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anjalisen85

@anjalisen85

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Posted: 12 years ago

#821

nice ff👏👏

update epilouge please😭😭

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sona rai

@sona-rai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#822

i'll try to write epilogue,is it OK

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sona rai

@sona-rai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#823

EPILOGUE

AFTER 2 YEARS...

a cute 8 month old baby was sitting on her dinning chair with tears in her big eyes and gulping down her baby food,

Geet;;;;;; oye khabardar jo yeh badi badi ankhoon main ansoo le ker mujhay patanay ki koshish ki chup chap sab khana paray ga diya.

DADI;;;;;;;;;geet betay she's only a little child app usay kya bol rahay ho?

GEET;;;;;;;dadi dekhiye na iski ankhain bilkul maan jaisi hain badi badi(wowww geet 😆)woh ghoor ghoor ker daratay hain aur yeh ansoo dikha ker mujhay patan chah rahi hai..

saying that geet shoved another spoon of baby food in dia's mouth.

ME HOMEEE ...

the voice came and everything changed in seconds.

geet and dadi ma was shocked to see maan back home earlier and princess diya started crying loudly hearing her DAD'S voice.

hearing diya's loud cries maan rushed to her and try to pick her when geet shouted,

Nooo don't u dare pick her up mr khurana

Maan;;;;;;;;;;;;; wattt r u out of ur mind geet my princess is crying and u r stopping me to carry her

Geet;;;;;;;;;; yes she was crying b'cause of u.

Maan;;;;;;;;;wat have i done?i just came from office geet.

Geet;;;;;;;;;; haan to jaldi kyun ayai?

maan was stunned to hear that,diya also stopped crying and now enjoying her parents fight with her fist in her mouth,dadi was also enjoying a lot and really wana know wat's in geets mind.

maan came close to geet

and said

Maan;;;;;;;;;;; i'm home early and how can it makes my daughter crying?plzzz can u tell me MRS KHURRANA

Geet;;;;;;;;;;;;SIMPLE i was making her eat her food and she don't wana eat but still i'm managing and there u came and she started to do her drama

abb batayo kaisay khilayaoon isay khana?

Maan picked diya in his arms and said,

rehnay do i'll make her eat properly and went to bedroom with diya in his one arm and her food bowl in hand.

Geet;;;;;;;;;;dekha dadi ma abhi ffice se ayae hain aur beti ke laad shru.

Dad;;;;;;;;;;i'm so happy for u and maan geet may god always bless u.

geet smiled widely and hugged dadi

MAANEET ROOM

after some time geet entered with coffee's mug in her hand for maan.she saw maan was sleeping on his rest chair and diya is peacefully sleeping on maan's chest.

geet smiled on that scene and slowly picked diya from maan's chest and make her sleep properly on bed.

TO BE CONTINUED

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sona rai

@sona-rai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#824

EPILOGUE PART2

Geet came near maan and slowly touches his cheek

maan opened his eyes and saw geet

Maan;;;;;;;;;kya hua?diya kahan hai?

Geet;;;;;;;;; woh i put her on bed,u r tired na i brought cofee for u.

Maan;;;;;;;;; geet.wat happened why u r looking so emotional?

hearing that geet huged maan tightly

maan was surprised but stay calm and asked again

"wat happened mishti"

Geet;;;;;;;;;;nothing serious maan wen i saw u and diya sleeping peacefully i got emotional,i love u so much thanks a lot for coming in my life.

maan make geet sit in his lap and said

"no geet its me who is thankfull to u,u forgave me,u loved me and gave me the best thing i ever got OUR DIYA so thanks a lot mishti

and maaneet kissed eachother with love.

after some time both feel some thing moving on there legs

both break the kiss and bend to see wat is it and both shouted same time

MAAANNN

GEEETTT

dadi came running after hearing screem and shocked to see geet and maan standing and diya sitting near there legs.

Maan;;;;;;;;;geet wat is diya doing here

Geet;;;;;;;;;; yeh apni badi badi ankhain dikha ker mujhay kyun dara rahay ho?mujhay kya pata yahan kaisay ayai

Dadi;;;;;;;;;;; chup ahiye app dono.bachi hai bed se utar ker agayai hogi but app dono kahan khoye huay thay jo pata nahi chala?

Maan;;;;;;;;;bolo geet dadi khuch pooch rahi hain

geet was shocked to hear that

Geet(s.t);;;;;;;dekha babaji yeh maan kitnay dusht danav hain chadoo dadi ko kya boloon?

Geet;;;;;;; awww woh dadi yeh MAAN hai na mujhay tang ker rahay thay to mujhay dhyan nahi raha

now its maan's turn to be shocked

Maan;;;;;;;;; wattt mainay kya kiya?

dadi laughed loudly and said

"its ok hum app se khuch nahi pooch rahay but zara hosh main raha kijiye diya badi ho rahi hai dhayan rakha kijiye"

dadima left with diya in her arms.

both maaneet hugged eachother again with love and promise to be with eachother always

THE END

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bindu

@bangalores

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#825

finally the epilogue😃
lovely Sona..2 years one child and the nok jhok is still alive😆

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sona rai

@sona-rai

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#826

Originally posted by: abinash079
lovely epilogue

THANKS YAR😃

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sona rai

@sona-rai

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#827

Originally posted by: bangalores
finally the epilogue😃
lovely Sona..2 years one child and the nok jhok is still alive😆

thanks yar😃

god bindu u make me an WRITER😳😆

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#828

lovely epilogue, thanks sona for your pm 😊

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sona rai

@sona-rai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#829

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag
awesome epilogue

thanks a lot yar😃

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#830

wow!that was a cute epilogue..
loved their cute nhok jhok..

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