'Removed' - Page 12

Superb update sneha
you done great job
it was such a beautiful ending....
TOO GOOD AWESOME!!!!


thanx for beautiful story!

awsome dear...

THE ENDING WAS JUST TOO BEAUTIFUL... I HAVE NO WORDS TO EXPRESS MY FEELING...😊

awesome loved it and poem toh👍🏼 totally loved it

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How sweet ... very nice ⭐️

Loved the update.

Sneha di...
Claps claps claps 4 u...
Hands n heads dwn...
A beautiful endin to a beautiful SS..
Truly.. I am sooo in love wd dis SS... Truly one of my favs..

Okay coming to dis update..
Umm.. I loved evrythin.. Wer do i start from...

Umm.. Ok.. U knw.. I thot Maan wil confess at their dinner thingi...
But no.. Again u proved me rong.. U hd sumthn betta in store... 😉

I loved d way u showed their emotions n their feelings.. It really touched my heart...
Lyk u knw.. Dey wer silent bcz dey didnt want to brk dwn infronta each other...
U knw wen Maan said.. 'May I hv dis last dance wid you Cherry'.. Omg.. Trust me.. Along wd Geet.. It pierced my heart 2..
Their pain sooo came out to me thru ur writing... Their sadness wd cuttin thru my heart rlly..

I loved Maan wen he ws wipin Geet's tears.. Askin her nt to do dat as she knws he cnt see tears in her eyes..
N i felt lyk sayin.. Den grab hr budhhu.. She wnt cry... Hehehhehe...

Den i sooo loved their confession... D dialogues of their confession ws sooo beautiful... I abolutely adored it Sneha di...
D way.. Those few wrds let out their feelings dat dey hd sustained 4 so long ws wonderfully written...

N yeah.. A Biggg Thank u to u.. 4 using my poetry n using it sooo brilliantly...

Ok.. My last poem 4 dis beautiful piece of ur wrk..

Feelings I sustained
Finally I let it out
Love I harboured
Finally I let it to its true heart..!!

Now your in my arms
Under my love forever
Guiding our love
Is our almighty up there..!!

Love u so so so sooo much Sneha di...
Loadza hugs n kisses...