'Devil's Desire' Thrd5.New Note Pg150 - Page 13

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow... awesome update dear...
loved it...
the last lines of the update are really true n loved it...
continue soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago

devil is 2222222222222hwt 2 handle

but hv morals his wait for 6months👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh oh ...what can i say...about your sooo creative mind annie👏 👏 👏

i will faint one day for sure after reading those lines of your's in your stories...

you are rendering me speechless day by day...

do you want me to not to give you comments (that too long one)?????

well i will comment and give you the claps for your superb mind...👏 👏 👏

coming to update...maan is not only a desirous devil but clever too...

he knows how to prove himself correct and others wrong at the same time...

geet was like giving her competition by saying He told me to sleep here but he didn't tell me that I can't sit here.

I will just sit here whole night..! No way.. I am not going to sleep with him


but our devil was too smart than her,as he saw her getting down he threw her warnings😆

and awww...geet was left with no other option 😭

maan's line was so true and touchy technically you are the only girl with whom I slept whole night.👏 👏

hmm...ok am not gonna say too much about those creative lines of yours that were about lies (coz if i start then there will be ending of praises or not ,i don't know) so better i keep my mouth shut ...😊

just will say every thing maan spoke about trurth and lie was 100 percent true

and his lines This is how this world is. Truth is too bitter to bear and lie is too sweet to hear. were so true...

and oh this And one more bitter truth is that you can't leave this job for next six months ...i was like oh oh poor geet😭

and lastly hawww...he lied to her about that video thing??????

loved his thoughts...Lie.. A small lie and everything becomes so easy. He smiled sarcastically. You are a fool to believe my lie that I would have your video made in that condition of yours and bigger fool to believe that I would let anyone see that even if it had existed in the first place.

But lie is indeed powerful.


how can she trust him after what he said to her few moments ago about lies and all????? oh girl grow up!!!!!!!!


aww maan is caring towards her as he can't share her video with any one 😆


i guess its enough for one update😆


thnx for pm


continue soon


love rose😉






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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing work😳 Maan devil
😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow!! too good update... its surely looking like a game plan!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow... Fab again aniee 😊 Lie is indeed powerful 😃 thx 4 the pm ❤️ update soon.. Tk cr..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part.
Simply superb.
Wat a grt explanation of importance of ''lie''. So tru
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Posted: 13 years ago
congrats on the new thread..
Awesome update...
awww maan lied abt the video..
hmmm wonder wht geet is planning...
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part...loving this maan...update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update..
Can't wait to see what is geet's plan

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