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Posted: 13 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Eowyn

Jaldhi shuru karo badi bhabhiji...jaldhi!
Aur haan ek aur baath, I am in love with the most important character of this ff ;-)

me too shona...will be updating soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: geetsweet

waiting 4r update update soon

Will be updating soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: monika1992

Congo fr new ff dear
waiting fr update

Originally posted by: megh_piyashi

congrats 4 new FF
do continue soon

Originally posted by: -maankimishti-

interesting

continue soon

Originally posted by: divareena

nice concept. keep me on the pm list

Originally posted by: Miss-Riz

nice concept continue soon :)

Originally posted by: maansee

nice story seems... continue soon

Thanks😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Thanks for the liking and commenting as it always motivates me ...So here I go with the first chapter ...

Chapter-1

A young man was sleeping when he got disturbed by a
cacophonic sound which was actually a song which his friend was singing while coming to his room...

He said while throwing a pillow on him"Abey oye please band kar apna gardhav raag"(please stop your cacophonic song)
His friend replied"Maan meri jaan ,get up yaar I have a news
for you"
Maan covered his ear with a pillow and gave an unsuccessful
try to ignore his friend Adi as he was hell bent to convey the
news to him...
Adi said"If you will not wake up now then I will call manisa...and after that you would be responsible for what will happen next"
Maan wakes up at once and shouted"No...for god sake ,don't
call him please"
Adi started laughing and managed to say"You are scared of
only one person in this whole world"
Maan said"Abey yaar ,he just wants a chance to flirt with
me"
Adi said"Abey don't worry ...since the day we made him tie
rakhi on your hand he doesnot see you in that manner but like a brother"
Maan"Whatever...now tell what news you had come to tell me?"

Adi"Oh yeah ...today college will be resume after vacations
and"
Maan interrupted"Dude...wait I am not going to college
today...as there won't be any important class today besides those girls will stare at me as if I am a fat free burger"
Adi"Kya yaar...they would
be waiting for you...since so many days they were strving to have your single glimpse but I had not come to say this ...I have a news that will make you jump off from bed and you will leave to get ready"
Maan"Huh nothing can move me away from my bed "
Adi"Ok I had come here to tell you that if you remember
Princy had announced before vacations that he will make new sitting arrangements for the final year students ...though you are not interested I thought to inform you that now Nidhi
will be sitting with you"
And the next moment Maan was out of his bed and rushed to
washroom...In ten minutes he was out all ready for going to college
Adi teased"But you were not going today"
Maan"Yeah ,I thought you are right atleast those girls deserve
a glimpse of mine after such a long wait"
Adi asked "They or you of nidhi?"
Maan replied "aisi koi baat nahi hai...Why her presence/absence will affect me ...haan,Princy,you know today that old chap will address us we should be there na"
Adi"haan..I can understand he will not start his lecture
without you afterall tu toh uska hone wala damad(son-in law) hai na"
A voice came from behind"Uski toh koi beti hi nahi hai
otherwise I would have known for sure"
Maan "Yash my casanova...he is pulling my leg"
Yash"Dude don't do this kind of joke ,you know my heart is
so much sensitive when it comes to girl...I cannot bear that there is any girl left in college with whom I have not flirted"
Adi "Nahin yaar you have yet not flirted with Kamla and
Vimla bai"
Yash "Teri toh I was talking about girls not aunty ji"
Maan"Abey means you would have flirted with them too if they
would have been young"
Yash"Who knows?"

Adi"Sudhar ja beta if you will keep on going this way then
you are not going to get any girl"
Yash "bhasan na de ...I am not like you who is in love with
Pinky since the day 1 but whenever she tries to come close to you,you make some excuse and runs away"

Maan had enough of their fight besides he was really eager
to meet Nidhi who knows he may get lucky today and she talks with him sweetly for a change so he dragged his friends and drove off to college...
S.d"Maan...maan"
Nakul"Madam ,Adi and yash sir had come he went to college
with them,you were busy in a conference call so maan baba had told me to inform you"
S.d"But he had told me that he wont go to college today...ye
Maan bhi na"
At college

As Nidhi entered she witnessed the same sight she was seeing
since the day 1 (oh sorry day2)of college...All girls were looking at gate as if prime minister was going to pass from there ...Some girls were holding rose bouquets and there she was, her friend Pinky..She was also looking at main
entrance but there was a slight difference in her than others she was waiting for Adi,that idiot's friend
Nidhi hugged her and said while settling herself beside her"I don't understand why you keep on drooling
on him?..just go and tell him what you feel for him"
Pinky" Arrey yaar,I don't have problem in saying but for
that he needs to listen to me whenever I start talking about my feelings,he makes excuse and runs away..I guess he is not interested in me"
Nidhi"He is the biggest idiot in this world if he is not interested in you,my doll"
Pinky"So toh hai...And congo you are going to sit with
Maan from today onwards"
Nidhi made a face and said"What's great in that?"

Pinky"Tu bhi na...every girl dreams to talk to him and you
are getting a chance to sit with him...bechara whenever he tries to talk to you...you just ignore him"
Nidhi"Because he always showoff...bechare Visu ko kitna
mara"
Pinky"Uss khote Viswas ki baat na kar...He is a leech"
Nidhi"He is good ,he behaves so politely...He not even
complained against Maan and when I was going to he stopped me and said he forgave Maan but you all believe Maan because he is hero in your eyes"
Pinky"You are naive Nidhi, you trust anyone easily...Maan
was not wrong ,he saved Sonia from him...Viswas did not let you complain against Maan because Viswas himself was at
fault"
Nidhi"Nahi aisi baat..."
Pinky interrupted" Let it be as much as I know you had no
problem with Maan since that incident and now I am not gonna argue with you on this matter as time will tell who was right and for now (smiles) my janiya has come so I am going to meet him"
Pinky pulled Adi away and said"Aaj toh kafi smart lag rahe
ho"
Adi blushed and then laughed"he he he...Thanks ,these days I
am doing yoga na...you know it keeps the body fit and active,you should also do yoga to keep uourself fit"
Pinky "Tumne mujhe mota kaha"
Adi chocked and replied"Maine kab?...no,I didn't mean that...infront of you Aiswarya is also nothing"
Pinky blushed"Really"
He smiled at her(st) nahi kehke mrna hai kya
Pinky"O teri I had come to tell you my plan"
She said something in his ear and went away
In cafeteria
Nidhi and Pinky were going out and from other side Maan and
Adi were coming in...Adi pushed Maan and he collided with Nidhi
Nidh shouted "You idiot...I wont leave you ,how dare you"
Everyone stopped to see the free show
Maan calmly apologised"I am sorry...by mistake"
Nidhi didn't let him complete his sentence and shouted"You
did this knowingly...your favourite timepass is to irritate me"
This time Maan shouted back"Look ...it was my mistake so I
asked sorry that does not mean you will start dancing on my head"
Nidhi"I have also no interest in talking to a person like
you"
Maan cornered her against the wall and held her shoulder "What do you mean by a person like me..?What the heck have I done that you keep on blaming me..."
Nidhi pushed him away and replied"So if you want to know I
will tell you...you are a"
A thundering voice came from behind"Stop it both of you"
All students turned towards the source of sound and were
rooted to see Professor Chadda
Professor"This is college not any fish market ...all back
to your classes except Mr.Khurana and Miss Verma"
All students left and Mahi(maan & Nidhi) followed
him quietly
Other side
Adi"This was your plan to get both of them suspended"
Pinky smiled "No"
Adi"Then?"
Pinky "I know Princy very well ,he wont suspend them as it
was their first mistake so they will get a chance but"
Adi"But what and how professor came there exactly that time?"
Pinky smiled"but now if Nidhi tries then also Princy wont
change her seat,she will have to sit with Maan and Professor ,Manisha called him saying that two students are fighting and he also added that its not new as they don't leave
any chance to fight...so"
Adi"oh...You are evil"

Pinky "nothing is evil if its for good ...Adi,I wanted to say
something to you that I...I L"
Adi interrupted"Maan came out from Princy's office I am
going to meet him"
Pinky"Phir bhag gaya...ladki mai hoon sharmata ye hai"

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Please ignore the typos and do share your views...
Edited by sur001 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
why hello miss surbhi I hope you remember me 😉 Hey sweetheart !!! How are you ? I just read this chapter and I loved it 😃 whooaaa Maan and Adi; gotta give them props 😆 you're one of the finest writers I know hun so keep up the great job 😃 (btw its me , niya2121 from BBAT forum😛)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
thanks😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: NiyaluvsArhi

why hello miss surbhi I hope you remember me 😉 Hey sweetheart !!! How are you ? I just read this chapter and I loved it 😃 whooaaa Maan and Adi; gotta give them props 😆 you're one of the finest writers I know hun so keep up the great job 😃 (btw its me , niya2121 from BBAT forum😛)

Hello Miss Shauveniya...but my dear Niya I havenot forgotten you ...how can I yaar !
I am fine ...how are you?...seeing you online after a long time...
Thanks sweety...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Awesome update waitinggg next part. thx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
awesome update...

yeh nidhi kahanse agayi?where's my geet?i dont want anyone b/w maan n geet...i cant tolerate...

thank u fr d lovely update n also fr d pm...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb update dear 😳

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