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Posted: 13 years ago
alovely update
hope geet will
never leave maan

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! interesting...
so coz of angel geet is in humanbeing body...
looking fwd...

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Posted: 13 years ago
hahhaaa H really deserved that slap
ghost ghosts scary
cont. soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks 4 the pm dear it was really nice & interesting...
plzz continue
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Posted: 13 years ago

First of all sorry for the late comments now I am commenting on all parts together

PART 1

Love at first site hmm… but b4 Maan could talk to her Geet went away

He met her at the ice cream parlor but Geet did not show any interest poor Maan is restless

Wow Annie is Geet's friend me so happy but Geet's picture is not clear in the photographs hmm…FF ka title dekhkar aisa lag raha hai k maybe Geet is a ghost oh no babaji aisa na ho

Maan is going to meet Geet dekhthe hai aage kya hotha hai

PART 2

Banyan tree , dog, not ready to pose for photos kuch dabad hai boss I feel geet is a ghost

The most important part was that her saree got converted to a suit that means I am right

Maan i don't know how will u react after knowing the truth

PART 3

Oh feeling bad for Geet she loves him but she can't tell him the truth

Maan that was not a joke Geet indeed is a ghost haye kuch miracle ho jaaye babaji

Suicide point I dunno why but I feel it has some significance

Ok my stupid guess what if Maan somehow figured out that Geet is a ghost and just to stay with her forever he committed suicide otherwise why did he stop the car at suicide point I feel there is some mystery in this part okay let me go to the next chapter

Part 4

Maaneet r married so I was right Geet is a ghost but I don't know why I still can't get over from that suicide point episode it has a significant role and today the way maan said I won't let u go anywhere …

Hmm… so maan k khilaf planning chal rahi hai

PART 5

Maan was scared but Geet gave the name dream to the entire incident hmm… good all the enemies r no more but that means Geet has to leave very soon but still I am sure there is a mystery hehe u might b thinking I am mad but still SUICIDE POINT is still forcing me to think why would maan leave geet alone for some time and go to the suicide point

PART 6

Oh my my Maan loves her so much poor Maan geet k jaane k baad kya hoga uska

Wind is giving her signals that very soon some magician is going to come and trap her

Hrishalab k saath aisa hi hona chahiye tha hehe

Really curious to know the next part

Continue soon

Love u -Piya

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

A sweet ghost Part 7

Hridayshalab told dadima and Annie that Geet is a ghost.
D:What are you saying?
A:Rubbish!
H:If you believe me or not i have called Chandranayan Swamy to do puja here.He will get rid of the ghost from Geet's body.
He went out.
Maan came.
Dadima:Maan...Hriday is saying that Geet is a ghost.He is bringing Chandranayan Swamy to do puja.
M:What rubbish!You agreed?
D:I don't want to bring Swamy here.But if i tell Swamy not to do puja here he will be insulted.
M:Ok.Let Swamy come.But only I and Geet will be there for puja.Dadima..if you attend the puja you will be scared.But one thing.I will not allow Swamy to hurt Geet physically to get rid of the so- called Ghost.
Geet who just reached there was stunned.She was scared.
She started crying.Maan,Dadima and Annie felt sad for Geet.
G:So you all are tagging me as a ghost.
M:No Geet.Nothing like that.We know you very well.But we can't stop Swamy.It will be like insulting him.But Swamy will understand that you have no problem.If he hurts you i will not leave him alone.
Geet thought:I should not get scared of puja.Because i am not a ghost who did'nt return on time.I have some more time left.Our Queen gave me this body to live in this world.I am not a ghost who did not return even after taking revenge.So they cannot harm me.But Maan may know that i am a ghost.It should not happen.


Geet is at the pool side.She saw rain drops pouring down.
Geet kept looking at it.Maan came out of the pool.He carried her in his arms.
He led her to the rain.They stared at each other's eyes.

They had sweet romantic moments in the rain.

Puja...
Chandranayan Swamy and Hridayshalab were sitting together.On the opposite side Maan and Geet were sitting.Geet's soul entered Swamy's body.Surprusingly Geet's body was in the sitting position itself.
Swamy:You don't need to sit here.You can go.
M:I can't leave my innocent wife alone and go.
Geet's soul entered her body again.
G:Maan..you go.There won't be any problem.
M:But Geet..
G:I told you..don't worry.Don't object swamy.
He left.
Hriday:Swamy...a ghost has entered Geet's body.Right?
Swamy observed Geet's eyes.
S:No.No ghost has entered her body.She is a real ghost.
H:What?
Suddenly Geet turned into a ghost draped in white saree.Her shining eyes scared both of them.Fire disappeared.Darkness spread.Light came from Geet's body.
G:Yes,i am a ghost.What do you know about ghosts?There are two kinds of ghosts.The souls which were not able to come back to the world again through re birth have to live as a ghost in the land of ghosts.They are very sad for not getting a life again as a human being.But their Queen give them the permission to stay on the earth for some time.They stay in banyan tress.Since they stay on earth with consent they can enter temples.They don't have to be scared of God.They have very soft heart like flowers.But they won't leave criminals simply.The human beings who get murdered by criminals come back to earth as ghosts without the permission of their Queen to take revenge.Taking revenge is their duty.But even after completing their duty if they don't return on time our Queen won't accept them.The ghosts which come to earth without permission from their Queen are scared of God and so they can't enter temples.I am a soul from the land of ghosts who was longing for a life as a human being.Not only me,my father also.We both came back to earth after many centuries with our Queen's consent.She gave us human bodies also.Since i can't stay in this world for a long time i tried to avoid Maan.But i could'nt ignore him.This is destiny.Centuries back i was Maan's wife.That's why i am destined to be his wife now.
Geet became more angry.
G:I will reveal a truth.Nadesh uncle's death was not due to an iccident.My snake killed him.
They were shocked.
G:Because he and Hriday tried to kill Maan for wealth.
Hriday was shocked that their plan was known by Geet.
H:Geet...dad had tried to kill Maan.But i never tried to kill him.
G:Because you don't have the courage to do that.Not because you are good at heart.
Hriday was silent.Chandranayan was shivering.
G:And you Mr.Chandranayan Swamy..you have tortured a lot of poor girl convincing others that ghosts have entered their bodies.Now are you scared of a real ghost like me?
Geet's face became scary.They ran.The fire which vanished appeared again and it followed them.They got burnt and turned into ashes.
Geet's face became normal.But still in the white saree.
Her eyes became wet:It's time for me to return.
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh no...geet will be returning...

hope queen gives her permission to stay back...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh my god now Geet will have to return to her place...😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it
waiting to know abt the end
hope her queen gives her permission to be with her maan forever

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