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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome and very interesting idea yaar...

please continue...

I can't write but eagerly waiting to read the story...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wowww yaro me in muahhh BINDU&AASH 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@Bindu - nice idea dear...
start the update...
and dont forget ur FFs...
thanks for the pm hun...

@Aashu - phir se NPM?
sudhar ja Mrs. Aashu NP...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Grrr
biindu i cant see ur NPM
@deepa...kamini tu kya doodh ki dhuli hui hai?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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posting in half an hour😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Koi likha bhi raha hai ya sab sirf awesome bolenge..
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Originally posted by: bangalores

posting in half an hour😃

waiting..
waise why isnt aashu the one who writes next since i see her stalking😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sounds fun to me!!😃

Excited...UPDATE!...UPDATE!!!😆


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mchopra

waiting..
waise why isnt aashu the one who writes next since i see her stalking😳



aashu gave the 1st pic...
posting soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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here goes part 1:

with the intro...


Meet Maan Singh Khurana, the heir to Khurana Constructions. A perfect playboy, who believes himself to be God's gift to women. While his wealth and family name in itself was enough to draw women towards him like moth to flame, Almighty seemed to be over indulgent while he was etching Maan by presenting him with killer looks and an intelligence to top it all. But since we need to give Maan credit for something, we will have to grand it to him for the discipline with which he works out to own a well-toned body and the sharp wit he possessed. Also don't forget the devotion he applies to keep himself from getting caught in the drudges of life. What better way to spice up life than being ready to accept challenges especially if it comes in the form of a new girl every month. To him nothing was unattainable, nothing could be impossible which he loved to demonstrate by conquering the challenges put before him by his friends. This was the same driving force that made him the topper in his batch, the aspirant gold medallist for his college, AnD College of Architecture, Delhi.





Geet Handa , you could say was the feminine version of Maan Singh Khurana. Belonging to an affluent family in Mumbai which had its roots in hoshiarpur. She is the princess of the Handa Empire. The Handa's believed that the place of women in family was to look pretty and the only thing that they needed to know was to be a successful wife and mother. But they were forced to change this attitude by the influence of one strong willed girl, Miss Geet Handa. The apple of her Grandpa's eyes, she was given permission to continue her education with the solemn promise that she would do nothing to break the trust that was entrusted in her. Her love for all things beautiful and the drive to liven up the world thru a woman's perception made her an architecture student. With the warning of Darji hanging like a Damocles sword Geet was extra careful not to fall into the honeyed trap called love. But her aloofness, added with her beauty and wealth made the boys try extra hard to gain a second glance from her. Her resistance to all made her nothing less than a conquest to win in VS College of Architecture , Mumbai.





The Annual NASA Meet held in Mumbai:

rishi: "So Maan you finally did decide to participate in the meet."

maan: "I was kind of getting bored with you guys gone... And I needed a break."

Abhi: "Break? From what?"

Rishi:"Do you even need to ask... I guess the one month quota of Miss Deekshit is up!"

Abhi: "And our evergreen Majnu is in the look out for the next!" They all laughed.

Dev: "Probably in fresh pastures too... delhi mein ladkiyam kam pad gayi kya ki ab Mumbai mei aa gaya?"

Maan looked at the new fellow who had joined his friends.

"Hi Maan I've heard such a lot about you" the guy offered his hand, "I'm Dev , Rishi's cousin."

Maan: "Yeah I remember Rishi talking about you. You are from VSC right?" Maan asked shaking his hand.

Dev : "Yep! Your host at your service."

The meet also provided entertainment for the students by encouraging stage performances and competitions. It was in one such debate that Maan's eye caught the beautiful girl who managed to impress him with her fiery debate on empowering women. He was informed that she was Miss Geet Handa, VSC's star student...who excelled in anything she took interest in. His interest escalated on knowing her nick name, 'Hot Ice!' and the reason behind it.

He couldn't keep his eyes of her...the way she swayed and gyrated to the music made the auditorium echo with in roars of appreciation and whistles... and what a song to dance to

http://www.lyricsmasti.com/song/7456/get_lyrics_of_Sheila-Ki-Jawani.html

I know you want it
But you never gonna get it
Tere haath kabhi na aani
Maane na maane koi duniya
Yeh saari, mere ishq ki hai deewani

Hey hey,

I know you want it but you never gonna get it
Tere haath kabhi na aani

Maane na maane koi duniya yeh saari
Mere ishq ki hai deewani
Ab dil karta hai haule haule se
Main toh khud ko gale lagaun
Kisi aur ki mujhko zaroorat kya
Main toh khud se pyaar jataun

What is any wonder that some of the hot blooded guys wanted to join her in the stage

Silly silly silly silly boys
O o o you're so silly
Mujhe bolo bolo karte hain
O o o
Haan jab unki taraf dekhun, baatein haule haule karte hain
Hai magar, beasar mujh par har paintra

Haye re aise tarse humko

Ho gaye sober se re
Sookhey dil pe megapan ke teri nazariya barse re
I know you want it but you never gonna get it


But she took it all in the stride... dancing with them without letting them touch her...


Tere haath kabhi na aani
Sheela
Sheela ki jawani
I'm just sexy for you
Main tere haath na aani
Na na na sheela
Sheela ki jawani
I'm just sexy for you
Main tere haath na aani

Paisa gaadi mehnga ghar
?ani na mainu ki gimme your that
Jaibein khaali bhadti chal
No no I don't lie like that


Chal yahan se nikal tujhe sab laa dunga

Kadmon mein tere laake jag rakh dunga
Khwaab main kar dunga poore
Na rahenge adhoore
You know I'm going to love you like that, whatever

Haye re aise tarse humko

Ho gaye sober se re
Sookhey dil pe begapan ke teri nazariya barse re

once the dancers started to get too close they were shoed away by her friends


I know you want it but you never gonna get it
You never gonna get my body
I know you want it but you never gonna get it
Tere haath kabhi na aani
Maane na maane koi duniya yeh saari
Tere ishq ki main deewani

Ab dil karta hai haule haule se

Main toh khud ko gale lagaun

Kisi aur ki mujhko zaroorat kya
Main toh khud se pyaar jataun

What's my name

What's my name
What's my name

Maan entered the stage ...she spared him a glance but continued her dance...

My name is Sheela

Sheela ki jawani
I'm just sexy for you
Main tere haath na aani

She accepted him dancing with her. Maan but in his distance giving her the confidence that he was not interested in touching her. She moved closer to him entertaining the audience with the show of trying to tease him.

O no no sheela
Sheela ki jawani
I'm just sexy for you
Main tere haath na aani
Sheela
Sheela ki jawani
I'm just sexy for you
Main tere haath na aani

He made a move as if to grab her...but with the intention of letting her know it was just a show.

Ain't nobody got body like sheela

Everybody want body like sheela
Drive me crazy coz my name is sheela
Ain't nobody got body like sheela
Everybody want body like sheela
Drive me crazy coz my name is sheela
Ain't nobody got body like sheela

As the music stopped Maan moved closer to Geet, cupped her face in his hands and pressed his mouth to the corner of her lips for a kiss that had her stunned with shock.




The auditorium fell dead silent for a second and then echoed with resounding cheer. The next instant the silence was reinstated with the sound of the slap.

now the next pic...too easy i think...



the next person who wants to take over please announce so that there will be no confusion...


Edited by bangalores - 13 years ago

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