ChikniChameli-

Dia...you know what...?? please hug me yaar...this update made to cry ...

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