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Posted: 13 years ago
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Muskaan VR update karne k baad plz gayab mat hojana, update DA & BDSH as well...
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part 3 loved it...but me tiny miny confused soul...
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very eager to know next ...😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Muski the story is really awsome..
Short bt with a big lesson and a big advice...
I am so happy that u r writing such kind of social problems and tried to made us aware that too in vry beautiful way...
But i am confussed a little bit that if maan didnt have do anything with her then from where this daughter came from..???
Plz clerify it i m so confussed..
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Originally posted by: Parrimuskan

Muski the story is really awsome..
Short bt with a big lesson and a big advice...
I am so happy that u r writing such kind of social problems and tried to made us aware that too in vry beautiful way...
But i am confussed a little bit that if maan didnt have do anything with her then from where this daughter came from..???
Plz clerify it i m so confussed..

sab ka yehien confusion..i think we need to wait 😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it Loved it Loved it..

me confused who Chavvi is?...

I thought they didn't do anything that night...
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pls make it an ff na ...i just loved it...
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Plz dear update soon i m getting late frm my uni... Plz plz make it fast and also clerify the cofussion..
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sab ka yehien confusion..i think we need to wait 😕



me 3 same confusion 😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
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-vengened relation-

Part 4


Maan told adhi to leave & lied to her no..I am not going any where
papa aap meren bday ke liyen bhi nahi avogen. I will be 8yrs u know
Maan didn't want to encourage any of it. He knew it was already going to far away with all this. He thought he could probably speak to someone elder in the house.. it had to be her mom & tell her abt all this confusion.

He was pleasantly excited abt his trip to Mumbai. He had never been so looking forward to anything in his life so much since Anni's death. Actually life meant nothing to him, but then this little girl was driving him into relation he couldn't hold back.

He reached mumbai & called Chavi. To his luck Geet answered the call.
For a sec he was startled he didn't know wat to say. She said hello couple of times. She was abt to keep it down, he softly said hello
Geet ' ji
Maan ' actually chavi is been calling me from this number thinking that I am her dad
Geet sighed sadly ' I am really sorry
me & her dad r separated & she is not been able to
..
she chuckled
Maan ' is it ok if I meet her
ussen she would know I am not her father & I can wish her on her bday
only if u don't mind
Geet ' actually I don't think that will be right
I am really sorry.
I will make sure she won't call u again.
I am really sorry abt all this confusion.

After the call Geet called the telephone exchange & disconnected the land line number itself. She told chavi that the phone got spoiled. Chavi was really worried. She didn't know how she was going to reach her papa now. She got really tensed. She went out & called him from the telephone booth.
Papa
Maan looked at the number wondered ' where r u calling from?
Papa ghar ka phone mar gaya
he muffled his laughter at her cute interpretation.
papa how will I call u now?
She started to cry. He didn't know wat to do. He tried to calm her, while trying to reach her place from the address he had got from the telephone exchange.
It was getting dark already.. he was cursing Geet to have let her out alone like this. It took him more than an hr to reach the place. All the while he was on the phone trying to calm her down. The movement the car pulled out near the main entrance of the bank colony.. chavi dropped the reviver down & looked at Maan in awe. She ran towards him .. but couldn't have gone beyond the main gates.
Neither could Maan enter the colony without a valid permission from the visitor he was visiting.


All the while Daadi had seen silently following Maan to know who has brought the life back into his meaningless life. She still didn't step out of the car. She waited for some more time.

Maan was blown away seeing this little chavi!!! she had every thing that touched his heart, his soul.. his eyes moist seeing her in tears.. seeing her fight the barriers to reach him.

The guards called Geet & informed abt the visitor. She came down in no time. She was scared now. The guy who spoke to her on the phone sounded decent..but then...now she had her doubts abt this guy.
All her fear came to reality seeing him there. Every pain he gave her at that tender age was fresh ..& suddenly seem to ooz more blood than ever. She clutched chavi closer to her.. snapping the grip between hands of chavi & Maan. She shouted at chavi & dragged her in.
Maan didn't understand anything. Geet Khurana!!!...
she is brij's sister.. his anger had no bound. Chavi was her daughter. Was she playing some kind of games with him. They could never have a child together, he never did anything to her. He knew it was one of her brothers & her plans to get back to him. His raged flow of thoughts were disturbed when he heard Daadi shouting for his name holding her heart.
Maan rushed her to the hospital only to discover she suffered a mild heart attack. He regretted leaving Geet alive that night. She should have killed her. He should have. He paced restlessly outside the ICU.
After a while dr let him in to meet Daadi
Daadi ' aapne itni badi baad chupai humse
Maan had no clue wat Daadi was concluding of all this
Daadi ' aapne hume humare per poti se dor rahka
aapka nafrat itna bada hogaya ki aap aapne beti ko bhi nahi baksha
Maan yelped back in horror ' wo humari beti nahi Daadi ma
Daadi ' Maan she cried feeling shameful abt her own grandsons deed.
Dr rushed in & checked daadi's dropping pulse & requested Maan to calm down.
Dr ' plz aap unse aise koi baat mat kijiyen
Daadi mumbled .. her only will to meet her grt grand child.

Maan was fuming in anger. How dare brij & his sister do anything to his family. Not this time..not again... he is not going to let them have their way. He managed to find out geets office address. He walked straight into her cabin with his body guards waiting outside.
Wat the hell to u want?? money is that wat ur looking for??
I should have killed u that night
he roared.
Her cabin was dark glassed.. thank god his voice couldn't be reached ..neither his mean actions.
Just leave us alone she barked in hatred
oh really he grabbed from the arms gritting close to her ears
she pushed him away in disgust
I don't see u disgusted calling urself Khurana.. he tried to force a hug. He hated every bit of her closeness.. her touch..
her skin repelled feeling his touch
he snapped away.. tum se wohi ghin aati hain
he spat leaving his mark on her neck..pulling off her selves. She pulled up her selves & saress pallo & slapped him. She called the police ' he laughed louder
I should have done this that day
he laughed devilishly .. why didn't u then??
she looked away not bothering to answer him. She informed the police & cut the call.
U didn't then.. because u wanted to play this game with me now!!!
using ur daughter to trap me. She slapped him again.. not a word abt Chavi she warned pointing her finger at him.
I guess the last part.
-PREV PART 3 NEXT LAST PART-
Please sweeties leave me ur lovely comments & likes
lots of love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago

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