'Devil's Desire' Thrd5.New Note Pg150

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Shimmerr

@Shimmerr

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

plzzz continue soon dear!!
waiting for more!!

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nikki.171

@nikki.171

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#112

Brilliant ...

This is Maan Singh Khurana- The Devil. 😈 One who knows how to benefit himself at da cost of others ! One the other hand is innocent Geet whi desperately wants to believe in love.😍

In some way both characters represents their gender in theri OWn way. Lust and Love, two very powerful emotions merged into a story. And how each affects the other.

Annie, u came up wid a beautiful idea. 👏 One that is of significance in today's world. And the best part is dat, in ur stories ur dialouges are very Powerful.

Update ASAP.

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kkiddoo

@kkiddoo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

wow amazing 👍🏼

i was shocked first when he said he have a video and he will publish it but then i love it when he said in his mind that it was a lie 😉he is a real devil he know how to turn the table i am now eagerly waiting to see what geet is going to do 😉

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Mishu

@-Mishu-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#114

omg di
Wat an update!
Awesome !
I just love dis devil

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fantesy

@fantesy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#115

awsuuum update... indeed lie is mor powerful then truth...continue soon..

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JayaR

@JayaR

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#116

omg he is so cruel...

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#117

amazing update...

Annie from where u think of such intense dialogues...

Maan is thinking the feeling towards Geet is lust but he don't understand he is in love with her...he is devil...whole night Geet was with him alone...he can take advantage...if he can tell other lies than he can break the bet also...who can stop him...but he didn't...he cares for her approval...why...

and the best is last dialogue----
You are a fool to believe my lie that I would have your video made in that condition of yours and bigger fool to believe that I would let anyone see that even if it had existed in the first place.

waiting for next update...thanx for pm...